Enlightenment Overnight, Starting from a Handyman Disciple

It's tied and I can finally say a few more words. Overall, it's pretty good, high-quality food and grass. The following comments contain spoilers, so be careful. Some of the plots and descriptions at the beginning were a bit problematic. The second lady spent a lot of pen and ink describing it, but her death in the end was unclear. Maybe the author will arrange a resurrection plot in the future? At present, it seems that death is a bit wasteful. Does it only serve the purpose of carrying the coffin out of the city to appear to share the same hatred with the enemy? After the story about Miss Shen's unruly and willful character, can she be in a state of mind that leads to self-mutilation, and still be determined to save her heartless father after a family tragedy? Moreover, this Magistrate Shen is really not a good person. It is not an exaggeration to say that everyone has to be punished. The protagonist actually helped to rescue him, and he almost stopped watching because of this. I feel like the author has thought about taking her into the harem? If you didn't have this intention, why would you touch someone's vagina like a romantic comedy? The existence of the characters must promote the development of the storyline. There are some characters that are of little use. After being promoted to the inner disciple, among the new brothers, the senior sister Fan has a memory point of a succubus. The senior brother has a slightly weak cyclone cultivation and is curious about the protagonist. Then we have to talk about Liu Shushan. We had a good relationship before, but after dating someone else, the relationship deteriorated. It sounds very similar to Yang Zhen's approach. The routine is too similar and it will be tiring, but it's okay if it can make people remember the name. The main character's spiritual power improved a little too fast. He jumped to more than ten levels in one breath. His spiritual consciousness was too powerful, and it felt like he was stuck again. Besides, there would be no need to practice spiritual power in the sect later on. The previous setting of eating trees to increase mental power has not been written for a long time. It is still the heavenly sense of eating trees. It seems that such a high-sounding skill has not been displayed. The relationship between the master and Gu Daolin? Looking at the previous description, I might even think that Gu has passed away. The previous explanation may not be too clear. There's not much else. I wanted to talk about it after I tied the game. The storyline is quite smooth, so I'm still willing to continue chasing it! Come on💪💪💪

The biggest advantage of this book is the fictional social framework, which is logical and realistic, and the details are well described. The protagonist has a golden finger, but it's not too outrageous. Nowadays, there are too many short stories, which are written every second. The protagonist's usual behavior pattern has no logic at all, let alone the logic of the social framework.

I keep following it, but it never updates. It's okay, but I won't update it. What do fans think?

The first is that the name of the martial arts is really confusing and clumsy, and it's amazing The second is that the author must not bring his or her bad character into the protagonist. Really, think about how mentally tough a ruthless person who practices martial arts for 18 hours a day is, and the protagonist you write is acting like a street kid every day.

Chapter 5 of Golden Finger only explained a little bit about time travel among the things that should be completed in Chapter 3 of Golden Finger. Chapter 5 of Golden Finger didn't mention it specifically. It just kept it secret in a few sentences. Without the power of writing, I wanted to reveal it bit by bit. I didn't want to fall into the cliche, but I didn't write anything new. I mean, missing a few sentences makes people feel confused. The main reason is that what should be explained is not explained, and the order of the plot is out of order. The reader is not you. You may understand everything, but the reader needs to read your words to understand what you are talking about, so the order is very important!

Liang Cao, a common golden finger novel, has some bad points at the beginning, some of the emotional scenes are unsightly, but the portrayal gradually becomes better later, and some character plots are slightly poisonous, but it will not affect it if you skip it. The plot level is stable, with some urine points, and it is refreshing enough. It is considered wonderful among many novice novels. I don't know how the plot will unfold later. I hope the author can write more story-telling and more exciting. I wish the author will write better and better and update more😍😍😍

To be honest, the front part is quite interesting, but the process of obtaining the Soul Technique is too frustrating. There is obviously a golden finger, and it is obviously a great pleasure to use the golden finger to obtain things that others can't get despite all their efforts. However, the setting of the Divine Soul Technique in the book abolishes the golden finger, and suddenly people's desire to read is gone. After working on the golden finger for a long time, it can only play a small role. Once the core resource is involved, the golden finger will be invalid, which is not fun at all. . .

Why do people always vomit after killing people? Do you guys have any real cases? I wonder if there wasn't vomit everywhere on the battlefield during the war?

