Real Movie, This Actor Is a Bit of a Monster

The subject matter is good and the plot is okay, but writing a movie plot in the middle of writing it while running off to do something else and then continuing to talk about the plot after finishing it is too poisonous. You can either write it simpler when making the movie and tell it completely during the premiere, or describe the movie completely when making the movie and mainly write about the critics' feelings during the premiere. Otherwise, few people will be able to read the novel.

I'm actually quite surprised why the idea of ​​vérité movies hasn't caught on. In my opinion, this kind of book is very exciting because it combines entertainment and unlimited flow. I have read two books and I don't know why the book disappeared.

The setting is good, but the excitement is not enough. The most exciting thing about reading a genre novel is obviously how the protagonist acts in a movie, and the audience's reaction is more exciting at the beginning, middle, and end of a classic shot. They should be connected, but if you write one thing and then another in the middle, you will write a bunch of other things and then another. Regarding the director, I went over to write a lot about the beginning. It was incoherent, just like watching a movie, from beginning to end. I had read a movie called "The Greatest Movie King" a long time ago. The plot was very well written, and the role played by the protagonist was also very classic. The highlight of this type of movie is the plot.

It's so well written. I've watched The Greatest Movie King before. How come no one has written about this subject?

Let's release the movie after filming to enhance the atmosphere. I skipped the variety show in the middle. Personally, I feel it's useless and a waste of fun. If you want to follow up on a new book, it's not a direct selection of readers. If you don't do it after it's on the shelves, it's even more of a waste.

What can I say? There used to be a big movie star who was of the same type. I was attracted to it because of this, but I felt uncomfortable when I saw it. Can you show the story together? Don't look at it too fragmented with a hammer here and a stick here and there.

In Chapter 20, we didn't even enter the warehouse to start the performance. Is it awkward?

I just read five chapters and finished the setting. It gives me the feeling of active observation by primitive civilization (Sociology +99999)

There are too many theoretical introductions in long paragraphs, and the plot advancement is a bit slow.

I really like this kind of original plot, not plagiarism

Appropriately cut out the exclamations of the director team during the filming of the movie.

Let me tell you my personal opinion: Because this setting is relatively niche, maybe the author wants to describe it in a more detailed way, which is fine, but when it is detailed, it will appear to be watery, and there will either be a lack of updates or a good arrangement of plot advancement. If the plot is too slow, especially the description of the plot of the movie, there will always be some people who don't like it, and some people like it. If it can't be pushed faster or the volume is larger, it will be difficult to read and it will be difficult to recommend. I hope the author can arrange the main plot and branch plots and learn the skills of other books to make the writing interesting and good.

It's very sad that the main character's first movie has come to an end and I'm not even satisfied with what I wrote. I have read all the suggestions and criticisms from book friends, thank you very much. The biggest problem for new writers is that they don't know how to control the rhythm. They come up with ideas as they come up. Originally, the plot of the movie had already been thought out in the outline. As I was writing, I suddenly discovered a fatal logical loophole. I couldn't continue writing without changing it. However, the plot has been written for the release, so I can only bite the bullet and keep it straight. In the end, the quality deteriorates and it becomes unreliable. I can only say that I deserve it. I even had the idea of ​​deleting the book and rewriting it. Finally, after thinking about it, I decided to just leave it at that. I'm done with it anyway, and I'm mentally prepared even if I don't get any grades. The subject matter itself is relatively niche. I will try my best to end it and avoid the problems mentioned by book friends. It is almost 200,000 words long. I will definitely finish it on the shelf. After all, it is the first novel. And my outline is also very complete. I have planned all the movies I will make in the next three films. I really can't bear to give up my hard work. That's all. If book friends are still willing to continue to support me, I will definitely try my best to write every plot that follows, and I will never be perfunctory. I will gain wisdom from each step, and I will just practice writing in the future. Thanks again!

The idea of ​​verité cinema is rarely popular.

I just read a novel idea and was inspired by the author's book. In the future, when VR technology is completely mature, the screenwriter will be the director. The screenwriter will have a good underlying structure of the world and set the main line. Players are invited to participate, and the protagonists and supporting actors have a degree of freedom, just like a game where exciting adventures are edited into a movie. Games and movies are unified. What do you think?

I haven't seen this kind of subconscious type for a long time. It was quite popular before. I can only say that the author will keep up the good work. I look forward to the next new book when the writing matures.

Why isn't it updated? It's been 8 days

Very good and very creative. As an old bookworm, I was very surprised to read this book.

Anyone want to discuss vérité cinema?