
Under One Person: I Have the Ghost Swordsman System
一人之下:我有鬼剑士系统
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 291k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Not pretty. Tell me what time it is. First, saying that the protagonist is a sissy means that the protagonist's influence is feminine. It doesn't fit the feeling of Ghost Swordsman. Secondly, Chen Duo's heart was moved when he came up. Later, he kissed Chen Duo's hand, which was very embarrassing. Third, a commonplace question is that the ghost swordsman in the novel must be the sword spirit. However, we berserkers are the masters. Everyone who wrote about Sword Soul was disgusted by it.
I feel like the writing is so contradictory. I feel that the protagonist is sometimes powerful and sometimes not so good, sometimes timid and sometimes crazy. In the first part, Xiao Zizai was staring at me in fear, but in the later part, I can beat four without falling behind.
After all, I am still a newbie writer. This plot is a bunch of stilted, the character creation is awkward, and the plot development is abrupt, but I can rest assured that it is a non-studio AI article, and I can look forward to the follow-up growth of the author. I am talking about the growth of the author. Personally, I feel that this book is 80% bad, but it doesn't matter. Just write it as a practice and relax. Don't put too much pressure on yourself. The most important thing for a newbie is that persistence is victory.
I recommend Kazan to be the heroine🐶
Apart from swordsmanship, there is no way to make friends with the Ghost Swordsman. It's impossible to make friends with him at all. The rest is purely a skill. Others are still imitating the idiots.
The ghost sword technique can cut down the entire stranger
The protagonist can advance the plot because of the Eight Magic Skills, but his training must be related to the Eight Magic Skills. This is really unacceptable.
Anyone who has read the original work will not write about the plot of Tao Yuan going to grab the Tongtian Ru. . .
It is recommended that the ghost girl transformed from Devil May Cry be the heroine. If you don't want to become a woman, then beat him as a heroine, and keep beating him until he agrees.
Chen Duo's killing of Liao Zhong was obviously something that could be solved with a reminder, so why didn't he say it? You have already joined the company anyway. Just mention it and you can get the person in charge of the region to apologize to you as a favor. Even if it fails, it will have no impact on you.
There are some problems with the characterization, and the dialogue between Chen Duo and Pig's Feet is very problematic.
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Quan Xing would definitely not dare to kill ordinary people on such a large scale. The book is finished here.
? ? ? What is this! Ghost swordsman? ? This is insulting reality with games
How come your cover isn't Steve, a boy born with the power of rubbing cubes?😰
Personally, I think the most comprehensive Ghost Sword is Asura
The job transfer and awakening and the Eight Magic Skills are too hard to tie together.
Author: I want to be an operating officer
The heroine's problem
I had not decided on the heroine at the beginning, but after reading the comments, there were so many friends who wanted a heroine, so everyone voted, and the one with the most votes was the heroine, followed by the second heroine, the third heroine, and so on 😉
Too little
I watched it too early and it would be over in a short while, which was not entirely enjoyable.