Lost in the Abyss
深渊迷航
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 673k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Apocalyptic Crisis
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
213Chapters
4.5kRecommendations
7.8kFans
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As a long-time reader who has finished the previous book, I have a few suggestions: 1. Don't include too much ideological content. Just a little bit now and then is fine. Too much of it is rather absurd for the "online literature" genre. 2: The plot of the previous book didn't flow well; there were many instances where the plot felt disjointed.
When I first read the book, it was almost finished, so I went to read it on my browser. Honestly, around chapter 200, it became incredibly painful, especially the part where the righteous police officer takes the blame. It felt like I was just getting to the climax when the author suddenly started throwing out plot points and making a lot of transitions, making reading quite agonizing.
The book is good, though it's not very popular. The concept is great, but I feel my writing skills, especially the language, aren't quite there. The structure is strange, I can't quite put my finger on it.
Ships and retinue
I'd like to ask the author about ships and their retinues. The previous text mentioned that the protagonist is currently in a small, dilapidated wooden boat, and his third grandfather needs manpower. I naturally assumed that this small, dilapidated boat must be something special, just a matter of how it grows larger. Does it change form as the abyss levels increase? Or is it black magic?
What a wonderful new theme! It's fantastic! I've never felt so fulfilled before. Author, please don't abandon this project!
If you have time, you can check out "The Exorcist's Meter." I think the author's creativity and imagination are just as good, but the pacing is terrible. You should learn how to divide the story into chapters and control the rhythm. "The Exorcist's Meter" is divided into several short stories, each with an introduction, development, climax, and conclusion. Each story takes up almost the same amount of space, yet they are perfectly connected, making for a great reading experience.
Could the protagonist's third grandfather be Liang Ansheng?
The book is good, but it's not popular enough. I'll add a comment.
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