Clocking Out, Then Hunting the Supernatural

As you can see, hunger makes people crazy. I gave the protagonist's ability a name called Food Filter. Forcibly treating all kinds of messy creatures as food, greatly improving digestion ability and increasing hunger level. When you are crazy hungry, you are very likely to lose your mind. A full stomach can temporarily increase your combat effectiveness.

The imagination is okay, the plot is good, the characters are novel, and the writing is a mess. It feels like I'm reading an outline...

Mad is a weird word, it has become a data panel for fighting monsters in the game. Damn it.

Comments: good-looking, wonderful, recommended Tags: fantasy, infinite, weird, mysterious, copy, invincible flow (uncertain) The male protagonist Richard There is currently no female protagonist The female supporting role (should be) Mermaid King Figlia Experienced dungeons: Rost Village (S) Sugbia Prison (S) Iris Strait (S) I am currently reading Chapter 53. The plot is not procrastinating, there are daily fights, it is relaxed but not dark, and it is reckless but not brainless. The protagonist is a time traveler (reincarnation), a slum laborer at the beginning, accidentally exposed to a certain ritual, exposed to the extraordinary, and became extraordinary (the above is only in one chapter) The male protagonist's current abilities: devouring, hand-to-hand combat, knife skills, half-fire magic, marine mysterious side OS: I haven't written a review for a long time, and I can't write anymore, so I'll leave it at that. Come on, author, don't wait until you put it on the shelves

After reading Chapter 19, not much information has been revealed about the protagonist. He has the ability to devour strange creatures to gain promotion, and has added the setting of an infinite dungeon world. It is not the strongest from the data point of view, but in terms of activity space and plot, he cannot encounter enemies that exceed the strength of the protagonist. It can be regarded as a relatively invincible stream.

It was too messy and the transition was very abrupt and uncomfortable to watch.

The logic of the article is very jumpy. To put it simply, the author writes whatever he thinks of without considering the connection in the middle, which makes it look a bit confusing.

It feels a bit messy. It should get better once the author becomes more proficient.

I received the re-examination notice this evening, and the re-examination is in a few days. I am all numb and can't write a single word. I have to prepare for the retest. The retest is over. Continue to update.

It's pretty good, but it feels like the writing is fast-paced.