Under One Person: Become the Strongest Sword Immortal

Although it is acceptable, it has too strong of a street flair, and there are many things that are easy to be scolded for. 1. The protagonist needs to provide activity funds for doing things for others. 2. There are too many plots in the original book and it's too watery. What's the difference between this and watching the anime directly? 3. That Jia attacked the protagonist and Feng Baobao secretly. The protagonist was just like a bystander. The subsequent development was exactly the same as the original work. It was very frustrating. Okay, why not give the opponent a sword? He obviously has the strength (Feng's attack is different from the protagonist's own attack)

What's the point of writing? You have to make people provoke the protagonist and then let him leave without doing anything. It's only three things. You've already written it three times, and you still have to write a murderous thing, saying that the protagonist has murderous intentions and scares people away. What happens next? What else does the protagonist have besides murderous intent? Characters related to the plot run in front of the protagonist and dare not move. Why, you can't write without the original plot, right? Why do you only need eight swords to deal with Lao Tianshi? You don't dare to touch the fingers of two ten men. You say how strong the protagonist is, but Luo Tian Dajiao still wants to learn from others. Zhang Chulan is trying to preserve his strength and make his opponent underestimate him to increase his chances of winning. What are you doing? To enjoy the feeling of being treated like a clown, being looked down upon and being chased and scolded? Is there something wrong? Can you please stop doing it? You just honestly write an invincible novel that everyone loves to read, why do you have to poison it?

What are the latest two chapters about? Do you have to pretend to be a pig if you have strength?

If there is something wrong, what should I learn?

Taking out a loan to work can be said to be a hobby, so why are you being targeted by those idiots on the board of directors? To show your selflessness, don't you care about what others think? Then why do you need to lick the company's stinky feet? You can just be an independent person.

The sword fairy you wrote is a dog for the company 😅

I'm afraid it's not a cerebral palsy novel that ran away from the studio...

The exhibition hall behind your introduction really makes me feel like a middle-class person.

He also made the aliens become ordinary people, as if there would be no war if they became ordinary people. You should just look at how many places are fighting now...

I was baffled by this book. It didn't tell you what your abilities are or what path you take. Also, the 12 flashy swords are of no use as they are not as good as one sword that can defeat all kinds of magic. Also, the people who traveled through time were written as aboriginals.

I don't know the plot of the fanfic... I'm going to die on the street

If Zhang Chulan returns to the school dormitory, strange rules will be triggered. . . , Rule 1: You have to believe in Pleasant Goat, Rule 2. . . .

Has God eaten your rice? What age is it, and you still write like this?

It's hard to update so little😏

I think the protagonist can completely steal the virgin's Yang Wu Lei Golden Light Spell and Divine People's Spirit and just practice these few things and become invincible in the world.

This is so boring, let Wang Ai go over quickly

Why do the recent chapters not connect with the previous content?

There is not much difference whether there is a protagonist or not. The protagonist cannot change anything. If there is no need, do not add entities. Although Occam's razor theory is not very appropriate to apply here, the protagonist does not change anything in the plot except killing more people. Zhang Chulan's plot has not changed, Master Tian is still going to die, and Chen Duo still attacks Lao Liao. Compared with the original plot of "Under One Man", the entire plot only has more protagonists and settings attached to the protagonist. As an author, let alone creating the plot, at least I want each character to have its own meaning. Even a supporting role should highlight its own role, but the protagonist has no role, except for killing many characters who did not appear in the original plot or who were used as background.

This is because someone wrote the zodiac talisman, so he wrote the zodiac sword.

He inserted a person into the original plot and then licked Zhang Chulan without any logic. The main purpose was to show off.