Become Aquaman from Black Robe

The protagonist is not strong enough and indecisive. He has no autonomy and no thoughts of his own. The protagonist does what others ask him to do.

1. This book is very dull. There is nothing in the first chapter, just an introduction. 2. Things in the past life can be mentioned in several chapters. 3. There are too many inner dramas, and they are contradictory. For example, when I went to the water to test my ability, I saw a robbery, and then the inner drama started. To simplify it, I want to help or not, because I saw an oriental face, so I said I wanted to be a superhero, and then I helped. I didn't read the interview, and I gave up here.

Don't mention the inheritance of more than one billion, which will make the protagonist look like Zhi Z. The protagonist really wants to get money by going to the bottom of the sea to get tens of billions.

Mera even offered to leave with the protagonist, but the protagonist didn't want to. The reason was that he had to be single-minded. It wouldn't look good if he didn't accept it. Mera can no longer survive at the bottom of the sea because she helped you seize the throne. But if you don't want the throne, it's fine. Mera won't take her with you either. She just lost her temper as soon as she entered the pit and gave up.

The way to promote the plot is too passive. The protagonist keeps saying that the people of the motherland are giant babies, but I feel that the protagonist is not even as good as giant babies. At least they will find milk for themselves...

This protagonist's character is really twisted. I want to live a comfortable life, but I jump up and down all the time. While saying that he would not take part in the danger, he went to wander again. While saying that he didn't like Starlight, he went to lick her again. While saying this, he asked Xingguang to be a little more modest, and at the same time asked her to be a hero. No matter what he chooses, he will always be dissatisfied and complain with negative energy. I don't know why the author set the protagonist's character like this. Maybe you think ordinary people are so twisted? To highlight the sense of modernization?

I searched for the protagonist's image and changed the hairstyle, and it's really not bad

The fourth season of Black Robe is out. The people of the motherland ordered the deep sea to give locomotive mouth. It's so funny.

After having sex with a woman, you felt embarrassed and asked her to cover it up with something, which meant that you were still shy. What did you want to express by writing like this? It's both arrogant and upright. What a stupid thing to write. Wooden club

Learned a lot of street writing techniques

A mentally retarded novel. You choose to offend the people of your motherland in order to make some money. You really want money.

Very pertinent

Author, you are really a master of persuasion, you must use a sword! Cheap or not! Can I use a fork in COS Neptune 😤? A third-rate online game is visual. You are not a setting expert. Just set a frame and add whatever is missing in the future! What you are doing is piracy!

The black robe part is pretty good, but the Japanese women are ugly, and the main character has aesthetic issues, that's it.

Crazy novels about traveling through time and becoming a superhero. Talking about money, money, money every day is just crazy. Isn't money just casual for the protagonist? The writing is as speechless as a loser intern

The most shitty thing, Marvel DC can't draw popular characters, so it repeatedly makes useless tools and settings. You write fanfics and you have no shortage of characters, yet you still do this stuff?

The characterization is really rubbish. Halfway through Gouba, my only impression of the male protagonist is that he is nonsensical and likes to be yin and yang. It seems that the author has not honed his writing skills well. He talks all over the place and the whole article is full of complaints.

The plot of Chapter 45 is really bad. The whole plot is meaningless. Conflicts are forcibly created and the methods of resolution are poor. It's like I randomly coded it out to make up the number of words after I got stuck.

Sorry. I thought it was Neptune on the bed.

Now I look at it with mixed emotions. . I once read a book written by a person from the motherland. Later, the book introduced a parallel universe and played the game of people from the motherland. Then the book became useless and the results plummeted. Now this book also plays this trick. . . It makes people feel quite complicated. Not that it doesn't look good, but I am afraid that it will be like the book I mentioned earlier. I am also afraid of seeing people from parallel universes traveling back and forth into the universe of the protagonist. What I personally hate the most is that after finally clearing out the No. 1 Villain, the No. 1 Villain from the parallel universe comes back. This is like cleaning up a lonely person. I know that the author has his own ideas and plans, but he is afraid of ruining it. These recent updates, to be honest, I haven't brought Starlight to Marvel to watch, at least not as much fun as Gingo's bickering. . . . Of course, it's probably my own problem. I've been disgusted by the enemies and visitors from the parallel universe in some books, so I don't really want to see this kind of thing.

Why are you not afraid of the God of Stories, not afraid of Eternity, not afraid of Supreme Strange Infinite Ultron, but are you afraid of Dragon Balls? ? ? You said that Dragon Ball explodes every three to five planets, so aren't you afraid that the universe you travel through will be one of the universes destroyed by Infinite Ultron? Even the upper limit of MCU's power is much higher than that of Dragon Ball, right?

Even if there is no heroine, the harem will accept it. . I really can't stand it when a single woman chooses this one. .

As in the title, is it surprising, unexpected, irritating or exciting?

The fifth season of Black Robe is out. Let's continue writing another one. There will be traffic.

In order to avoid anyone who did not read the comments on the shelf, or the author said it after the sixth update, I will explain it again here. The update time in the future will no longer be one chapter at noon and one chapter in the evening, but two chapters with a total of 6,000 words will be released at 6 p. M. And there will be occasional updates. Hope everyone knows. (*◎ｖ◎*)

Having already done the bad job of double penetration, I don't know what this author will do next.

It feels like it was ghostwritten, not the same author at all Although the IQ is not good in the early stage, the characterization is in line with the original work, and the protagonist is also an interesting person. However, in Aquaman, the protagonist is displeased with everything, and the characterization is useless. It is like going from the starting point of the old white novel to the tomato novel Don't read it, bye.

It can't be a single heroine, it's probably not appropriate to have a single heroine who has an abortion.

I really can't stand it when I see the back part, it's such a mess

It's clear who the villain is.