Lady Is Fierce

The historical novel is forcedly written with the feeling of a house fight, it is petty, the plot arrangement is blunt, the protagonist's encounters are deliberately arranged, and the character creation is okay in some cases. Not recommended for those who like historical novels, because the setting and plot are nonsense Not recommended for those who like official novels, the main plot is about detectives and both emperors are having a house fight Not recommended for those who like cool novels, the author wants to write refreshing novels but will arrange plots where the protagonist suffers br>I don't recommend reading it if you don't like cool articles, as I said the author wants to write cool articles I don't recommend reading it if you want to read detective stories, because the detectives start to fight against the officialdom as they go The author has some writing skills, and the beginning is not bad, but in the recent update, I no longer know what he is writing. If I can finish this book, I can wait until I finish it to find out if there is anything worth reading, but it is not worth reading at the moment.

The case was poorly written, a bit sloppy, and the plot development was a bit messy. It was like watching a current TV show, and one person was forced to develop the plot. The little beggar was written very abruptly at the beginning, and then died in a very bland way, including the little madman in the back. Well, he died suddenly. The little beggar died hastily. The little madman can survive for so many years. Your protagonist died as soon as he came, just because of a case that was just like a joke? And use it to shape the image of the protagonist? To warm up the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine? I thought the little lunatic was some kind of hidden thread, and used it to write about the past. Good guy, he died so unjustly. In addition, if you focus on writing about cases, you should write about the case, mixed with clumsy emotions. If the case is not written well, the emotional line will also be lost. When the case is not so attractive, the emotional line is also not attractive. People write the heroine to choose a certain point to shape and have personality. This heroine is really a young lady template. I don't see any advantages. Broken Emotions arise from each case. I feel that this is very cheap, because this emotion is made out of nothing. I feel uncomfortable when I see it. The reason why I say it is cheap is that a woman came and agreed after begging, and then forced the protagonist to take care of it. After two or three cases were solved, my eyes were filled with stars. This emotional line was born from a third-party case, right? My expectations were high.

It feels a bit ridiculous. My father got involved in the rebellion and was exterminated. After the extermination of the clan, he was left alone. This can be reconciled. You were convicted of treason after serving as an official, but your ancestral property was not confiscated, and you were still able to serve as an official and go to Dali Temple. The historical background is even more related to the Northern Song Dynasty, haha.

Your father rebelled and you returned to Beijing?

I watched the latest one in one go, overall good, but the Xiaohua incident made me sad. The protagonist bought her life with 3 taels of silver, and then earned 500 taels to the welfare home. I personally disliked this story, so I can only say goodbye 🙂

In the second case, the judgment of right and wrong was extreme. The adulterer killed his lover's husband and blamed someone else. The murderer had already killed an innocent person and almost killed an innocent person. He committed a serious crime that took two lives. The protagonist was only sentenced to 10 years because of his inner justice. Because the adulterer and his lover were in love, the deceased deserved to die.

Subjective intention, malicious frame-up, and things that cannot be justified no matter what, they can all make up for the murderer. If he does things alone and takes responsibility for others, I respect him as a man, so what if he involves innocent people. The law tolerates emotions, and the law tolerates emotions. So I would like to ask where is the justice for the innocent people who have been wronged? Where is his love?

How should I put it? It feels like Ding Zhen is reading a composition. The article is correct, but there are always problems with the tone and wording. I suggest the author to read "Undersea Walker" and learn from it. It's the same type of novel, but the background is different.

Adultery, premeditated murder, framed innocent people, sentenced to ten years

The writing around Chapter 40 is not bad, but it is obvious that this book is focused on plot. The peak period is basically in the middle and late stages. Let's see if the author can write it by then 😃 The plot rhythm is too tight, and lack of foreshadowing means a short climax. The others are not visible yet, but for now, they are worth a look.

It's the type I like. To commemorate the wave

The writing is pretty good, and the crime solving is pretty good, but I still have to ask, single girl or multiple girls?

The writing is okay. In Chapter 3, can the son of the protagonist, a rebel, also become an official?

In the first case, can blank paper be used as evidence?

How long will it take to get married? I was deceived by the introduction. After flipping through the catalog, it seems that there are all cases?

