Game of Thrones: I Became the Silver Prince

I said last month that you need to change the way you write. The whole article will be Martin's original interpretation. At most, you will add a little bit of your own understanding. The pig's feet will not even take up a quarter of the page. If you write like this, what do you think of your writing style? How many follow-up readings can there be? How many people will follow it after it is put on the shelves??? No sense of expectation at all. What everyone wants to see are pig's feet and dragons, not a group show. . . If you write it this way, I feel like Game of Thrones will eventually have another eunuch book.

Finally, I would like to make a suggestion and say goodbye if you don't change it. Is the protagonist suffering from paranoia or confused about his identity and the strength of his family? You are the orthodox heir to the Iron Throne of Westeros. The Dragon family has not yet fallen and the hegemony is still there. Are you in the same situation as the original Dragon Mother? Even if the original Dragon Mother has ever thought about hatching a dragon and hiding it, see if what you write is consistent with the identity of the protagonist. Isn't it time to declare a stable regime to the world? You don't even dare to tell your family's closest bodyguards, and you act like the whole world will come to conquer the dragon once it hatches. The protagonist is cautious, so be brave and leave the baby dragon alone on Dragonstone to return to King's Landing. Have you ever thought that you didn't tell anyone what the dragon eats and it won't be seen? The logic doesn't make sense. My advice to you is that if you can't even write a human-friendly article, don't waste your time writing it. It's a novel. You're not suitable for this line of work. You should first learn more about the original work and introduce yourself to the protagonist. This is the thinking of a prince. This is more like the situation of ordinary people who are lucky enough to hatch a dragon queen. And you are really stupid. You haven't seen anything after one chapter. The protagonist is still a little kid. It's almost 80 chapters. Obviously everyone expects a climax after the dragon is born.

Baby Beginning: The protagonist of this Game of Thrones is really getting younger and younger. How many pictures can he grow up? I don't like watching the bizarre adventures of the kid brother.

Recently, there are new Game of Thrones books one after another 😰 Is this the Renaissance?

After reading a little bit, I feel that many new authors like to commit this disease of writing infant protagonists.

The more I think about it, the angrier I get. I really like Game of Thrones, and I also like dragons. But look at what the hell you wrote. I feel like your Rhaegar has insulted the original character, and is not worthy of riding a dragon. With such a timid reptilian character, what kind of dragon do you want to ride? Look at you. Name your own book. It doesn't mean that your writing skills are not good. Look at the ones next door. Their writing skills are not much better than yours. However, the spirit and spirit of the protagonists created by them are unmatched by your Lei Jia. He is almost a clown with persecutory delusions🤡

I'm not saying that you can't accept this as a group portrait article. The question is whether your way of writing can last until the day you put it on the shelves. I seriously doubt that you cut it off before you even finished half of it.

Why write so many irrelevant plots? Do you think you're lovable like this?

The writing is really frustrating. There are dozens of chapters in the first part, and the second part is very sneaky. Why, can the free city-states form a group to fight you? Or maybe the Seven Kingdoms are afraid of you and then rebel? Especially that ring, the space ring that holds living creatures, it's really a bug

Well done Rhaegar, Silver Prince, written like a coward. He's timid and has no brains. Why don't he call him Silver Prince? Why don't he call him Stinky Rat? It's really suitable for the protagonist.