I Have Big Problems with My Superpowers and My Love Life

Such as History, if you haven't read History, just watch it. There is no world destruction at all. The whole plot is actually about letting the protagonist ride on three boats. The ending is that Qin's parents don't agree with the protagonist riding on two boats and let him choose one of the two. Qin chooses to give up and let the protagonist be with Lu, and then Lu is divided in order to let the protagonist be with Qin. Opened up, Xia chose to stay in boarding school because the story line was the shortest, which directly made the protagonist a loner. Then the fourth stage of the protagonist's time traveling to the past was limited to 22 times. Finally, the protagonist chose to use memory as a medium to strengthen the time travel and go back to the past to complete the cycle. He also filled in the pits, and there was no shit. For example, why did Old Man Lu have it? The time travel record given by the protagonist, as well as the mysterious person Xia, the story line clearly stated that there are two Xia's existence, and I still don't understand, the protagonist spent 500,000 to buy a store and asked Lu's father to help form a professional team to treat Qin, and Qin and the protagonist liked each other, but Qin's parents forced the protagonist to choose one of the two and then made a complete sentence. I will pay it back. I am so angry that I have a cerebral hemorrhage. I seriously suspect that the author has complicated the story line and forced a circular ending. If you have never read history, please read it now. I thought why the novel theme is time travel. I didn't like the plot in the first place. I was forced to read the whole story because of the theme.

It can only be said that you wrote a female protagonist so well in the early stage, but you can't handle the other two characters. If you continue to write the harem later, it will collapse. You might as well find a reason to kill these two characters. Then the male protagonist cannot accept death, delete his two memories, strengthen his superpowers, and then concentrate on being with the other female protagonist.

The writing was okay, but the male protagonist felt like a real scumbag. He said he was only good with Qin, but he was also having an affair with so many other people, which was a bit intimidating. And you have to write about Zhou Yan, right? Does she have anything to do with the main plot? I feel like that person is a bit disgusting.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist is too useless, procrastinating and not decisive, careless and irresponsible, and completely inconsistent with what he has to do. {"NickName":"The Bell Outside the Siege","UserId":360372964} The author can take a look at this novel (Urban: I can write letters to my past self) and improve the ending, or write some extra stories to fill in the pits🕳️

Plagiarism, definitely plagiarism! Don't refute me, I won't accept refutation! The content of the book I read is the same as yours, with more words than yours Update twenty or thirty chapters more to prove yourself and see who plagiarized whom. Actually, you also know that everyone still believes you, but your words are unfounded. You should update chapters 20 or 30 first. If you have evidence, you can say anything.

The biggest problem you have now is that the male protagonist is too useless, has no brilliance, and looks like a loser. The male protagonist's current personality is unpleasant, talkative, and does not like to take responsibility. He complains about this and that. The ideas he comes up with are very, um, outrageous. He has no responsibility and does not make an overall plan. It feels very frivolous. He has superpowers, but other than that, I didn't see any of his shining points as a human being or what attracted the heroine to him. No wonder so many readers say this. Look at the male protagonist you wrote. The consequences of confession are indeed very troublesome for the male protagonist, but the male protagonist really doesn't want to bear it at all. He is always waiting for the female protagonist to compromise. He has no responsibility at all. Several times, many times I thought you wanted the male protagonist to confess, but it didn't happen, and I was very disappointed. It would be great if you could regain your strength. You could write Wan Qing so well. There are so many things about her that attract readers. Then you can probably write a good male protagonist. You have to set a direction for the male protagonist. He can't be like this forever. This image is really disappointing. At the very least, he must be responsible, dare to be honest, be responsible, and be stable on the inside. He can be frivolous on the surface, but the result of his frivolity must be good. The male protagonist you write now is really like a child. Transformation is also a very attractive process. If you can write it well, I think it will attract more people than writing a good male protagonist directly.

