Game of Thrones Conqueror

Instinctively disgusted with the usury regime in Braavos

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

No wonder the protagonist's name looks familiar, Griffith, Legend of the Sword and Wind, a ruthless man who stands in front of the Minotaur protagonist 😂

Compared with original works, fan works have a minimum guarantee, and they will definitely attract the interest of some fans of the original works. Of course, the appeal of this work lies not only in the subject matter itself, but also in the design of some plots. It is true that the author claims to have a headache because of the plot. If the author is just interested in playing for fun, I won't talk nonsense here to annoy people. However, since you said that you hope to determine the future direction through grades, there are two very low-level problems in this work that must be solved as soon as possible, and because the problems are too basic, it will not be too difficult to correct them. The first is the use of personal pronouns. When a person appears twice or more in a sentence, you need to use pronouns like "you, me, him" or omit the name of the person to lubricate the sentence - such as "Xiao Ming stood there, Xiao Ming felt extremely heartbroken." "Xiao Ming couldn't help but shed tears." In terms of perception, it was far inferior to "Xiao Ming stood there, feeling so heartbroken that he couldn't help but shed tears." Of course, if your purpose is to add a few words, it's your fault that I didn't understand. The second is the use of punctuation marks: character words need to be kept in quotation marks. If you don't like to use quotation marks, don't use them at all. You can't use some but not others. If some commas can be removed, there is no need to leave them in and fragment the whole sentence. , Three or four commas in a sentence of no more than one line will greatly affect the perception; conversely, if the sentence has been completed and it is time to put a period to start the next sentence, a comma will make people particularly uncomfortable; of course, there are other problems with other symbols, but let's start with these. Of course, the literary requirements of online novels are relatively low, and authors do not need to have a professional background. But since you plan to eat this bowl of rice, you can't keep making the most basic problems. If you look at those famous white novels, although they may not have particularly complicated literary expressions, they are basically relatively smooth. However, some chapters of your work look a bit messy. Since the author now has more time to work on the work, in addition to racking his brains to conceive of the plot, it is also recommended to spend an hour and a half every day to catch up on the grammar class. Finally, it's not popular in society to meddle in other people's own business. Most people can just quit. So if the reply from the author or some reader friends is "Hey, where did this doctor of literature come from?" Or "You are so good, why don't you buy books and read them? Why do you show off your sense of superiority in the online literary circle?" Or "The author is at least already creating, but where can I read your masterpiece?" If this is the case, all the fault is mine, and I apologize in advance. I'm sorry.

The dog-licking novel is here again. The protagonist has a dragon and an army, but he actually licks a woman who has nothing. I really don't understand why. Is it just for the so-called legitimacy of the throne? Then why didn't Aegon marry a so-called princess when he conquered the continent to achieve the so-called legitimacy of the throne? What did Aegon rely on for his conquest? It is an army, it is a dragon, he is a conqueror, not the protagonist who is a compromiser. Why should the novel be called a conqueror of the game of thrones? It might as well be called a compromiser of the game of thrones, a conqueror of women, a winner of dog licking, and a conqueror of crawling into bed. How appropriate!

When will the Overlord's Egg appear 😁

Let me tell you the truth on my own behalf. You have good writing skills. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I just found one chapter that has no meaning at all. What's the point? It's not fun at all, it's a bit frustrating. I don't know if it's watchable and written seriously, but the plot is not interesting. The protagonist has always been in a state of incompetence, and there is no golden finger. He is still young and imprisoned. There are more than ten chapters that have nothing to do with the protagonist, and there is no sense of substitution. I don't know if it's my own problem or something. Anyway, I feel that the protagonist you wrote is perfect. There is no sense of immersion at all. I don't know if it will change in the future, but if people who read novels can endure 3 chapters, it will be considered good. Otherwise, there will be no 3 golden chapters. But you really can't say it's poisonous, you can't say it's water, and you can't say you have no writing skills.

It is said that Targaryen means Aryan Shield ~ Divine Shield?

Griffith! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist can directly say to the Targaryen family, "I am also a descendant of the Dragon King family. If my ancestors went to Westeros with Aegon, the King of Westeros might not know what his surname would be."

Author: Will you, Griffith, be the ultimate insult?

Not all the Game of Thrones in the North are here to help out.

This is my first time writing a novel. My updates are not as good as those of older authors, but I will try my best to stabilize it with two chapters a day. I'm afraid that if I write too fast, the quality won't keep up, and the whole book will collapse. Now I write each chapter and check each paragraph dozens of times before I feel confident.

I don't know if there is a forum for voting, but I haven't been able to find it yet. Now it's up to you to decide whether it's a single heroine or multiple heroines. This is my first time writing a novel, and I was afraid of not being able to write a good emotional line, so I initially decided to have a single female protagonist. However, some book friends thought that there should be more female protagonists, so I leave the decision-making power to you.

Come on, keep it up🤭

It is a good first book, but the plot arrangement is too deliberate and difficult for people to relate to. The character creation is too thin and the content is too thin. The links before and after are not strong, and there are few details. Come on, try to learn more experience. New authors basically have to go through this process💪

Come on, the author, don't be a eunuch, I give you your votes!