Shengui Xiuxian: I Have Become a Dangerous Place

The writing ideas are good, but there are not many details. Some of the fighting scenes are a bit like a running account, and there is no way to conjure up wonderful scenes through the text. I hope the author can write more about these parts.

Let me talk about what attracts me. They are the many blessings created by the protagonist. I find them very interesting. I hope there will be more interesting blessings like this in the future. As for whether it is a family story or a fierce land, I think the bad land is better. You don't have to stick to one family. For example, the Zhisou you wrote is not from the family. There are several in the family. The characters are also very superficial, and the character image is not outstanding, just like a tool man. It can be written that the protagonist's territory continues to expand, and then fights with other strange people, constantly recruits younger brothers, and fights for the world. Finally, the whole world becomes the protagonist's murderous place, and the protagonist becomes a Taoist and discovers the truth of the world~ Just Jiang Zi~ Don't spray if you don't like it

This book will not change people. The main plot is written with the evil place as the upgrade line. Readers who like the evil place novel, please rest assured.

This naming style for a new book by a newcomer is a bit scary, especially like the eunuch author who sells his name. He uses good ideas to write out his results first, and then sells them to studios. Either the book is a eunuch or it is unfinished. I feel that this book will probably be around 200 to 300 chapters. 😏😏😏

The original intention of this book was to have multiple parallel lines such as "The Weird Family" and "The Weird Place". However, some readers responded that they did not want to read content related to Li Sheng, and wanted to reduce the content about their family. I want to do a questionnaire. Understand which line is more popular and which character branch should be appropriately added. (The subsequent plot component can be adjusted based on the results.)

As long as there is no protagonist who insists on getting a body to cause trouble, then there will be a few so-called heroines to promote the plot. The creativity and writing style of this book should be good. In some stories, it is clear that a tree, a tiger, and a weapon can be used throughout the whole novel. However, it is necessary to get a physical body in the early stage to talk about feelings with the so-called heroine.

I thought it was a heretic novel, but after reading it for a long time, it turned out to be a nanny novel. It was about buying dog meat over someone else's head, and the main character was a very holy mother.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the protagonist's golden finger appeared out of nowhere. The source of his own strength and abilities is not clear, and his abilities are given inexplicably, just like a random lottery. There is no telling what caused the attached evil place. Inexplicably, saying that he is a fierce place is just like a bad place, just like the name of the place. Also, a fierce place should look like a dangerous place, and a few people can come wherever they want. It's like going shopping, there's nothing dangerous about it. The world's ability system and classes are like living in an isolated mountain village deep in the mountains and old forests. I can't tell you anything. This novel is so inexplicable that I can't understand it

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. It feels so dull. Everything is blurry. There is no clear description of anything. There is not even a specific panel of the system. The story is also the same. It feels like you are imitating Liaozhai, but that is not the case at all. It is just very vague.

You can list them on the floor below. The interesting parts will be added to the assigned characters in the book!

It would be better if this kind of writing has as little to do with ordinary people as possible. It's better to write about sacrificing mortals 404, and write about raising mortals emmm... Can a serious and dangerous place raise people? Isn't raising people a blessed place? So it's best not to write it directly. Recommended route: 1. Organizations like the Zhiguai Society send members everywhere Investigate the legend of monsters and find the protagonist's lair 2. The target of the strange hunting was found to be the bait released by the protagonist, and was killed by the Jedi 3. The protagonist's family created the legend of monsters, you can refer to the Hat Demon Case in the Northern Song Dynasty and the Soul Calling Case in the Qing Dynasty

Yes, the protagonist will build the underworld later, but the land is too small. It would be great if he could master reincarnation in the later stage.

Not bad, not bad, interesting. If we keep this rhythm, we will hopefully become immortal grass.

The author has created too many side plots. For example, the fisherman went out to establish his power. There is no need to write it in such detail. It is too God's perspective and does not match the function of the real protagonist's murderous place. Also, the plot is too centered around that family. Some comments said that he is a nanny, which I think is conservative. You are completely a servant...

