Hogwarts Priest

The first part is okay, it's basically daily life, there's not too much description of the process of learning magic, nor is there any description of the difference between writing and magic. The biggest question at the moment is the plot of chapters 23 to 26, with "weird evil gods" and "missing students". The school is calm. Is this still the original Hogwarts? Using weird evil gods to highlight the extraordinary power of Taoism, tearing down the east wall to make up for the west wall, the number of ways is too wild. There are too many cases like this. The subject matter is good, and the beginning is okay, but as the words go on, it becomes farther and farther away from the theme. Looking back, it is no longer possible to enter the palace.

I don't understand why the authors of today's fics have to do something with the heroine even though their writing is pretty good🤔

In fact, Harry Potter is a pure Western fantasy, with relatively low combat power but full of mystery. They do not rely on gods. It is unreasonable to say that Voldemort pursues the power of gods. In fact, because they have no faith, even the awakening of magic power is inexplicable. However, after all, they are the same people. There is no strong opponent, but the original Voldemort is almost non-threatening, so the plot cannot be developed. I just hope that no monsters and monsters will come out and make a mess in the later stage.

Well, how should I put it, I feel like it would be better if the emotional scenes were deleted and some Taoist quotations were written in vernacular. The first is the emotional scene. The adult soul suddenly made physical contact with a little girl without being familiar with it. Because of the crowd, he hugged her and covered her eyes with his hands during class. It was so embarrassing. I couldn't stand it anyway. Then there are some exercises for the protagonist. Hermione has no doubts about the bunch of Taoist quotations that Hermione said, and it is very funny. Because this is a Harry Potter fanfic with a foreign background. Can an eleven-year-old foreigner understand what the protagonist says? These two points are really irresistible. The early stage is quite good, there are very few quotations, but later there are large quotations, just like other fan articles on cultivating immortality, which are long quotations of all kinds of crazy Taoist quotations and quotations on cultivating immortality.

I don't have any objections to the plot, and the author's knowledge of mysticism is also what attracted me, but is the combat power too great? Just a spiritual sword spell is already very perverted, coupled with the power of the senior sister's Shiva blessing to shake mountains with one punch, how do you plan to write it later? I have read a novel before, and the description of combat power in the middle period has reached its peak. Later, realm settings such as half-step and perfection are continuously added, and the whole book directly changes from dry food to poison. If your book continues like this, there will only be one way to go. Change the map, cross the world, jump to the world, and increase the combat power. It can be basically seen from your previous plots that your overall plot grasp is actually not good enough, and you don't have the writing power. If you continue like this, you will only be like an avalanche.

I feel that the character creation of Nico Flamel is a bit strange. I have almost forgotten the original work. Is this the image in Nico's original work? He is so stupid and greedy.

This is not so much a Harry Potter fanfic as it is a fantasy novel set with Harry Potter characters.

A good fic has been changed beyond recognition. The author might as well write an original version. What a Harry fic! That way the book won't look so awkward.

What's going on with the author? Give me a reply?

The heroine Hermione? 🤔

How is this book? I have read it several times, but the title of this book is so poisonous... 555... I dare not click it for fear of death. Will Shen Nong come forward to speak out?

Overall it's pretty good, with enough creativity and enough writing. The disadvantage is that the newly set religious system is higher than the original magic system, so magic becomes dispensable, and it has to be significantly separated from the original story chain. The second is the supremacy of God, which eliminates the role of human beings, as if human efforts are worthless in the face of divine power. Then there is the problem of the heroine. It is understandable that the protagonist is close to Hermione. After all, the original character is a popular character, but the protagonist licking an Indian girl is hard to understand.

There are quite a lot of secondary settings. In the early stage, the male protagonist was too cautious and the details were average! After 60 chapters it's pretty good, there are many highlights

Can we have a little collision between the protagonist (a Taoist priest) and the native European heritage (the Holy See, Celtic druids, priests of the Nordic and Greek gods)?

Personally, I think the writing is pretty good. The author has a lot of knowledge about religion and his style is very novel. Come on, give me a monthly vote to encourage you.

Are there any recommended introductory books on Eastern and Western occultism?

May I ask what's going on with the interruption these days? You probably didn't plan to be a eunuch, right?

The protagonist seems to have never seen Harry Potter and is considered half-native.

Not finished yet? It's all set but not shown

I've ordered everything, so I'm going to stop updating?