The Yellow Turban Heavenly Dynasty

Judging from the historical development situation, during the late Han Dynasty, productivity and literacy were low. It is unreasonable that global science and technology can be driven directly across the 1800 years in 60 years. Moreover, when papermaking, printing, etc. Have not become popular, why should the West develop science and technology? It can be completely placed after the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Ming Dynasty. There were frequent exchanges between China and the West. At least they had professional translators. Otherwise, how could they communicate?

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When the world's population is only 300 million, it's a bit ridiculous to talk about the Industrial Revolution and World War. Not to mention that Kushan was so messy after three centuries that he was not qualified to be on the table 🤭

The world view of this book is like "Xinshun 1730", which belongs to the second generation of "Gesong", but I am afraid there is still some distance from these two books. For example, in terms of the complete and rigorous worldview, too many things such as the development of technology, the establishment of institutions, etc. Are not fully laid out as the background, which makes it difficult for readers. The author might as well slow down the pace a little and add more background in daily life. The first chapter is about industrialization in the third century AD, and the second chapter is about Sablin. It is a little too hasty to engage in private goods. After all, what everyone sees in this kind of semi-fictional historical article is a self-justification of a world view. The author's private information can be slowly released when explaining the world view. You are here to write a book, not to criticize politics. There is also an issue of writing style. A light novel-style writing style can be used in semi-fictional historical writings, but it should not be too out of the ordinary. Many lovers of historical writings will be discouraged by a single gimmick.

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The ingredients are too complex, the subject matter is too niche, and the plot is too self-exciting. It is difficult to match the brain waves. Maybe some explanations like videos will be more popular.

When I saw the end of the second volume, I originally felt that Funan was a breaking point, but there was neither action by the protagonist (half-way through, but failed), nor a description of the game between countries (I wrote a chapter, and the king gave in). It jumped to the ending all of a sudden, without waiting for the breaking point of this volume. As far as the reading experience is concerned, the reader can't tell whether it is a group portrait or a male protagonist, and it is uncomfortable to read both aspects. This fictional historical background is very attractive. I hope the author will consider the story arrangement and writing emphasis later.

This writing style always has a familiar feeling. It is good at writing about ancient times, and there are not so many things. It can be read as a fan of the Three Kingdoms. Pay attention to sensitive words, and you can look forward to the future.

The first book Ma Zhuang got in the third volume resulted in the chapter being eaten by the cyber beast, which contained more than two hundred words. In order to prevent the online mythical beast from continuing to eat it, I can't touch that chapter for the time being. But I believe smart book friends can guess what the first book is by looking at the context~

I've only read a few chapters, and this script looks like 1805. Finally, another author is willing to write like this. If you blindly guess the protagonist, there is a high probability that the identity of the traveler will be discovered by Taipingdao, and then he will quickly rise to the top. This book obviously has a lot to offer at the beginning, as it only reaches Chenla Island at the beginning.