Naruto: You Call This Guy a Savior? !

The author already has a sophisticated system of conspiracy theories. He brought this system into Naruto, magically changed all the characters, and subverted the original. The author also firmly believed in his theory, turning the already hot-blooded boy manga into a greasy and fat uncle. It looks disgusting and disgusting, like Yu Xiaogang in Douluo Continent, double standard, disgusting {"TopicId":"588846986766188544","TopicName":"Naruto"}

1. When I read Naruto fan fiction, I saw Pig's Knot punching down the third generation, stepping on Danzo, drowning Obito Madara with a mouthful of spittle, and raping Otsutsuki by the way. You go back to suppressing Pig's Knot, and I'm a jerk 2. The author will not write without the original plot of Naruto. The current plot events are all based on the original work, and there is no original work of his own. 3. It's frustrating to watch, Pig's Knee is like a tool.

I didn't dare to change the original plot under the pretext of returning to the timeline. I knew this book was not far away from being a hit on the street.

The protagonist survived four battles. Not to mention his strength, his combat experience was still poor, but he was treated like a dog. Moreover, the whole plot achievement is to be a dog for the protagonist group, and he is also a dog that is looked down upon by the protagonist group. As for the plot, it would not be written without leaving the original work. Forcibly "containing the world line" will give you an excuse to suppress the protagonist's strength and follow the original work. Why hasn't your protagonist been restrained to death in the real world line? In one word, disgusting

If you find four big guys to mess with Uchiha for three months, and then let the person he likes take a look, can you 100% awaken the Sharingan?

Save the shitty ninja world and just destroy it.

The introduction made me think that the protagonist is a grandfather character who teaches and guides the protagonist group. Kakashi has always said that the protagonist is stronger than the other protagonists. The beginning of the book also hints that the protagonist Wushu killed an elite chuunin, and as a result, the protagonist was beaten to death. After all, you have experienced four battles, and you don't have that much chakra, but you have so much ninjutsu and combat experience, but you performed so poorly. There is really not much difference between ordinary chuunin and genin. At most, they only know one or two more ninjutsu. According to the setting, an experienced person like the protagonist can easily kill ordinary chuunin in an instant with the strength of genin based on experience. At most Bai is an elite chuunin. It is the first time for the protagonist group to carry out a mission. They have little experience, but they can spend so much time with Bai. If you let the protagonist group go through two more missions, it will be easy to fight a Bai. At least they will be able to do it with ease. This protagonist's performance is not as good as that of the protagonist group.

The author is self-deprecating. There are many fallacies. It is not recommended to read.

As a reminder, it has been seen that the author is forcing the protagonist, the plug-in logic is confusing, and he does not dare to change the plot at all. Since it is a reward point for the plot of the magic change, the plot disruption point given by Kabuto Yakushi's death is completely inconsistent. Since he has watched the anime, he is still reborn, and there is a system of rewards for the magic change. There are too many places to operate.

It would be good for yourself not to read a novel that makes you feel depressed after reading just one chapter.

No, why did you write this fanart? Travel back in time to be a nanny? The plot is completely copied from the original work. This can no longer be considered fan fiction, it is simply plagiarism.

It is recommended to go to the factory, you still have time.

The character image is too rigid, take the part where Zabu slashes Sakura, Keiichi saves Sakura, and then Sakura doesn't show any fear, and even complains that Keiichi is weak. . . . . Hey, author, don't be so perfunctory, the focus is on the essence. I don't know if it's a writing problem or a problem of rushing out, it looks like paper figures fighting.

There is nothing wrong with the overall plot, but the details are not good. Let's not talk about how Kakashi showed his smile to others. The ninjutsu alone is very funny if it cannot be taught. If Konoha really shields Zizhen to such an extent, it will not be able to fight a ninja war.

Author, do you know that even Dou Po has to compete with a time traveler instead of reborn as a native 😒

After reading ten chapters, I felt something was wrong, so I quickly came to the comment section to have a look. Sure enough, it slipped away.

What? The reborn me likes to kneel and sing conquest?

The market will educate these conspiracy theories, and this book basically does the same.

1. The protagonist has survived after the Fourth War. Logically speaking, he should have rich combat experience. However, in order to ensure the normal occurrence of the original plot, the author will make him forget his own experience 2. The protagonist is a time traveler and knows many plots. But also in order to make some original plots happen normally, he will choose to make the protagonist forget some plots before the incident. 3. If the author wants to reflect the protagonist's influence on the plot, such as the butterfly effect, he will choose to prevent certain details from happening and then use other methods to return the plot to the original point... Otherwise he will not write it. He cannot change the big ones, but he can change the small ones and return to the original point.

What are the recommendations these days? I just read a few Naruto fanfics and they recommend this kind of rubbish to me every day.

Pig's feet are all clever and don't consider the consequences at all. It's impossible for this kind of intelligence to survive the finale in the previous life😤

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I personally think this book is readable, although the character design and character IQ are a bit taken for granted. But, I'm short on books, so I'll just make do with it. Until, this volume of Visitors from Another World was so shitty. What the hell am I looking at? It's so annoying! ! !

All the taken-for-granted settings are really disgusting. The protagonist has experienced two lives and still has a mentality of being a loser. He has a golden finger and has all kinds of pressure to fight. The number of water words is unparalleled.

Um, why is the author still a first-level author? Does anyone know?

It's well written and I support you. It's really good that it's not limited to the plot.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

If you write about Sakura in the comments, you will lose the desire to read it.