Cyberpunk: Wind Spirit Moon Shadow, Activate!

It's okay for Rebecca to be the heroine, but can you please stop writing about blushing? She looks like a lolita but she is an adult. If you want innocence in Night City, you have to go to a kindergarten.

First of all, the heroine Rebecca is disgusting, and then, she gave Roger information without being paid and still helped her grab the chip, haha ​​what ZZ

The writing is messy, with a hammer here and a stick here and there, without any clear goals and directions. Now that you have become the Wind Chime Moon Shadow Man, you can just be invincible. You have to write dangerous battle scenes, and then inexplicably have to liberate the whole world, and do it in a way that with great power comes great responsibility. , Wouldn't it be nice to write about daily life directly in Wudi Wen?

The way the heroine was written seems to have been written several years ago. Is the author just unfrozen?

Don't limit yourself to falling in love, you can even do it without a heroine. The world view of cyberpunk is quite grand. Wouldn't it be better to directly start a corporate war with v and redefine the world? 🙂

After watching the whole film, I felt that the protagonist looked very bad. To use an analogy, a beggar saw the emperor and thought that the emperor must be so rich because he begged for food with a golden rice bowl. The protagonist's beggar style is too strong 😤

I understand that the author wants to make the relationship between the protagonist and Rebecca very cybernetic, but please don't challenge the reader's emotional intelligence. It's really hard to be able to understand the relationship between Jack and Misty, but not accept and ignore Rebecca's obvious performance, or pretend not to understand.

The author's description of the relationship between the protagonist and the female supporting character gave me the disgusting feeling that a fly would give when seeing Ollie, an indescribable disgusting feeling. The recent chapters and the speed of information dissemination in Night City is really slow, which may not highlight the protagonist's speed.

Really, if you have turned on player mode, don't describe the garbage.

First of all, I am very grateful for the support of every book friend who voted for me and rewarded me and is willing to subscribe! After finishing writing every day, I am really touched by your support. I wish every boss who is willing to support me good health, all the best, and all their dreams come true! Secondly, I posted today mainly to explain one thing to you, everyone is violent. I can understand if you feel angry and want to complain after seeing an unpleasant plot, but the author is dizzy every day while typing, and his hair is falling out. When he wakes up, he sees a bunch of abusive comments, and some malicious attacks on the author's parents. I will delete the comments and ban you. Don't feel wronged. This is your first time as a human being. You are more mature, so I should let you go, right? This doesn't make sense. I actually didn't want to post this post because it wasted my little coding time. Now that I've posted it, I'll reply to some questions from the book review. First of all, it's nonsense to say that the author doesn't read comments. Don't you read other people's opinions on what you worked so hard to create? Secondly, to say that the author doesn't understand the world view of cyberpunk, do you like reading it if I wrote all the content of the world view rule book? Then why don't you watch the video explanation and read any novels? Basically, the world view of cyberpunk is covered. Then there are also those who say that the logic of the plot is unreasonable. The author admits that at that time, he thought that such a plot would be very interesting, so he wrote it down as soon as he slapped his forehead. After all, he was a novice, and his writing skills were indeed not good enough. Why didn't the author reply to the book friend's question about the character setting? I just want to say, could it be that I put the plot setting, outline, and character setting all in your face, and you just like to read it? That is definitely impossible. If you think it is poisonous, then you will definitely not read it. Why should I bother someone who will never read my work again in the future? I have a lot of explanations. If I have this time, I will write more words. Isn't it delicious? Oh, I am indeed a bit glass-hearted, so let's stop here! Finally, I wish every book friend who is willing to support me to get rich as soon as possible! Every word is just a shield to protect me, not an aggressive spear. I hope you don't mind my gossip. Thanks again (=^▽^=)