Dragon Raja: I, Lu Mingfei, Conquer the Myriad Worlds

I'll check back. No reply after a day means Shennong is dead.

In Chapter Five, Lu Mingfei was pierced through the chest by Muzan's hand, yet he could still shout and warn the Kamado family to run. I can only say, author, if you can't write it, don't write it. There are plenty of other people who can. How can you shout loudly even with your lungs gone?!

I can't take it anymore! Has no one written anything that would ultimately insult female emperors and concubines?

So-so. His plot always starts with rescuing Su, and it's been like this for several books already. Although he wasn't actually tricked into a deal by the so-called demon inside him, it's pretty much the same. I just don't understand why every book falls into this vicious cycle. Why not just slap him dead? Wouldn't that make things much better?

Actually, I'm a little disappointed in you. The recommendation vote I gave you was higher than your usual update level. I hoped that after joining, you could give it your all and grow quickly. This level isn't just about doing things well. You need to have the ability to think systematically. What is the value of what you're doing?

What's so interesting about writing about Demon Slayer, the anime floor tile? It's like Douluo Continent, the fantasy floor tile; not many readers want to read about the sewers.

I feel the female lead came out a bit suddenly. If she doesn't have much screen time, I'd suggest not having a female lead at all. This is just my personal opinion.

I'm curious why most fanfiction writers send him to Demon Slayer? This guy's fighting power in that low-level world is ridiculously low; any random slice-of-life anime world would be much stronger than him. What's the point of him going there? That so-called Breathing Technique? The skill names are long and tedious, completely useless except for padding the word count.

I want a Jujutsu Kaisen vs. Dragon Clan match! I want to see Lu Mingfei beat up that bastard Sukuna Ryoumen. The author is sacrificing a popular character to elevate his own son, Sukuna, to a certain level of prestige. It's disgusting!

Plagiarism! Absolutely plagiarism! Don't argue with me, I won't accept any arguments! The book I read had more words than yours, but the content was the same. You should update another twenty or thirty chapters to prove yourself and see who plagiarizes. Who. You know that people still believe you, but words are not enough. Update twenty or thirty chapters first; once you have evidence, everything will be fine.