Chapter 1: They are all handymen and disciples who do dirty work, but the protagonist has something about him that makes other people disgusted. Don't you think it's funny? I have a smell myself, so why would I dislike the smell in others? The description is too deliberate and sickly. The author probably has not gone deep into this class and does not understand it at all. It's very stupid to deliberately highlight this rhythm.

I watched level 357 and couldn't stand it anymore. Generally speaking, it was good. However, I wanted to kill my childhood friend and was poisoned by others. Later, I helped Shen Mirizhi. Shen Mirizhi was not a good person and didn't trust the protagonist, but she licked her face to help. It made people speechless. In the end, it was better not to write the emotional scene. It was not interesting at all and only poisoned people.

After reading the beginning, the protagonist is indeed mentally retarded. With more experience, he looks down on others and keeps talking about selling insurance all his life. Are you proud of having more experience? If I can't see time travel, I'll just sell life insurance. A handyman looks down on others just because he has a cheat, what strength does he have? I thought you were the strongest in the world. People who are not the protagonist can live for at most two chapters.

It's such a good book to read in one sitting! The first few dozen chapters are so toxic that it's easy to abandon the book, but the more you write in the later chapters, the better! The author should revise the front part, what a pity for such a good book! !

Just stick to the plot and don't show off your crotchless protagonist's emotional intelligence. You said you can either just show off your cards and be a novice with a golden finger, or you can be too arrogant and unsophisticated. You have to have a high emotional intelligence person with ten years of insurance experience. Not to mention his underwear, it's disgusting to watch.

Abandoned book as title

At the beginning, I could still see the upgrade in martial arts training. Later, I was selling antiques, painting, and reading device spirits for other things. After reading Chapter 50, I felt like it was a mess. Also, when I started working as a handyman, I only had a few dozen copper coins a month for money and expenses, but after almost 20 chapters, I became an apprentice and even a few hundred taels were not enough. What kind of economy?🤔

Pros: The fighting is really well written! Disadvantages, let's not talk about common sense errors or anything like that. After all, it is an online novel 1. There are shortcomings in shaping people. Do you think the protagonist has a distinct personality? That's so obvious, vulgar, licking dogs, and never wiping his butt clean when doing things (for example, it's really uncomfortable not to collect the body and bury it after killing Jie Daohan when he wakes up. He insists on walking slowly towards the knife). There is nothing wrong with insisting that the character has characteristics, but the growth of the protagonist is almost nonexistent. Except Amomum villosum no longer has psychological pressure, he is still the same vulgar, licking dogs, and not wiping his butt clean when doing things. There are also supporting characters. The only one who has been successfully portrayed with unique characteristics is Shen Mi Zhi, the psychologically twisted Bian Po. That Ximen Kankan is simply unbearable to look at. Forget it that he is a dandy and a wretched person. When the Bai Yueguang you have been thinking about dies, won't you stay by the body? Xiao Yu said that you were interested even though he didn't find the protagonist? That's a few white moonlights. I thought he was really willing to take responsibility when he tried to kill him in the carriage that summer. Speaking of taking responsibility, you bribed that person Xue Qing. You drew the information he gave you on the picture. When he was found out, he was whipped to death. You didn't help him collect his body and make peace? When you see someone being beaten to death, what you think is that the Xia family inside is still angry, so you pick up a box and run away, and your father hasn't even said that he should leave first. 2. The emotional drama is written like a joke, and the words above Ximen Kankan can also prove this store. There are problems with the writing of things that happened in the same period of time. These are all flaws. After all, this book is only at the level of food, and I am too lazy to criticize such things.

A work that defies heaven, if Qidian can score you must score zero

After saving for two or three days, I finished reading it in a short while, and the main character has not been upgraded yet. It's obvious that I still want to write about the world of Xianxia. You can't even practice martial arts until now. It's a waste if you fail.

There is no problem with the setting and writing, but the pacing is a bit poor, and the beginning of the chapter does not grasp the priorities. For example: the protagonist's personality is a bit pretentious, and the conflict between the handyman and the protagonist at the beginning is a complete waste of pen and ink; in reality, insurance friends, needless to say property insurance, the middle-level and above in human insurance are the best among people. In the opening chapter, the protagonist has too much inner drama and behaves a bit cowardly on the outside, such as kneeling down, trembling and being scared. How come there is no inner drama? The overall feeling of pleasure is much worse, which affects the performance of the book.

