Cyberpunk: Wind Spirit Moon Shadow, Activate!

Rebecca is fine as the female lead, but could you please stop writing about her blushing all the time? She looks like a little girl but is actually an adult. In Night City, if you want something innocent, you'd have to go to kindergarten.

First of all, Rebecca, the female lead, is disgusting. Then, she gave Rogue information without any reward and even asked him to help her steal chips. What a joke!

The writing is a mess, jumping from one topic to another without any clear goal or direction. Since you're already a Wind Chime Moon Shadow Hero, why not just make him invincible? Instead, you have to write about perilous battle scenes and then inexplicably want to liberate the whole world, throwing around that "with great power comes great responsibility" kind of nonsense. Wouldn't it be better to just write about everyday life in an invincible story?

The female lead's writing style is like it's from several years ago. Has the author only recently resumed writing?

Don't limit yourself to romance; even a female lead isn't necessary. The cyberpunk world is vast; wouldn't it be better to start a corporate war with V and reshape the world? 🙂

Overall, the protagonist seemed like a complete loser. To use an analogy, it's like a beggar seeing the emperor and thinking, "The emperor is so rich, he must be begging with a golden bowl." The protagonist's beggar-like demeanor was too strong. 😤

I understand the author wanted to portray the relationship between the protagonist and Rebecca with a cyberpunk feel, but please don't challenge the reader's emotional intelligence. Being able to see through Jack and Misty's relationship, yet acting as if he doesn't accept or ignores Rebecca's obvious feelings, or pretends not to understand, is truly difficult to maintain.

The author's descriptions of the relationship between the main character and the female supporting character gave me a disgusting feeling, like a fly seeing an ox or something—it's indescribable, a kind of nausea. The recent chapters... Also, the speed at which information spreads in Night City is really slow; perhaps it doesn't highlight the protagonist's speed.

Seriously, if you've already enabled player mode, stop describing this garbage.

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