Pokémon Dream Master

The life gem incident is actually a major event that almost runs through the whole story so far, but the overall impression is not particularly good. I feel that there are mainly the following problems: 1. The arrangement of the small nodes is a bit too rigid, like the clown researcher, and the entire logic and operation feel like a tool man set up purely to advance the plot. There is a waveguide puppet, which appears very suddenly, and it feels like I have watched an episode less; 2. The foreshadowing is revealed too casually. The mastermind behind the foreshadowing who has been buried for so long is suddenly revealed directly from his perspective at the beginning of the chapter. It feels like picking it up and putting it down gently. The fun of exploring the secret with the protagonist is gone, and it is a waste of the foreshadowing. For example, the handling of Huo Xia's appearance is very natural and good; 3. The villain is more or less a facial expression, has no memory points, and has no charm. The clown researcher is quite good. Although he is a tool, when you see him, your blood pressure will soar. He is also a character trait that can make people remember, but the rest of it really does not leave a deep impression; 4. It may be a problem of catching up on updates. Sometimes it feels like the chapters end casually and the information density is low. Sometimes after reading two chapters, I feel that there is not much content. The daily life and battles of waterfowl are well written, but such a long-form event is indeed lacking in rhythm control and writing power. I look forward to future progress~

Let's talk about it, the last book was all about the growth of Pokémon, not the protagonist. In addition, the encounter with Pokémon should be a branch plot, but there are too many branch plots and the main plot is gone. There are no other problems, the creativity is sufficient, the characters are well-rounded, and the plot has no poisonous points.

To be honest, the writing of wild Pokémon is a bit disgusting. Pokémon is Pokémon. You wrote it so that the protagonist gave me a stinking Furicon feeling when facing other people's wild Pokémon. It's okay to not have a female protagonist in a Pokémon novel. After all, what you're looking at is the relationship between the protagonist and Pokémon, but you don't need to add a setting that makes women hate you. To be honest, this setting is very funny, giving people a feeling of being in vain, and it is not in line with the style of this book.

WC, we can really talk a little bit about the old book. As for opening a new book, you opened it without saying a word before. You opened it without saying a word. It got cold so fast. I'm really afraid that you will end up writing it again this time.

I opened the book for the Nth time and I couldn't make a sound. I was a little speechless, but I still say: Come on, author!

The author should promote the new book among his previous Pokémon works.

An outrageous theory, specifically that the author is good at otherworldly elf literature. I read the beginning of this book and stopped reading it. I looked at the comment section and found a small problem, that is, the author is not good at elf literature in the Pokémon world. The elf literature in small towns and amusement parks is actually brilliant because the elves and the protagonist rely on each other. The protagonist relies on the elves to save the world. The elves are born and have meaning because of the existence of the protagonist. The relationship between the two gradually warms up as they get along. The unique point is that the rules of the Pokémon world are suppressed in battle and are unique to the Pokémon protagonist, so the protagonist can crush local monsters. But these characteristics actually have no advantages once you leave the other world and enter the Pokémon world. First, everyone has Pokémon, so there is no advantage in the other world in battle. Second, it is common for Pokémon and trainers to achieve each other in the local world, and the protagonist is no longer unique. However, the author's control over the elven literature is tilted towards the human side. In order to strengthen the characteristics of the protagonist, he created new settings → the attribute context serving the four skills and the fantasy trainer skills. Whether it is a car or a competition, the BP is to strengthen the importance of trainers, emphasizing human operation and ignoring the bond between people and Pokémon, thus gradually deviating from the orthodox Pokémon literature. Objectively speaking, the author's setting is quite good. There is actually something to write about whether it is a script or a dream come true. If you don't engage in such frivolous operations as cultivating yourself, and study your daily life carefully, there should be quite a market for it. Of course this is just my subjective opinion. After all, I have never written a book. If you don't like it, don't take it to heart. I still support you to continue dancing. I like your ideas, come on😘

Books such as Marketing Account, Zhiguai Game, and Weird Talk are obviously very interesting, but the data is not easy to interpret. Shui Niao is very serious about writing books, but I feel that there are very few resources.

The writing is quite good, but there is one issue that I have wanted to complain about since the last book, which is about sticking with Pokémon. Every time I stick with Pokémon, Junsa pops out, and then the confinement room. I am really tired of watching this scene. This kind of plot happened at least ten times in the last book, and then this book comes again, writing such warm and daily Pokémon stories. , You can't post with Pokémon, so what am I doing here? If you touch a Pokémon too much, Junsa will pop out and meddle in other people's business. It really annoys me. I can still laugh when I write this kind of scene once or twice, but if I write it ten times or eight times, it's really disgusting. As soon as I saw the beginning of the post with Pokémon, I already thought of something and forced Junsa to pop out and stop it. The more I read, the more annoying it becomes.

It's really unbearable to watch the battle. Judging from the protagonist's current level of raising elves, the later the level is, the slower it is. Well, let's have a ban on elves. Then unless the trump card can be changed frequently or all the elves in a team are at the same level, then we may not be afraid of this rule, but is it possible?

Don't write about school teams, things that are too clichéd. If you get tired of it, make it more heart-warming and daily, that's why it's called Pokémon writing.

I wouldn't be surprised if the protagonist has multiple balls on his bed someday

The books written by the author always prick me, but they always add other things to make me want to read but not want to read. I hope this book can be a little purer.

The author should return to the original one of taking Pokémon to another world, which may feel better. The content focuses on: traveling with Pokémon, taking adventures, collecting and fighting monsters. Don't have too many Pokémon. Feel better

Nothing new, just the same old student party, school team copy, disappointing to the point of shock, not very satisfying.

Doesn't the author think it's too much? Because of the title of Girl Killer All the women dare not approach The cheerleaders don't cheer either?

Why do you feel like the comment section is so deserted! Does the author still have the motivation to continue writing?

Is this school team drama necessary?

I hope that when the author writes this book, when he wants to engage in other side jobs, he will not make it his main job. Going back to the previous book, it is good to treat racing events as seasoning. But there are too many seasonings added later, and the main plot should obviously be the encounter between Pokémon and trainers. I can only say that there were too many seasonings in the previous book and it was a bit salty.

I think the best thing the author writes is the interaction with Pokémon. It's really cute. This is also the author's greatest strength.

This new book never fails to make a sound🤭

May I ask how the quality is? What kind of wizards are there?

The number of words in each of the four books is smaller than the last one. Steel Armor Crow has more than 3 million words, Lao Jiu only has more than 2 million words, Qi Zai doesn't even have 2 million words, and Xiao Si only has more than 1.3 Million words! 🔨

Raise books to your death😭😭😭

I really want to see the story of the Pokémon skills and items being used in other worlds 😭, just like the first book

Take a look. Again, several of the author's elf books have the characteristic of feeding from time to time. If you can't accept them, I suggest you not read them.

The author's approach to the world of Pokémon is a battle system that guides the attribute energy of a trainer and only receives 10% damage. It is the most credible and reasonable work among Pokémon fans I have ever seen. The bond between Pokémon and trainers is also beautiful to watch, and it also has very exciting characters and plot. All in all, it looks good. Come on, author!

When I saw Miliosaurus, to be honest, Pokémon are actually very important supporting characters, but the Pokémon collected by the protagonist are becoming more and more unpopular, so I don't want to watch anymore. The popularity and acceptance of the Pokémon itself are very important. The rest, what I wrote above is okay.

What's the situation, how can I keep it up until I finish the book 😭

I want to read the archeology book. Stop writing about your elves. Come back, archaeologist.