Who Let Him Be Reborn?!

What do you want to write in the last few chapters 😅? A small business can be done in bed, right? How long do you want to write about this little boss lady?

According to this quality, it will definitely be a good book

Looking at it now, it still feels okay. At least the protagonist is not stupid.

Expand it quickly, especially English teachers feel it better

I thought it was an urban novel close to reality, but it turned out to be an imaginary chaebol type. No wonder it makes people fall into the river casually.

Keep the style, don't use long descriptions and your grades will not be bad.

That bad old factory director is so disgusting. When will he be offline?

This book forcibly creates conflicts from the beginning of Lu. It is obviously unwise to antagonize the officialdom and the underworld for a woman he has just met. The male protagonist should be insignificant and underdeveloped at this stage. He should hide himself until he is strong, instead of making enemies everywhere! All the current behaviors are not in line with the character set for the male protagonist from the beginning!

Boss Wife's line has been delayed for too long. The main line hasn't even grown yet, and the branch line is almost taller than a person.

Please pay attention, collect, recommend, and read. This book received almost no sales in the first week after it was released. It was just like a stand-alone book. I knew it was difficult to achieve enlightenment at the starting point, but I didn't expect it to be so exaggerated. Slowly and patiently, I saw that most of the book reviews were positive, and I gradually gained hope. First of all, everyone's criticisms. Unified reply. If a new author is not good enough, he needs to practice more on his writing skills, rhythm, and plot skills. Secondly, tell me about yourself and the ideas and style of this book. First of all, I will revise almost every chapter more than three times, trying to improve the details and give people a sense of picture. However, due to limited writing skills and my own high requirements for plot and visuals, it is difficult to write at the level of a master who can mobilize the atmosphere and speed up the rhythm with just a few strokes. Therefore, please forgive me if you feel that the content is relatively long and the narrative is slow. Finally, the author is anti-green and anti-abuse and doesn't want to make the conflict too mentally retarded, so he wants to write it in depth (of course his writing power is limited), so there is no such thing as Long Aotian or too exaggerated plot progression. In addition, the author was born in the 1990s and read early online articles. The content of the plot still has an ancient style and is not too out of the ordinary. In the future, I will work more on the plot, rhythm, and character creation. If you like this book, you can add it to your favorites and make comments (comments will be deleted if you use curse words like human rooster).