Very interesting, I catch up to the latest in one go. (Has the qualifications of a great god) The last time I saw a novel about forgetting to sleep and eat, I was still lingering in Yaowu... (Complain, it will not be read in the later stage) This book has many plots, which are easily reminiscent of those classic plots in folklore and storybooks in the past. However, the author of this book handled this aspect properly and polished the specific details well, making it very comfortable to read. And the stories of each character can be intertwined with the main line without being too abrupt. You won't get bored seeing some classic scenes. Let's talk about which plots feel similar. Needless to say, the protagonist himself calls himself the land, which is reminiscent of the earth god in mythology (weird version). The ancestors outside the Yuan family are reminiscent of the ancestors of the Ren family in Yimei Taoist Priest. (If the ancestors are buried vertically, the descendants will definitely be good 🤭) Shiyi is a classic part of some stories, a good young woman from a good family who is forced to die by a local prince. (Having a husband who is greedy for money and ruthless) The man of the Li family (forgot his name, an important supporting role in this book so far) reminds people of ancient stories, legends of fishermen and some gods and ghosts. For example, they encountered water ghosts, water spirits, dragon kings, Taoists, incense gods, etc. The men of the Li family met some fishermen who worshiped the "Dragon King" monster, which reminded me of a story in Liaozhai. I forgot the specific name. I was also in danger when I was out fishing, but met some "weird people". Of course the two endings are different. Of course, what Liaozhai is talking about is overseas, and this is inland Similar to this, I won't go into details one by one, you can see for yourself. The plot is very attractive, and there are many examples in this book, including several great tribulations in the last days, like the great tribulations in a certain sutra. The woodcutter is similar to the Foolish Old Man who moved the mountains, etc. The twins of the Li family correspond to the protagonists of some folk tales. Etc., Etc., Overall, the story has a rich plot and will not make people feel that it is watery. If you feel that the story is not progressing, then you should think about whether there is any hidden foreshadowing in this chapter. Various classic scenes and similar classic characters are all cleverly integrated. It makes people look at it involuntarily. Reason for recommendation: 1. There is a weird storyline 2. Various vivid and vivid characters 3. The detailed processing of the branch plots and the results are eye-catching 4. Wonderful water (sea) adventure. Suddenly I want to shout (I am the future One Piece King, ^_^) 5. Wait, I'm short of words, I can't think of how to describe it. Here are cute girls who are affected by death; obedient demon trees; loving couples and families with children with different abilities; woodcutter who wants to live another life; loyal men like Lin Chong, etc. If it doesn't look good, please come and slap me in the face.

For those who were attracted by the subject matter, it became increasingly boring and boring, and there was no main line. I couldn't figure out what the author wanted to do. The power system is also vague. It's okay to have a front panel, but without the back panel, it's completely useless. It's a pity that such a good subject has been ruined.

This book will never change anyone, don't worry...

The title of the book is a bad place, but it's actually a blessed place. It's boring.

Either you don't have a conscience, or you always have a conscience, and you have become a dangerous place. Even if you don't kill people and massacre the city, why do you still need to support the refugees?

This book is really beautiful. If you keep writing at this level, it will become a fairy tale.

Just give me a kick, as long as you keep this creative idea, it's also recommended not to write about evil places and blessed places, just go directly to the strange places, and the buffs have the final say.

The author wakes up so early, and it turns out that he can only update if he is energetic

Next you will have many competitors

We are still waiting for one million to be slaughtered, why are we just raising them to death?😭😭

If you want to read about evil, don't fall into the trap. This book is about wearing evil skin and doing good deeds.

Every dwarf family has a book of hatred. Records of enemies from generation to generation and deeds of hatred. The new leader of the dwarves opened the Book of Great Hatred belonging to the High King, but was surprised to find that the unfinished entries above were filled with a person's name: "In the 588th year of the dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why did other races resist large charges? A spear or a halberd is enough, and a dwarf can hold a shield? I said: This is a symbol of strength! A guy holding a warhammer slandered: Everyone on the other side was tripped. " ----Snorri Whitebeard, the first supreme king, note: This is too much of an insult to me, and this is a life-and-death feud! "In the year 2526 of the Dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why are dwarf helmets so thick and strong? I said: Dwarf blacksmiths are highly skilled, and the thick iron helmets can withstand all ferocious attacks of the enemy. A certain hammer man: Too short, afraid of being hit in the head by a knife." ----The second generation of the High King Gotrek Starbreaker, note: I have insulted me too much, and this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the 3273rd year of the Dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why are light-armored rangers and bare-chested butchers not much faster than heavily armored dwarves? I said: All dwarves are muscular men, and armor cannot be a burden to us. A certain hammer man: short legs, with an upper limit." ----Three generations of High King Mograem Blackbeard, note: The insult to me is too great, this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the year 3576 of the Dwarven calendar, Someone asked: Why do most dwarf helmets have spikes and sharp corners? I laughed and said: If necessary, you can use a head hammer to attack. A certain hammer man: If the spikes pierce your feet, the enemy will not step on your head to cut off the back row." ----The fourth generation of the High King Sgrim Mogrimson, note: The insult to me is too great, this hatred is irreconcilable! In 4143, the fifth-generation high king Logan Ironbeard... In 4508, the sixth-generation high king Korgan Ironbeard... In 5208, the seventh-generation high king Finn Thorkel... In 6235, the eighth-generation Supreme King Kendrak Grickson In 6728, the ninth-generation Supreme King Orrick... In 6825, the tenth-generation Supreme King Orrickson... Densely written: This hatred is irreconcilable! "Who is this guy with the warhammer? Why is he everywhere?" He was a little confused. "Why didn't the dwarves capture any replacements after the war?" A voice suddenly sounded from behind. "Because dwarves have no mercy towards their enemies, they can only kill them all!" He said proudly. "Shouldn't it be that my legs are short and I can't catch up?" Hearing this voice, he suddenly looked back and saw a guy holding a warhammer thinking leisurely. So, he angrily opened a new page and continued to write: The dwarves will be great again! Also, a guy with a warhammer insulted our clan, and we have a life-and-death hatred! ---High King Thorgrim. The Resentful One.

The writing is okay, but a bit sloppy

Maintain this level of quality without overturning thousands of orders. There are many elements mixed in it. Semi-mysterious resurgence. Oriental sequence. The protagonist is the boss behind the scenes. Family. Ancient background.

The finale has just come, huh?

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