Astral Mission

Author, are you writing an online novel? After reading your previous works, the person writing is wrong. I have never read an online novel like yours... You can look through various Qidian novels to see if personal narrative novels like yours are rare. It's a long and overwhelming text, and I don't know what it wants to express specifically. There is too much information included in it, making it difficult to figure out. If it's just for practicing writing, then I didn't say it. If not, you can change it to a conversational style, or add a plot that is foreshadowed and laid out, otherwise it will be too boring. There is no language contradiction, no clear plot contradiction, and it is impossible to point out the plot direction in an orderly manner. There is no doubt that the anomaly in Xiaobai's novel is not a blow to the author, but that online novels should not be written like this. The most important contradictory development plot is difficult to describe and cannot be expressed in your way of writing. At least it is impossible for you to finish writing the ending and tell the story completely, because the first few pictures can explain the story clearly, and there is no way to write it anymore. The characters and plot are gone. There is no foreshadowing, no foreshadowing, or nothing obvious, so it is impossible to fill in it. Still the same sentence, no foreshadowing, no foreshadowing, how to write? It's true that you can have wild imagination, but sooner or later you'll run out of inspiration... But come on, it's true that you can tell stories, but it's really difficult to tell good stories. May the world be worthy of those who are willing to do so. Bye!