
Douluo: Steady and Strong in Shrek
斗罗:在史莱克稳健变强
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 671k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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342Chapters
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Living in Bengbu, the protagonist has read Jin Yong's novels in his previous life, so he can restore Lingbo Weibu, and the effect of the restoration is better than that of ghost shadows and traces. Hahaha. Why didn't the protagonist look at Zhetian in his previous life and went to Douluo Continent to directly restore the Nine Secrets 😅
There are a lot of problems, they are all written by the brain. Let's clarify the basic settings first. The protagonist takes the soul guide train to Shrek. Where did Dou Er get the soul guide train? Later, he also bought a soul guide car. Dou Er's only means of transportation are horse carriages and flying soul guides. Flying soul guides seem to have started at the fourth level. Higher-level transportation is only available in the Sun and Moon Empire, and not everyone can have it. There is also a freshman competition that prohibits the use of soul guides. What second-level soul guides are not illegal? Also transformed into two Seven Killing Swords, besides the plant type, are there any other martial spirits that can be split? The name of your soul skill doesn't have this effect, does it? If you don't even follow the basic settings when writing a fanfic, what kind of fanfic are you writing? It would be great if you could write something original. You have the final say on the settings.
I specially rewarded 100 points just to complain.
I couldn't stand it until I reached Chapter 6. Let's talk about Lingbo Weibu in Chapter 6 first. The Human Tang Shenwang at least came from the martial arts world, and he already had this background. You, the protagonist, are created directly from scratch, just relying on the skills of the previous life novel. I checked some information about Lingbo Weibu in Jin Yong's novels: 1. Based on the sixty-four hexagrams of the Book of Changes: The footwork of Lingbo Weibu is exquisite, based on the eighty-eight and sixty-four hexagrams of the Yi Jing, and the user steps on the hexagrams in a specific order. 2. The gist of the footwork: The sixteen words in "Luo Shen Fu", "The movement is impermanent, if you are in danger, if you are in danger. If you are going to stop in difficult times, if you are going, then you are returning." These sixteen words seem to be the gist of this set of footwork, but to achieve this in the footwork requires a lot of hard practice. You, a student who just finished the college entrance examination in your previous life, have practiced it based on the descriptions in novels in your memory after so many years after reincarnation. You are really a great genius. During this period, you also have to practice soul power and hunt animals to make money. Just like this, your soul power is still at level 24. You boast that if you are not distracted by practicing footwork, you will not be lower than Tang Buddha's level 29 soul power at the same time. Not mentioning the gist of the second point, considering the first point alone, you, a wage earner who just finished the college entrance examination in your previous life, still have time to understand the sixty-four hexagrams of the I Ching for the moves in the novel? I'm afraid it's not the martial arts novels that were tested in the college entrance examination. Then the second point is, you go to sell milk tea for 7 copper coins a cup, but turn around and buy whale gum for 6,000 gold soul coins without hesitation. I originally thought it was a work-study program, but after all, I had no background (speaking of background, I have to complain about the seven-kill sword martial spirit inherited from my family, and as a result, I have no connection with the Nine Treasures Glazed Sect). At the beginning, I needed to join a hunting group to make money and hunt spirit beasts to obtain spirit rings. The 6,000 gold soul coins that I co-authored were probably saved from my original plan to buy letters of recommendation. Even a child can join a low-level soul hunting group. As a result, in the past 6 years, the hunting beasts have accumulated so much, it is a huge profit. The last point is simply that I personally hate the character Huo Yuhao, and I also hate the protagonist who has nanny tendencies.
I hope it is really stable and does not sell the sheep's head as the dog's meat.
The protagonist has been depressed and can become a god. Don't delay. Who cares if he keeps suppressing himself?
Doesn't a hundred thousand year soul ring have such a long shelf life? Hehehehe
What is the protagonist's second martial spirit? Also, the number of words in the chapters is a bit short.