Nascent Soul Monk Is Reborn in the Island Country

The first three chapters are quite interesting, but the fifth chapter comes out and beats itself, which is quite funny. There are many smart people in the world. Can your little cleverness really deceive the people of a country? In my opinion, since you are behind the scenes, then if you give your power to others, then leave it alone. This kind of making up a story by oneself and pretending to be a good guy and a bad guy is really quite witty.

Behind the scenes, it is recommended not to fall in love, a Yuanying will fall in love with a mortal

Investigation object: "The Rebirth of the Nascent Soul Monk in the Island Country" - Male Protagonist - [Li Xu] Investigation Result: [Borrowed Corpse Resurrection] Judgment Basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates the time-travel situation of the time-travelers The profession of recording and recording aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time travel status of travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services If there are any mistakes, Wan Wang can correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on January 24, 2025

The first two chapters were okay, but later on, the self-directed and self-acted actions, let alone treating others as idiots, were meaningless.

Why don't you have a small day when a demon cultivator comes? It's enough for a time-traveling immortal cultivator to make good or bad comments about a group of mortals. Why do you want to give yourself so much drama? You're going behind the scenes.

A poorly written heroine will lose people, but a eunuch without a heroine will lose more people, at least 90% less readers.

It would be better to change the background of the protagonist to that of a modern person who travels through time and then comes back, giving a sense of immersion. It seems a bit difficult to find someone from the Ming Dynasty.

There was no problem cleaning up the first few, but there was no clue as to how the subsequent plot unfolded. Nothing was explained, and it felt like the plot had skipped a big jump. The beginning is okay, but the subsequent plot arrangement can only be said to be too similar to other novels, and the plot collapses. . There are many Naruto Shinigami who give abilities little by little, but here they just give unlimited immortal cultivation skills and blow up the plot. This book is finished. This kind of ability can be easily controlled by locking the upper limit of the ability in the early stage. Only the immortal cultivation techniques are given and some props are not limited. You, the author, are so imaginative that you can do things, but you can't handle it, and you have to use nuclear bombs to wipe out the ground. It can be said that the novel will completely collapse. I suggest you cut it and start a new book. This book just blew up.

I'm quite speechless. I worked hard to get a few NPCs and trained them for dozens of chapters, and then killed them all in one wave. Then I had to recruit new people and train them again. Then have I read these dozens of chapters in vain? Forget it, delete the book

The combat power of this urban immortal cultivator is too exaggerated. It is said at the beginning that you are not afraid of firearms in the later stage of Qi training. This means that after the seventh level of Qi training, nuclear weapons can threaten the peak of Nascent Soul. In actual performance of the second level of Qi training, it directly relies on the terrain advantage to defeat hundreds of troops alone. With one blow, the hole is half a meter wide and I don't know how deep it is. This is too exaggerated.

There are good and bad distinctions, can't we just kill them all in our childhood?

Some are inexplicable and the writing is rather confusing.

You must micromanage the devils. Give some rewards first and then raise them until they are on the shelves.

Whether the writing is good or not is the key to the subject matter, isn't it?

No wonder there are no chapter names. I guess the author doesn't even know what he's writing about, right? It's so messy, the characters and plot are so messed up

It's hard to write about behind-the-scenes scenes 😰

It's really well written. I'm very curious about what the plot will be like later. Please give it a try and update it. I'm optimistic about you ᐇ

At first, I read every chapter carefully, but later I found that the plot was a bit bland, and there was no engaging writing style like the old eunuch. The author still has to keep working hard.

There are all kinds of gods in Magic Princess, the mountain beast god, the giant white two-tailed mountain dog and various animals, the world of gods in Kamigakure Shoujo, and Yuya, and the foxes and raccoons in Heisei Tanuki Battle, so many that they can be considered a family.

Come on! Write according to your own ideas and don't pay too much attention to the comment section. Hope to see the end.

The writing is okay, why isn't it on the shelves?