Comprehensive Martial Arts: Reborn as a Female Game Character

After reading Chapter 43, I don't know why. After watching it, I felt suffocated. The protagonist kept walking in circles where others had marked it, and there was no sense of detachment. I don't know what you are like, but that's just me! I traveled through another world, and without my parents or relatives, I would really do it for the people I met a few times. And compromise? And would I really risk my life for a man named Yue Fei? We moderns really don't know. Why did Yue Fei die? We saved it this time, but what about next time? When he was in the feudal monarchy, you should understand that in the society of the feudal monarchy. Even if there are 100 Yue Fei. Nothing can be changed.

Author, you should go to the female channel! How to say it? You can also write stories about female protagonists in male videos, but don't make it look like a palace drama with plots here and there. In male videos, the kind-hearted protagonist will roar when there is injustice on the road, and if he is ruthless, he will kill decisively, and if he can kill, don't leave it to tomorrow.

After reading Chapter 60, according to the plot, it should be considered the beginning of revenge, but why can't I feel any pleasure at all? To sow discord and instigate fights? Can this be considered revenge? You might as well learn from the gun fairy next door and kill the emperor from beginning to end, nailing the emperor to the dragon throne. It's so cool. This is revenge.

Wind Chimes

In this introduction, you can't write emotional scenes and still be ambiguous?

The recent plot, how should I put it, is lukewarm, the main plot is not clear, and it is all pretense and failure. The transition after the protagonist's revenge makes people feel as if the protagonist is invincible and about to take off, and then suffers from deflation here. The author is also very good at breaking chapters. The plot itself has nothing interesting to watch, and then it drags on for a whole chapter every time, and ends there when the protagonist wants to pretend. It is recommended that the author think carefully about how to break the chapter in the future. The tepid plot is broken like this. Personally, it should be very unpleasant, and the plot has few interesting points.

The introduction also said that there is no cp for singles, but at first the smell of lily was all over the sky 😅

Author, I wish you happiness. Next time you write about a male with a female protagonist, you should first consider the audience. After all, as a male, my sexual orientation has always been female. This is too advanced for me.

I hope the protagonist can look like a time traveler and not reveal his true feelings easily.

The author clearly knows what plot points are poisonous, so why did he insist on writing it out?