Cyberpunk and Transformers

They say they don't have a harem, but in fact they engage in all sorts of ambiguities

Will the protagonist recover later? At present, it seems that the time traveler has been driven crazy by the Uzumaki Gang 🤤🤤

Come on, author, don't listen to the harem talk. I see now that I think you still have two brushes, just write what you want to write.

If you don't write more female protagonists in the fanfiction, it's better to just read the original work 🤫

The author sets the protagonist to be a Cybertronian/Sage Goldfinger. The combination of the Goldfinger of creating Cybertronian life forms and the world view of 2077 is quite innovative. I can write more about the recent plot, in which Cybertronian characters come into contact with various local humans, giving people in the 2077 world a visually "Cybertronian shock" plot. Even for the 2077 world, the transformation and technology tree of the Cybertronians are like deus ex machina. But if I want to raise a question, I think the character descriptions of these Cybertronian characters currently appearing are too homogeneous, and they are all original images, although I know that the same character in Transformers will have completely different appearances and personalities in different works. But I think the author should create some more "familiar" and "popular" Cybertronian characters (of course these Cybertronians are all vehicles in the changed 2077 worldview), such as the Digger Team, the Fear Team, and the Flying Tiger Team.

It would be hypocritical not to dismantle the CP. Try putting the heroine on your bed? You Liu Xiahui?

Come on, author, you are currently writing very well. Follow your own pace. Don't be led astray. Trust yourself.

Come on, author, although this subject matter is difficult to popularize, if it is written well, the results will be very good, such as Lille next door. Also, it is not recommended that the entire book be too long, unless you are willing to adopt some settings from board games.

The idea is great, damn the writing👻

If you don't write about the harem, unless you write very well, there will be many fewer readers if you write later.

The protagonist's schizophrenia is divided into three tool men, which also plays a role in limiting the size of Goldfinger. The character design depends on everyone's taste, so I won't mention it. The main problem is that I can't see what the main plot is, and the protagonist doesn't have a strong sense of presence. I haven't seen v appear yet, and there are a lot of Edgewalker characters. It gave me the impression of being a dic, and then it was a group portrait, with the main character looking like the background. A group of side characters are constantly doing side tasks, just like the novel I read in the game with the background of the game. It's very dry. Just dry food. Those who like Edgewalker can eat it. People like me who have only played 2077 should leave first.

So this Red Sky Demon is the father of the protagonist who came out early after wasting so much effort 😰

Just like the title, I hope friends who are willing to read this book can say something, even if you want to criticize me, the comment area is too deserted.

Who is the protagonist? There are three golden cards. It's so confusing.

I don't feel any discomfort at the moment, the idea is good and it has potential

The settings are pretty good. . But it seems stupid to deliberately expose David and then protect him.

I just picked up this book and read it straight away. The perspective is strange, and the character style is obviously not awkward. I feel pretty good. However, after reading these chapters, I am more worried about whether the protagonist will suddenly change in the future. The current image of the schizophrenic protagonist has been engraved in people's hearts no matter whether it is good or bad. If Later, if the personality fuses and the temperament changes drastically or becomes as emotional as a human being, it will be as disgusting as charm, rebellion and whitewashing. After all, the goal of purifying the world has been stated, and it must not be emotional, right? After all, it is not a human brain, and there must be cold reason. The setting of the protection agreement is worth discussing. You can bring Sara back to life, so why should you care too much about the life and death of other plot characters (humanity value? Is it corroded by fire?) The intensity of the current battle has increased. Isn't it true that V has just started a small fight in the game? If you want him to intervene, you can't cyberize him? If you win this time, the whole world will probably be in an uproar. After the war, all the forces will definitely want to reach out or the Internet Supervisor will convene all countries to attack together. It is impossible for you to hide and develop secretly, occupy the whole or part of Night City and compete with all parties? If the battle in the big scene cannot be crushed, the only thing that matters is size. Will it turn into explosive soldiers Taneda Wen🤔 (unreasonable association) later on? And then there is the Ye clan... The thing on the moon... Absorbing the AI ​​outside the wall and trying to stand in the sky? … Thinking too much makes me sleep…

Over-elevating the characters of cyberpunk has resulted in the protagonist having many clown behaviors and being poisonous.