People in Naruto Create the Strongest Kirigakure Village

I haven't seen such a good Naruto story for a long time. Come on, this book has been on my bookshelf for two weeks and I haven't read it. I recently picked it up and read it. I didn't expect it to be so well written. I'm wrong.

What it says is that Mizukage is actually the protagonist who incarnates as the dream master of everyone in Konoha. It is true that Konoha is a dog licker, so he can't really stand on his own side and let them be benevolent and bury him with Konoha?

I'm a newbie. I got excited and wrote a book in the new year, but I didn't expect that I signed a contract. When the website shortcoming came, I was more panicked because I had no experience at all, so I immediately started to search for posts through various channels to find ways. Among them, the most read one is data analysis. Yes, this is the reason why most new books are so popular. How many cuts are there for new books to be put into storage, how many conversions are there for one round, and how many cuts are there for intelligent push. I really don't want to cut it, but seeing the fluctuations in data, the increase and decrease in collections and reading, I will definitely be affected, and in the end I will not be able to escape the fate of cutting the book. So this time, I am going to cover my head and write more than 150,000 words. No data is viewed during this period. This has its disadvantages, of course. I can't tell which chapter is broken, which chapter is a poisonous point, and which chapter should be changed through data feedback. This requires everyone's help. Please criticize me logically and rationally. This can help me find the problem. I will read every post, really. Thank you.

In fact, Namikaze Minato is not very strong. He is strong in mobility. It's okay to kill Jonin, but as for Kage, his attack power is too weak.

To be honest, your book is really good. I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, but not many dare to change the plot in such a drastic way. Just keep writing. Now that I have followed Chapter 13, I won't talk about the main plot. You seem to know it very well. Let's talk about the branch line, an Uchiha Obito, this one can be guaranteed to be conquered when he sees Lin and joins Kirigakure Village. The other Kakashi line is to make the Sixth Hokage defect. This is not easy to operate. It depends on how you write it. The other thing that can be guessed is Lin's line. If Lin doesn't join Kirigakure, there is a high probability that Obito will be difficult to win. It also depends on your operation. There should be more branches with similar characters in the future, and they will be added to Hidden Mist Village one after another. It all depends on how you write it. To be honest, I am still looking forward to this. I am tired of watching Uchiha Konoha Hinata and so on, so it is good to write something new.

After reading the introduction, I thought it was the Mizukage, but in the end it was okay to be a jounin, but in the beginning when I tried to grab Hinata's eyeballs, I replaced them with eyes that were not my own, so that was okay, but there is still blood disease? I really don't understand this.

There is really no need for the author to just stare at Konoha and forcibly collect it to create Kirigakure. Taki-nin's Nanao can be captured and given to his own people. Doesn't the 4.5-Tail Iwa ninja often go out for walks? The whirlpool in the wild, the half-dead pool of blood, Xiaodi who is unwilling to be restrained, the cheated Yakura, Hibihu, providing his own bones to make materials for Scorpion is also a way to subjugate him. He only loves money, Kakuzu, Uncle Snake and the Ryuji Cave behind. There are so many weird things in the ninja world. Why do you have to guard Kakashi Daikai?

Not bad, at least he dared to attack a key character in Konoha. Some elementary school students write stories about other villages, and laugh to death when they meet important characters in Konoha.

There are so many talented people in the ninja world, and they just lick Konoha. I have all the talented ones in the ninja village, so why lick them?

After reading about ten chapters, I can tell that the author wants to write a protagonist with a high IQ, but the writing power is not enough. Every time he uses a strategy, I feel like I can do it. However, the supporting characters are very cooperative... The reason why Kakashi persuaded Zabuza is too weak... In order to highlight the protagonist and lower the IQ of the supporting characters, it is really unnecessary, just increase the system rewards, and cheating is done 🙂

NB actually thought of not changing the blood stains first and then changing them when encountering an opponent. If you change the blood stains, your operation will be full. Why don't you practice the blood stain ninjutsu?

It's a bit outrageous for the system to redeem real people. Isolated!

I remember there was a brother who kept posting chapter reviews a few days ago, so keep going, I want to have some fun.

In order to write this book well, the author deleted his girlfriend who had been pestering him. His girlfriend got angry and ran away. I said why did he have to do this? He said that if his girlfriend is gone, he can find one again, but he failed the readers who supported him and he will never be able to get over this hurdle in his life.

What a pity! It's a typical start high and go low. The opening is a bit innovative. I voted for it twice in a row. As a result, after writing, I kept surrounding the original protagonist group. You are Kirigakure, not Hokage.

The writing is a bit but not much, the hooks are big and complicated, and the plot is depressing, so it's okay.

Please rest assured, I will give you an outline below. Originally, I just wanted to use the hands of Namikaze Minato to push the protagonist to the limit and cause the evolution of the Corpse Vein, and then began to explain the future development of the Corpse Vein. I didn't expect that I would write about the feeling of overwhelming combat power. I'm really sorry, I really didn't mean that. 😭

Minato can actually transport others by touching them. Who in the entire ninja world can block this move? Why does Konoha still have to fight? All the shadows have been killed long ago!

Madara's character is destined not to pay attention to the protagonist. He only likes Hashirama. As long as the protagonist does not affect Obito, Mangekyo will not care about the protagonist. In his eyes, the wet bones are Mange's toy. It would be better to write about the arrangement of Black Zetsu after Madara's death. It feels funny when he sees Madara tripping up the protagonist, a newcomer who has just arrived in the shadow.

The writing is a bit poor, some parts seem very stiff, there should be some reference. Sixteen years old, fourth generation Mizukage.

You, the author, should study hard and improve your skills before writing novels. The writing style is not smooth at all, word for word, punctuation marks are unclear, the writing is rubbish, and the rhythm of the story is a mess.