Beginning with Robinson Crusoe

April tickets are given, this is desert island survival, I get annoyed when I see the school beauty, flight attendant and female teacher

I haven't read it yet, so let me take a look. The first masterpiece I read in elementary school was Robinson Crusoe. I bought five editions and I still read it now. I really like it.

The writing is too detailed, which reduces the information density and makes it a bit tiring to look at 😟 The idea is very good, it would be better if the text could be more concise.

I feel that the author has posted it in the wrong place. The writing style is delicate and the emotional description is good, but this kind of writing is not a web article. It is difficult to catch the readers at once. It is refreshing, and the emotions are ups and downs. The web article should have a sense of reality, but it does not need to be realistic. This thing is not reportage.

It's a very good book. I think we should stick to it. This book will probably be a niche one, but there will definitely be some readers who will persevere. Come on! Looking forward to it being put on the shelves and looking forward to updates!

Well written, but the genre is a bit niche

Don't brag like this. Some fools have done this in real life. The two wanted to live in seclusion on an isolated island, so they went to an island they thought was deserted. In less than half a year, they all went crazy, and one of them hacked the other to death. Less than a day after the hacking, the police came ashore and arrested the remaining people. The police explained: There are no other residents here, but this is also our country's territory, and our country's laws apply. It is not a place outside the law. According to the laws of this country, murder is a crime, regardless of mental state. So he must be arrested. A reporter asked the police: Why did you arrest someone today when someone was killed yesterday? How do you know? Police answer: As long as it is the territory of a country, where are the real uninhabited islands? We all watched it through satellites. We saw it when he started killing people. However, it is remote and only one or two people live here, so it does take time to get here, so we can't stop him immediately.

In order to verify, I first went to a certain degree, where there were no cultural relics, and I just made up nonsense. Then I went to a certain degree, and was almost deceived by a "folk historian". Then I went to check the archaeological reports on the Langling Ancient City in Zhumadian, Henan Province, and found that Director Zhou, who was in charge of the project, did not dare to say that the unearthed terracotta tile set columns were pressurized water wells. He came to a conclusion and categorically said that pressurized water wells existed in the Han Dynasty, and he added that they were quite common in rural areas. The picture shows Dahe Daily's special report on Langling Ancient City. After searching for information many times to no avail, I could only hold my nose and open CNKI, and found several papers on ancient water wells. Finally, I found that the paper did not mention that there were pressurized water wells in the Han or Song Dynasties. There were dozens of water wells of various shapes listed, but there were no pressurized water wells. At the end of the final paper, the author's thoughts on the research on ancient sucrose are even more thought-provoking. For some issues involving historical reality, scientific researchers often need to spend several years to verify carefully before they can finally draw a conclusion. However, some people dare to believe that it is true just by relying on a certain AI answer, or they feel that they are authoritative after reading some popular science. In fact, most people who see a piece of information are more willing to go to a certain level to verify it than people who "think it" or "feel it". However, I still hope that the so-called "folk history researchers" or "folk scientists" can publish less unverified remarks to avoid bad effects. Finally, if someone finds cultural relics confirmed to be pressure wells from the Song Dynasty or Han Dynasty, welcome to slap me in the face. I will apologize to the boss. I believe this is also a process of learning and progress.

If you could only write one Robinson Crusoe, with a richer plot, then this book would be considered a masterpiece. If you shorten each story and use the limited number of words to describe more stories, I think your grades will be better. But you have been rooted in Robinson Crusoe for so long that your readers have been screened over and over again. At this time, you are traveling to another world. To be honest, I think it is difficult.

I've seen Robinson Crusoe several times before, just because I thought it was very enjoyable to farm, especially where the tree wall was built.

So, the protagonist traveled to a deserted island for a day and a night without eating, and he was still alive and kicking. What kind of physical fitness is this! Normal people in modern times will feel weak and unwilling to move if they don't eat for half a day, let alone a whole day, right? Normal people are not the kind who lie still!

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you read the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously formed, and the voices of praise became louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

Isn't it good to write about survival in the wilderness and live a peaceful life? Why are you always thinking about catching savages? 😥 People's hearts are separated from each other. Robinson Crusoe can tame them, so why do you think you can tame them too? If you surrender on the surface and give you a stick when you are not paying attention, then you will be honest.

