Creating Calamity for the Heavens Starts with the Heavenly Dragon Sword Blocking All the Armies

Those who write about cultivating immortals are most afraid of being caught up in the so-called national justice. In my opinion, when you embark on the path of spiritual cultivation, you are different from ordinary people. Mortals are as humble as ants, as insignificant as dust, and insignificant. Among the heavens, seas, worlds, and heavens, there are as many mortals as the number of imperial signs. When do immortal cultivators care about the world? Worldly mortals are nothing more than ants. If you change it to Fengshen Yanyi or the ancient saying, mortals have not yet developed their six senses, their bodies are mortal, they don't know the numbers of heaven, they don't know the principles of heaven, and they don't understand heaven's heart. It's time for them to die!

Start the inheritance of Nuwa? Nuwa teaches you martial arts?

Casting wisdom, casting plans, casting heart, another victim of Mo Cangli 😰?

Author, your writing skills are actually pretty good. Look at the top books on the current rankings and try to figure them out. See what readers like to read now. Your plot is too poisonous. The beginning is the classic evil slave who kills the master😓. There is an evil mistress at home. The protagonist who travels to a small world basically starts with the collapse of heaven in the beginning. Now readers don't accept this.

The writing is good, it looks quite comfortable, but the plot is not good. There are many big problems. The first one is cheating. The cheating in the opening chapter can be taken away by others and can be sensed by others. Even if it is only possible, it is very low-level. Are you a cheat in the story of a mortal cultivating immortality? The feeling is not as good as the plug-ins ten years ago. The current plug-ins are not written like this. They are all unknown, unknown, unfathomable, and then gone. To put it simply, when facing the plug-in, I don't know anything. I don't know how it came. I don't know why I came. I don't know what I came for. I don't know. Then I can get rid of it in the later stage. The second one is the Huntian Baojian. The Huntian Baojian is designed with Gao Wu in mind. It is also the universe of the Divine Weapon series. If it does not involve Gao Wu and the opening chapter is Jin Yong, then the Hun Tian Baojian should not be written. It makes people feel that it is too powerful because you can't use it. It looks very powerful and is a plug-in. In fact, it is restricted by the author and cannot be used. It is very baffling. There are a lot of questions in the first chapter, and there are still a few questions that I don't want to talk about, let alone the dozens of chapters so far. The writing style is very comfortable to read, and even though there are many inexplicable plots, it seems to be okay, but it is not attractive and can only be said to be tasteless.

How should I put it, The author has an idea, but the author cannot write it.

Li Chengqian: If you want to make the King of Wei the crown prince, let him live in Wude Hall! You want him to be Li Shimin 19 years ago, but I don't want to be Li Jiancheng 19 years ago! You ask me why I rebelled? In the ninth year of Wude, Emperor Daxing Gaozu was also asking you why you rebelled! Yes, I am lame, I do not have the appearance of an emperor, and I am not as good as King Wei in everything now, but do you really regard yourself as a filial son? Our whole family rebelled. Even if you make the Zhenguan reign the most prosperous in the world, the history books will not record that you are the eldest son. I will kneel in front of my mother's soul right now. Whether you give me poisonous wine or three feet of white silk, sit down in this position and don't give it to me. Don't forget that when you were holding your uncle's head in Xuanwu Gate, it was the queen mother who stood in front of me with a sharp sword to protect me.

Those who like to read Zhu Tianwen generally don't want to watch too many martial arts movies. It's enough to have a world to lay the foundation. You have written a few. The desire to watch it was generated by the title of your book, but it was worn away by your few martial arts worlds. It faded away. Once the readers lose interest and can't read the book reviews, they will leave.

The plot is a bit confusing and incoherent at all

Is your Huntian Baojian just a decoration?

Looking at this introduction, I'm afraid he's not another victim of Mo Cangli 🤫 Professor Mo is really guilty 😏

It was the first time I saw Duan Yanqing as the protagonist in Tian Long Ba Bu. Thinking about it, he is quite tragic!

Soul penetration? Excuse me, excuse me

I will help you refer to whatever the author writes next. In the next world, the Demonic Sword Life and Death Chess, Ren Qianxing, seizes the Nine Dragon Stone, the Fire Phoenix, and the Soul Demon Unity Lingshuang Sword later becomes the material of the sky crystal. In the next world, there are storms, four spiritual beasts, and four spiritual stones. The sword world is empty and boundless. In the world after transcendence, Nuwa is the object of reduction and emptiness.

The three views of thought are really based on the level of life. An individual's power is superior to that of the group, and his ears and eyesight are to a certain extent. Ordinary people are really ants and garbage, literally. The two are no longer the same species, their reproduction has been isolated, and various human thoughts and doctrines are only based on human imagination. They are unfair comments on God or the three views of God. The comment section is really funny.

Why didn't we choose multiple heroines?

Except for the shortcoming of practicing swordsmanship, everything else is an advantage.

A bunch of people who were black just for the sake of being black were all picked up by Shuang Wenyang.

Now when writing novels, I think we should pay attention to a few points 1. The protagonist cannot be too old. The greasy uncle is not suitable. It is best to be fifteen or sixteen years old, and no more than twenty at most. 2. The protagonist cannot be ordinary. Not to say handsome, but at least handsome 3 The protagonist is not suitable for being broad-shouldered or round-shouldered, or hunky-backed. It is better to have a well-proportioned physique, and can be strong, not majestic 3 The protagonist can be sinister, sinister, shameless, scheming and cynical, and is not suitable for greatness and uprightness. Don't meddle too much. Things, don't wander around without any ability, be wretched and underdeveloped, it's better to hit hard 3 The protagonist can be an ordinary person, an orphan or a servant, but don't have all kinds of misery, all kinds of persecution, which is not satisfactory in reality. Reading a novel has to go through all kinds of torture. What we like to see is the protagonist's various calculations, beating others instead of being beaten.

The pace is too fast. I know there is a problem even if I don't read it. I have only written 20 chapters in a world before changing places. Your way of writing does not give readers a sense of involvement. Many people who write like you have poor results. The most taboo thing about Zhutianliu is the rhythm problem. It is easy to write and crash.

I heard there is a female supporting role? I'm ready to subscribe! That's a good saying! Good girls don't miss out! Bad woman, don't waste it

What it means is not very clear.

Is Xiansan better than Chang'e? What about the realm before the immortal?

Martial arts, calculations, life, upgrading and practicing, and major plot events are arranged reasonably. If you write too much about any of them, you will get tired of reading!

When will I start the latest novel?

Almost when to start the latest novel.