Originally, the setting at the beginning was good, and the writing was good, but the subject matter is really not suitable for a harem. The mind-reading male protagonist and the mute girl at the beginning can obviously become the new gods of pure love, but the road is narrow.

I was attracted by your many heroines, but now I have a question. Author, you spent more than a hundred chapters writing Qingbao so well. How many chapters did you prepare to write the other two heroines to Qingbao's current position? I have read more than a hundred chapters, and I feel that this male protagonist is really a scumbag, except that he and Qingbao are very good-looking every day. Every time I watch the plot of Little Rich Woman, I feel extremely unhappy. People have helped you so much, but at least you have to be a little self-aware, right? But the male protagonist only thinks about how to deal with her and how to deal with her. From the beginning to the more than a hundred chapters I read, I didn't see any gratitude from him. Take borrowing 200,000 yuan as an example. After borrowing the money, I didn't even show any gratitude. It was all perfunctory. The stronger contrast in the article is between him and Zhou Yan. If there was no little rich woman, what would be the difference between his and Zhou Yan's situation? I have only read half of it. Don't spoil it, just the more than 100 chapters.

After reading Chapter 50, I wanted to complain. Author, what are you doing? Is this a single-female novel? Why hasn't the second heroine been written? Even the supporting female characters Zhou Yan and Guan Li have more scenes than her. There are even many male supporting roles. If nothing else, at least chat on WeChat, there is no sense of existence at all. If you continue to write like this, except for writing the male protagonist as a scumbag, is there any point in writing it? One side is almost living together, and the other side hasn't even spoken to each other a few times. In short, at present, the author is not suitable for writing harem novels, only suitable for single female protagonists.

Hmm. . Except for the super-powerful male protagonist, he is useless. It's strange that I loved watching Harem when I was a kid, but now I like watching Pure Love instead.

The male protagonist should only be able to hear what others want to say, not what others are saying...

The introduction said that the super power is refreshed. Should it be reset or should it be reset? What should Qin Wanqing do if it is reset? Don't give hope and despair and burst into tears.

The male protagonist is a loser, hesitant to do anything, and in the end all the female protagonists run away.

Romance, harem, superpowers. In fact, the author can design it very cleverly. Each super power corresponds to a heroine and a flaw of the heroine. This flaw causes the heroine's curiosity towards the male protagonist to sublimate into love. In this way, the harem can be written without violating the harmony, and the characters who have been created will not be marginalized. And the shortcomings will remain fresh in people's minds as characteristics of the characters.

If the super power is refreshed once a month, then the male protagonist will no longer be able to hear the female protagonist speak after a month. Plus the previous recording, you won't give me a knife, right?

It feels like the protagonist's IQ is starting to be insufficient. After knowing the follow-up of the super power, he should be able to think of a lot of things even if he associates it. There should have been a rescue before but it failed, so he gave up his memory, and his ability was strengthened to the point where he could use the retrospective super power to go back to the time when he first awakened or even further forward. The protagonist has lost his memory, but Xia Yunian still has some memories, but Father Lu and others still have more complete memories for planning. Now I'm reading chapter 98. It's easy to figure out the combination of these things. The protagonist's attitude towards Xia Yunian is too perfunctory. I have super powers and dreamed about crows. I knew at a glance that I couldn't hide from him.

To be honest, there is no need to write so much about the role of Zhou Yan. Is it possible that we still want to accept this woman? Now that the previous words have been spoken, let's take good care of you and me. Let's go to each other's side. There are already three main female characters. There is no need for one more.