Will the protagonist be the only extraordinary person in the main world in the later stage?

The author is so outrageous that he stayed like Robinson Crusoe for 23 years and finally went crazy. Robinson relied on religious sustenance and Friday to accompany him for several years to survive, and this is just a novel. Deye stayed on a deserted island for 60 days. In the later period, he was crazy about home and his mentality was a bit broken. Even if compared with the three years it took De Ye to complete the Amazon, the span of 23 years is still too outrageous. Not to mention that De Ye had contact with human civilization along the way.

It's good at first, but I'm always interested in savages. Maybe it would be better for the author to write more content like this, but thinking about the real situation makes me shudder. Can you sleep peacefully with cannibals?

This island is simply a model of a man-made ecological disaster. Goats, rabbits, cats... So many invasive species are placed on an island, and it's like breeding Gu.

The front is the fairy grass, which is a slow but basically dry chapter. The middle part got a little too big and the flavor changed, but fortunately it ended quickly. Overall, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. However, the slow start at the beginning also makes this book seem to be underperforming. I have ordered it all and I hope the author will stick to it and finish it.

It can only be said that after the end of the book Robinson, the data should have dropped too much, and the author could not accept the reality, so he became a eunuch.

The first copy lasted for more than 10,000 days in total. I looked at the table of contents and found that the latest chapter had survived for less than 1,300 days and 860,000 words were written. According to the ratio, 10,000/1300≈7.69*86≈6.61 Million words. I wrote 5 copies of the introduction. The one with a clear time is the third one that lasts for a hundred years. The plot, 6.6 Million words in 28 years, 10 million words is not enough to write all the copies. The author updates about 4,000 words a day, 1000/0.4=2500 Days, well, it takes less than 7 years, but if each copy is as long as the current copy, it will be impossible to finish it within ten years.

There is a program in the United States called Wilderness Survival, and if you stick to it until the end, you will be rewarded with hundreds of thousands of dollars in prizes. I forget the third season or which season, but an awesome player persisted until the 76th day and had no problem surviving. However, he quit the competition because of loneliness. The winning one is 78 days. Thirty years of loneliness? I probably can't speak and can't communicate. I can't think of any other ending other than becoming crazy.

Robinson Crusoe gives me a feeling of survival in the wilderness. Since the author wants to write this fanfic, I suggest that the writing style should not be too delicate. It is best to write about the feeling of exploring a desert island. Survival, exploration, and farming to accumulate food are the cool points of this theme.

Damn, I came here to survive in the wild, and I have made so many decisions. Are you telling me this is a hegemony article?

If the author only planned to write about the plot world of Robinson, it would be fine to be so detailed, but now it has more than 800,000 words, and it would be too boring to dwell on it. There are so many worlds to come! I hope the author will consider it.

The author really captured Chen Zhou and went to a desert island to survive. This is a real reality show, and everyone here is an audience 🙂🙂🙂

It may not be written exactly according to the topography of the island, but it can be used as a reference.

Open a reward item building to provide the author with some ideas

Why is he a eunuch? The writing is beautiful.

I stopped watching the second one after seeing that it was prehistoric, which is indeed a pity. It's rare to see a film about a desert island and farming that is so well written. And very unique. It's a pity that I really don't feel like changing copies later. After carefully reading the author's remarks at the end of the book, I realized that if I really want to enjoy writing, I have to turn on the golden finger. The more it develops, the more enjoyable it will be, and I will no longer be able to regain the sense of accomplishment that I had before. It has also lost its previous advantages of writing about animals and daily life and writing about lonely moods, especially the last point. There are also many literary and youth writings at the beginning, but most of them are just moaning. This book is really well written, especially the extension of the original work. I suggest you download Mysterious Island and write down your basics first. Don't open this cheat book too big. You can add some deus ex machina in the middle, knock down the finished ones or change the map to slow down the pace and write more about daily life. There is no need to write too much about fighting. Surviving on a desert island is nothing more than fighting pirates and natives. Write more about farming and construction. In the later period, you can focus on civilization construction and climbing the technology tree, and less on archipelago hegemony.

I voted for my monthly vote, so the author is a eunuch?