My Superpowers and Love Life Are Both a Disaster

Plagiarism, definitely plagiarism! Don't refute me, I won't accept refutation! The content of the book I read is the same as yours, with more words than yours Update twenty or thirty chapters more to prove yourself and see who plagiarized whom. Actually, you also know that everyone still believes you, but your words are unfounded. You should update chapters 20 or 30 first. If you have evidence, you can say anything.

The biggest problem you have now is that the male protagonist is too useless, has no brilliance, and looks like a loser. The male protagonist's current personality is unpleasant, talkative, and does not like to take responsibility. He complains about this and that. The ideas he comes up with are very, um, outrageous. He has no responsibility and does not make an overall plan. It feels very frivolous. He has superpowers, but other than that, I didn't see any of his shining points as a human being or what attracted the heroine to him. No wonder so many readers say this. Look at the male protagonist you wrote. The consequences of confession are indeed very troublesome for the male protagonist, but the male protagonist really doesn't want to bear it at all. He is always waiting for the female protagonist to compromise. He has no responsibility at all. Several times, many times I thought you wanted the male protagonist to confess, but it didn't happen, and I was very disappointed. It would be great if you could regain your strength. You could write Wan Qing so well. There are so many things about her that attract readers. Then you can probably write a good male protagonist. You have to set a direction for the male protagonist. He can't be like this forever. This image is really disappointing. At the very least, he must be responsible, dare to be honest, be responsible, and be stable on the inside. He can be frivolous on the surface, but the result of his frivolity must be good. The male protagonist you write now is really like a child. Transformation is also a very attractive process. If you can write it well, I think it will attract more people than writing a good male protagonist directly.

Originally, the setting at the beginning was good, and the writing was good, but the subject matter is really not suitable for a harem. The mind-reading male protagonist and the mute girl at the beginning can obviously become the new gods of pure love, but the road is narrow.

I was attracted by your many heroines, but now I have a question. Author, you spent more than a hundred chapters writing Qingbao so well. How many chapters did you prepare to write the other two heroines to Qingbao's current position? I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I feel that this male protagonist is really a scumbag, except that he and Qingbao are very good-looking every day. Every time I watch the plot of Little Rich Woman, I feel extremely unhappy. People have helped you so much, but at least you have to be a little self-aware, right? But the male protagonist only thinks about how to deal with her and how to deal with her. From the beginning to the more than a hundred chapters I read, I didn't see any gratitude from him. Take borrowing 200,000 yuan as an example. After borrowing the money, I didn't even show any gratitude. It was all perfunctory. The stronger contrast in the article is between him and Zhou Yan. If there was no little rich woman, what would be the difference between his and Zhou Yan's situation? I have only read half of it. Don't spoil it, just the more than 100 chapters.

After reading Chapter 50, I wanted to complain. Author, what are you doing? Is this a single-female novel? Why hasn't the second heroine been written? Even the supporting female characters Zhou Yan and Guan Li have more scenes than her. There are even many male supporting roles. If nothing else, at least chat on WeChat, there is no sense of existence at all. If you continue to write like this, except for writing the male protagonist as a scumbag, is there any point in writing it? One side is almost living together, and the other side hasn't even spoken to each other a few times. In short, at present, the author is not suitable for writing harem novels, only suitable for single female protagonists.

Hmm. . Except for the super-powerful male protagonist, he is useless. It's strange that I loved watching Harem when I was a kid, but now I like watching Pure Love instead.

The male protagonist should only be able to hear what others want to say, not what others are saying...

The introduction said that the super power is refreshed. Should it be reset or should it be reset? What should Qin Wanqing do if it is reset? Don't give hope and despair and burst into tears.

The male protagonist is a loser, hesitant to do anything, and in the end all the female protagonists run away.

Such as History, if you haven't read History, just watch it. There is no world destruction at all. The whole plot is actually about letting the protagonist ride on three boats. The ending is that Qin's parents don't agree with the protagonist riding on two boats and let him choose one of the two. Qin chooses to give up and let the protagonist be with Lu, and then Lu is divided in order to let the protagonist be with Qin. Opened up, Xia chose to stay in boarding school because the story line was the shortest, which directly made the protagonist a loner. Then the fourth stage of the protagonist's time traveling to the past was limited to 22 times. Finally, the protagonist chose to use memory as a medium to strengthen the time travel and go back to the past to complete the cycle. He also filled in the pits, and there was no shit. For example, why did Old Man Lu have it? The time travel record given by the protagonist, as well as the mysterious person Xia, the story line clearly stated that there are two Xia's existence, and I still don't understand, the protagonist spent 500,000 to buy a store and asked Lu's father to help form a professional team to treat Qin, and Qin and the protagonist liked each other, but Qin's parents forced the protagonist to choose one of the two and then made a complete sentence. I will pay it back. I am so angry that I have a cerebral hemorrhage. I seriously suspect that the author has complicated the story line and forced a circular ending. If you have never read history, please read it now. I thought why the novel theme is time travel. I didn't like the plot in the first place. I was forced to read the whole story because of the theme.