，，        ， The portrayal of the supporting characters feels quite fleshed out, but occasionally feels a bit fragmented. The protagonist is said to be kind-hearted, but he does not hesitate or consciously do evil things. The protagonist is said to be evil-minded, but he is not clean enough. In the end, the typos are a bit minor, maybe it's not full-time.

Do you really not understand what the author is trying to write? You, an apprentice of an escort agency, actually engage in art? I can understand you saying that you earn the price difference by selling antiques. After all, practicing martial arts requires money. Street painting costs 10 taels a piece, what a waste! Have you ever looked at how much a street painting actually costs? It ranges from 10 to 30 yuan. 10 Taels of silver is equivalent to an average person's income in two years. Instead of spending 200,000 to find an apprentice from an escort agency to paint, what are you thinking! Art is valuable only when you are famous. It is even more valuable when you are dead. It is not very valuable if you are not famous.

Poison point 1: It's okay to earn 10 taels per painting, and it's understandable to make some extra money occasionally, but you said that I can steadily earn 100 taels from ten paintings a day, and so are you. I said I hunt 100 kilograms a day, so can I hunt 3,000 kilograms of prey in a month? Then I plant a chicken feather field and directly return to fishing and hunting. Isn't it good to live in the water and the soil? Poison point 2: A painting takes more than ten minutes, and there is a full quarter of an hour of description. Does the author not know that a quarter of an hour is 15 minutes, and does he not know that an hour is two hours? If you haven't drawn before, can you search on Baidu? There is also martial arts training, which is dark and dark. You sleep as little as Einstein in his later years. You also practice dancing and practice to death. If you are a cultivator, it is still okay. If you practice martial arts and become the best in the world, you are still a mortal. Overall evaluation: Broken Heart Grass

I still like reading this book. Let me talk about the reasons why this book is not popular in my opinion. 1. The title of the book is not easy to understand. Some people who like this kind of book are not interested after reading the title. For example, there are many popular popular books nowadays, such as "My xxx" and "Martial Arts xxx". The reason why they are so popular is that they give a sense of immersion. 2. If the introduction is about the essence of martial arts training and is well written, it should be able to retain some people as an introduction. 3. The story is well written, but the rhythm of the plot is not well controlled. I feel that the writing is cumbersome to improve the mental power. 4. A good book always has a companion or pet by its side. For example, if you write about a fat man who joins the escort agency together when he is a child, and helps the author overcome the difficulty of being able to eat meat in the early stage, and then takes him to practice martial arts in return, the plot will be much easier to season. Come on, this book is just for practicing, summarizing more, and learning more well-written similar books. I believe the author will also be a great master in the future.

I originally thought it was an ordinary upgrade article, but I didn't expect that the author became more and more fierce as he wrote it! Amazing!

It's so boring, more than 300 chapters are still hanging around in the county escort agency

Duan Rong

I think Huo's novels cover several aspects. The plot has ups and downs, the settings are reasonable, and there are contrasts. The scenes and characters are described so that readers feel like they are actually there. The protagonist of this book has devoured so many weapon spirits, but his soul is still at the first level. There is no explanation. Do you have to learn the Taiyi Sect to grow? I believe many buddies also have this question about this setting. There is also a world view. The jump directly from the county martial arts school to the national power Taiyi Sect is too fast, not to mention the city-level forces in the middle. If I were the leader of the Taiyi Sect, I would first have to cultivate a killer organization. Anyway, just pass the blame.

As some book friends said, the opponents are all Conan, and when one of them dies, the other one jumps up. The playboy who used to have a good time and feast every day has no clue when investigating other cases. As soon as the last Conan dies, he immediately picks up his wits. If he checks the case of the protagonist and looks at the files, he can see that there is something wrong with the protagonist. Seeing that the protagonist and the woman were intoxicated by aphrodisiacs, I couldn't bear it anymore and simply gave up.

Xiao Yu

I read the latest chapter in one breath~ I still have the motivation to keep people reading~~ I hope that the level of articles in subsequent updates can be maintained