The rhythm before it is put on the shelves and the rhythm after it is put on the shelves are completely different. The beginning is quite interesting. The hidden clue buried before the game is released is a download progress bar for Thunder members. You can basically see the plot progressing. After it is released, there will be Chapter 10 of Water, with some foreshadowing in the middle, and then Chapter 10 of Water will continue with the foreshadowing. It is a progress bar for Pinduoduo. For example, when Senior Sister Liang from the company appeared for the first time, there were two hundred chapters between the time she hinted that she was hooking up with the protagonist, and the time when it was revealed that she was Mr. Hu's person. It was too exaggerated. I won't complain about the character design, it's not important. Even if it's a facial character, it can be written with an arc, but it seems that the author didn't think about the ending of the female character at all. The three heroines' appearances are too unbalanced. Xia and Zhou's scenes are almost the same. I even think Zhou's writing is much better than Xia's. But even so, I still voted for the author for three months, because the writing was really good before it was put on the shelves. It really caught me in the beginning, but it was really bad after it was put on the shelves. It's not that it can't be written. I think this kind of love story with a main line needs to be written daily, but the rhythm needs to be controlled. For example, in the section about opening a safe within seven days, it would be outrageous if you use 30 chapters of daily water and add 10 chapters to advance the plot. If you really want to improve daily life, you might as well ask the protagonist to study the rate of change, and then use the control variable method to control the water. Ten chapters for a female protagonist is thirty, but you only spent one chapter. Or is it that online articles are like this nowadays, with a carefully conceived beginning and no thought of how the story will develop and end before you start writing it. Anyway, you're done with deceiving readers until it's published?

That's what the heroine mentioned. . Why is the protagonist such a loser?

Did I look too fast? Apart from cheating, what are the advantages of the protagonist?

Rubbish, even if you ended up being a eunuch, it would still be better than that ending🤢🤢🤢🤢

Coming here because of the reputation, the author should find a class

I had already read half of it, and I originally wanted to read it. I heard some people said it was not finished, so I ordered the last chapter to read. Good guy, what kind of ending do you have in which the heroine runs away and is reincarnated... Are you serious about doing this in a book with multiple heroines? I haven't seen the extra chapter I mentioned, and I have no intention of finishing it. If you have this writing attitude, don't publish a new book. You will only be chased and scolded.

Dear book lovers, please don't read the ending, it's too poisonous! ! ! All three girlfriends ran away, and the male protagonist returned to the cycle

After watching it, it's against the sky 🔪

[Spoiler alert, come back after reading the book] I really liked the setting at the beginning. Although the pace of the plot was very slow, I also turned on the automatic subscription and grabbed the tickets when I had them. Unexpectedly, the lower limit was exceeded later. Comment while it's finished. I hope the author can write more if there is another one. 1. All the previous preparations and pitfalls have not been filled in. Including but not limited to: what is the end of the world, why Grandpa Lu wants the protagonist to decipher the code, how did Yu and the protagonist become a couple 2. The bloody plot in the later stage. 1) Zhou was thought to be a foil to the heroine at first, but later the operation of whitewashing was incomprehensible. It not only affected the relationship between the male and female protagonists, but even wasted the number of time travels for her. 2) Time travel does not have the memory of the last time, but it will affect the heroine's feelings for the hero: God set it up, and the beginning of the later period is unfinished and cannot be saved. That 3) Changes in the relationship between the heroines: the first and second heroines had already accepted each other in the middle, but suddenly they couldn't accept each other in the end; at the end, when the first heroine had already left, it was okay for Xia to leave, but it was inexplicable that Lu had to leave. Summary: Anticlimactic, 9 points for the first part, and 2 points for the later part.

Authors who like to write about all kinds of accidents usually lack writing skills 😅.

Why is the male protagonist like gauze? There are so many bad things about the female protagonists who keep saying good things to him. We have all met the same superpower person. He said that he wants to destroy the world, but he still keeps licking Qin with such an impatient look on his face? There is almost no emotional line, it is all about the inexplicable and sudden affection for Max, the treatment of the male protagonist in Long Aotian Shuang's novel

The author never came back from his deception, and created an ending that made everyone uncomfortable. The one who defeated the super-powered protagonist was actually his parents' disapproval! That is to say, there are people who have harems in real life. If your novel wants to have an ending that is more realistic than reality, then why should I read this novel? ? ?

I originally wanted to give you all my monthly votes, but why can I only vote for two?