To be honest, it feels like the ending is a little rushed, but it's not easy to finish it when the popularity is so low. At least the final chapter said everything that needed to be said, even if it was all written in one stroke. The whole book is mainly driven by detective stories, and various plots will be explored where detective stories can be inserted. This is the main feature of the plot of this book. The plot of this book is very straightforward. Every character has its own purpose. There is no plot in the whole book. Some information that I thought was important was given immediately, and the rhythm was well controlled. It can be seen that the author has made the outline very specific, and all the plots have been thought out before writing the book. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the plot, and the foreshadowing is revealed very decisively. There are some foreshadowings that at first glance appear to be loopholes in the author's design, but are actually written deliberately by the author, and are later recycled. (For example, regarding the life story of the protagonist, someone commented that you rebelled and returned to Beijing. In fact, the causes and consequences are very clear in this book. I get annoyed every time I read the latest chapter and see this comment from others). After talking about the plot, let's talk about the character creation. The protagonist is a time traveler, but there is no golden finger. The protagonist also experienced childhood and adulthood in this world. Rather than time travel, I think it is more appropriate for the protagonist to have a dream about traveling to modern times. I felt very comfortable with the protagonist's behavior of copying ancient poems. Because copying ancient poems and so on does not advance the main plot. It's not like other novels where you admire a beautiful woman and fall in love with her as soon as you copy it, or the official is shocked and the protagonist gets promoted and becomes rich. His copying of books does not interfere with the main plot, but mainly highlights the character of the protagonist (such as making money by copying books). Because there is no golden finger, there are always some things that cannot be handled by oneself. This will become a lightning point, but the author of this book handles it very naturally. I personally don't feel that there is any lightning point. Then there is the description of the protagonist's character. The protagonist's personality is very unique, and this personality successfully avoided the plot points that I was worried about in the previous paragraph. The protagonist of this book has grown up, and the author will describe the protagonist's heart just right in every plot, and you can see the changes in the protagonist. But sometimes the author deliberately doesn't write about the protagonist's heart, but readers can feel that this kind of blank space is very comfortable (such as the plot of the penultimate chapter). This book is called "The Madam Is Fierce", so the portrayal of the heroine is even more detailed. The growth of the protagonist may not be easy to see, but the heroine really grows after every plot, and there are no surprises. I believe anyone who has read the book can feel the growth of the heroine. The emotional line is not sloppy, at least emotionally. Although there are obstacles in reality and objective conditions, my heart is expressed early. Let me tell you why I pursued this book. This book is very logical and does not deliberately force the plot for family fun. The people around the protagonist are dead when they deserve to die, and when the protagonist kills people, he really kills them. Moreover, the protagonist has strengths and weaknesses and makes mistakes. Unlike many books, the protagonist always does the right thing. The protagonist of this book made many mistakes, and these mistakes will have profound consequences, such as being trapped in the Northern Qi Dynasty, and being captured by the White Lotus Sect. The protagonist is not omnipotent and often needs the help of others and luck. It felt real to me, everyone makes mistakes, everyone has regrets, even the main character.

It's so classic.

The plot has been a bit deliberate recently. In order to promote the plot of the White Clothes Sect, he gave it away knowing that someone was going to assassinate him. It doesn't fit in with the protagonist's original way of acting. Anyone who parachutes the world's best master into the Baiyi Sect is better than the protagonist losing his mind. Forget it if there are not enough guards on the ground, just go to the boat by yourself

Were the emperors of the Jiatianxia era so grand? The descendants who participated in the rebellion could still serve as officials in the court's power agencies. Think about it, it is unlikely. Even now, there is some criminal record, and three generations of the direct line have no connection with military affairs. Rebellion is equivalent to anti-government crimes. It is strange that such descendants can be officials.

By the way, can you write a novel about the Song Dynasty without using silver as the currency? ? ? Where did the Song Dynasty get so much money? Have you seen Water Margin? How many times did silver appear where money appeared?

As title

The protagonist doesn't look like someone who has traveled back in time, except for bringing some punishment methods. Although it is not callous, but when faced with things that he doesn't understand, he shrinks back, like a little daughter-in-law who has been angered by her mother. She only complains in her heart, mutters in her mouth, and does not take any action.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

There are no highlights. The solving of the case is like a joke. You can guess who the murderer is after reading the beginning. The funniest thing is to create suspense there. He seems to think that the readers can't see it. The characters are facial makeup and there is no new idea. I don't want to criticize it, but if I don't say it, it feels like the author is treating me as an imbecile. In general, the plot is incompetent and the characters have no charm at all, whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist.