Peerless Tang Sect: I, Huo Yuhao, Join Sun and Moon

I feel like Douluo novels really have to give a thumbs up to comics. I always thought the content in the early stages of Peerless Tang Sect was okay. But in the middle and later stages, all kinds of disgusting things came out, which gave me a headache.

I really didn't expect that Du Riyue started the game, and at the 200th chapter, he could actually encounter the plot of treating Ma Xiaotao 😥. One of Dou Er's least favorite characters. One of the reasons for reading the book is that the protagonist is against Shrek Academy so he won't meet her, but you end up like this 😰

In fact, you can upgrade to level 20 and get the Ice Emperor before going to Sun and Moon, otherwise you will have to keep telling lies after disappearing and getting the second spirit.

Why doesn't Meng Hongchen have white hair and red eyes? You've already written a fanfic. Why do you keep it the same as the original? Change it back quickly. By the way, is there a female protagonist? If so, who is it? I hope she is a human. The author reads more posts and has some fun.

This book cannot be criticized, this is a real career article. I have read more than 400 chapters. The most intimate activity so far is even when I was trying to promote Soul, I hugged Qiu while pretending to be a couple.

You are having an affair with so many women, either stop it, or stay away from each other. It's really annoying to watch you so distant.

I took advantage of the time limit to read this novel, and it was pretty well written. Why did it feel strange to read it? The content was substantial, but it just felt like a running account. Does anyone else feel this way?

Little Huo Niang

Suggested name change: Xuanzi: A life dedicated to the sun and moon

It's pretty good. This is the only description I've ever seen of Xuan Lao's beastly operation. The original work is ridiculous, especially the incident of the Messenger of Death. How thick-skinned Wang Yan is, how can he publicize the harm they suffered? A group of regular team members who were at least Soul King, plus a level 98 title, were made like this by a Soul King, and they were still there to show off their merits. The most important thing is that Yi Lao, a Soul King could have easily escaped. I remember that several team members were originally seriously injured but were possessed by Xuan Lao's animal martial spirit, which destroyed the cave and killed a few more. There is also Ma Xiaotao, because she belongs to Shrek, so her operations are forcibly labeled with so-called justice. Sherlock Xuan Lao Zhu, this idea is really great, I have read other Dou 2 fans. Except for Shan Yuany's diary and this book, the others are basically just pretentious and inexplicably clever in opening up a harem, and there is no content that satirizes Shrek's teachers. Moreover, this novel also has many famous jokes, involving many Kaka in Bangzi Kingdom. It's beautiful, come on 👍👍👍

It is suggested that the title of the book be changed to "Xuanzi Who Defies Heaven"

You think that only Shrek Tang San can interfere with you, but in fact he can play tricks on you at any time in the early stage. If things don't go your way on your way to the sun and moon, he can easily control a hundred thousand year old wild beast to come out to fuck you, and beat you half to death, and a Shrek man can kill you. Pick it up and let you go to Sun and Moon. If you don't want to care about it, you will send Wang Dong there. The original ending said that he has been watching Huo Yuhao since he appeared in the Star Forest. If you don't go his way, he wants to run away. If there is no system to block it, first find a god king as a backer.

It's so boring, and what's the story about going to the underworld? Even after ten thousand years, the soul will not be extinguished. Qian Renxue is still alive, Bibi Dong is still alive, and Yu Xiaogang is also alive. Are you, Yu Xiaogang, a god too?

It's a very good topic, but it's written like a running account. The fun parts are mentioned in one stroke without description at all, and some unimportant analysis is written very complicatedly.

You are so poisonous, author, why did you let Tang San go directly to the lower realm?

Sun and Moon Dream of Red Dust

You said it was the teacher who created the soul with three or four rings. Others didn't believe it, thinking that the protagonist was gifted. I tolerated it. But the protagonist took out a demiplane and still didn't believe it, thinking it was the protagonist's gift. It was already disgusting to read. Then there was the story of Killing the Duchess. Two billion gold soul coins were found from the space ring on her body and she was poisoned to death.

The author, I think the two female protagonists of Meng Hongchen Qiuer are good. Also, when I read the original work, what I hated the most was Xuanzi. Think about it, a level 98 super Douluo actually brought him twice. Once, it can be said that the whole army was annihilated. The second time, it cannot be said that the whole army was annihilated. But it's not much different. The most important thing is his sex. If he dies, you should go find the referee and our people. Besides, a super Douluo will lead two teams to follow and protect the students so that they can lose him. The second time I followed him, and it was of no use at all, it was just a decoration. When I arrived in the cave, I was in a daze for the first time. If it weren't for someone reminding me, that person would have escaped long ago, so this Super Douluo would have to be reminded when he was in a daze. And even if you want to deal with it, you have to leave the cave. You can release the true form of the martial spirit in the cave. It directly caused the cave to collapse and directly killed the half-disabled student by falling rocks from high altitude. Therefore, this cultivation level is just a decoration. This is the most speechless place. He is just a clueless iron-headed boy, even if Yan Shaozhe and Qian Duoduo were to lead the team, he would not be like this. In short, when participating in the soul master competition, Sun and Moon must bring Ye Yulin and Kong Deming into the mortal world and give this iron-headed boy a good beating. This is disgusting, disgusting. No matter how disgusting Old Man Niu is, he can torture this Chicken Leg Douluo as badly as possible with just one sentence. Poison is stronger than him even if it doesn't kill him. Although he is a bit fierce, at least he knows how to turn around. It's just that I looked back a little late. Yan Shaozhe is not a good person, not even as good as Flanders.

Those who like to read the word "a period of time" are in luck. The adjectives used for time throughout this article are basically "after a period of time"

Will there be a reincarnation of Xiao Wu and will he be taken down by the protagonist 😁 Plus Dong'er 😁 Let's play it a little weird 😏 Xiao Wu is a male reincarnation and then Dong'er will find a mother and have a mother-daughter love 😏😏😏😏

Why is this author so enchanted? Huo Yuhao kind of thinks of the kind-hearted version of Fang Yuan.

Stacked Armor: I have only read the first 20 chapters, and my aesthetic level is limited. Don't criticize it. The writing is very good. I don't know why this book is far inferior to those harem stud books. . . . Come on, author, stop being a eunuch.

The author writes very well, but can he change the cover to a better one?

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It's pretty good, and the ending is also pretty good. It's the most cruel thing I've ever seen.

First of all, let me praise the author. The first order is 350, 2 million words in 16 months, and 4000 daily updates are guaranteed. It is very stable. Being able to write two million words can be considered a beginning and an end. Let me talk about my personal opinion. This is a follow-up work, and the benchmark book is "xx Sun Moon Rain Hao". The plots before they were released were highly similar. However, perhaps in order to avoid being completely consistent, the author's writing was very restrained and awkward. That book has some grooves written from the perspective of the time traveler Huo Yuhao, to avoid the Buddha's big hand, as one of the ways to fill the content in the process of promoting the main line. The plot points of this book are not well written. The main character's point of view is often too broad and even deviates from the original narrative and has nothing to do with the plot. In addition, in the process of complaining, the protagonist frequently switches from the perspective of the protagonist to the God's perspective, and finally returns to the plot itself, causing a separation of perspectives. This also resulted in the book being too long, so that the content was substantial but the plot was bland. There are many fragmented and even abrupt arrangements. I don't know if this is to avoid being too similar to the benchmark document. For example: Jing Hongchen and Xuan Ziwen appear together, just so that the protagonist can meet these two key figures for the first time when he enters school. The two senior soul mentors have no scientific research tasks, and they have finished guiding their apprentices. They are all bored. They come to see you enrolling new students one by one, right? Wang Dong'er inexplicably took Qinglong for a walk around Riyue. Riyue Yuhaoli at least had some interesting design fill-ins. Here it is just a tour to scare the protagonist. Qiu'er appeared as if she had nothing to write about, and the number of words exceeded the number, and the direction was consistent with the original work. If Jing Hongchen was replaced by Xuanzi, it would be like the abbreviation of the original work. Even before the competition started, after the three soul saints in Xingluo City expressed their dissatisfaction with Zhou Yi, Zhou Yi suddenly asked questions. How about explaining why she appeared here? Xing Luo Xu Jiawei's classic black-box operation, Shrek's cheating methods, Xing Luo's gamblers... Highlights also include: Buddha lowering his head to the strongest soul king, Xuanzi's unlimited search for cheating soul saints, etc. Time is limited, so I only subscribed to the first chapter. If you are interested in whether the subsequent plot will completely break away from the shadow of Riyue Yuhao, you can continue to watch.

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I always feel like the plot has suddenly become more urgent recently.

{"NickName":"Two Sages of the Bamboo Forest","UserId":422445806} When the swallow leaves, the branches are full of red beans For those who travel far away, don't ask about the return date Who will keep the blue water of Xiaoxiang alone I don't know what night it is When the swallow returns, there will be no trace of my beloved Should be intentional, I will leave here I don't want to stay with nothing Traveling far away to search for thousands of miles He splashed ink and started writing She was dancing in her sleeves and dreaming of a good time Love in the play, meaning in the play Strangers meeting each other In a beautiful land She sang and met an old friend in a foreign land Every step was a lovesickness People in the audience, the title of the gold medal I never knew each other, old acquaintances on the stage He talked about it during the bridal chamber Everyone congratulated A Beautiful Lady Matches a Talented Man Not yet heard, one sentence after another sighs that there is love and infatuation in the play😭

Author, you might as well write Douluo, there are a lot of disgusting people out there.