There's a Big Problem in Elf Paradise

Although this book is also good, I feel it is still a little less interesting than Elf Town

Although I can't say much about the online books I've read, I read The Small Town first, but Paradise is my favorite of all the online books I've read. I feel ashamed that I first discovered it on a pirated website, but now I've come back and bought the original version. I feel that many people who give negative reviews to the park are idealistic and are only interested in harems and cool stories. This may be part of the reason why the town is so popular. On the contrary, I think the rhythm of the park is very good. It gives restrictions, but separates them, and also provides various channels for strengthening. It adds a lot of randomness, allows unpopular Pokémon to shine, and also adds a lot of new understandings of props and skills. I really like the setting of the red wedding dress. To be honest, there is nothing noble about being dedicated. The strength, character and responsibility of the male protagonist deserve others to like him, so for other female characters who like the male protagonist, the so-called flirting and running away is not really important... Such a relationship line will be more comfortable. Personally, I think the background of the world outside the park is too peaceful. It would be more interesting if some small town-like factions and dark backgrounds were added to the background. Of course, these are only a small number of opinions and do not necessarily need to be taken into consideration. In addition, I really like the cross-book interaction part. The good thing about the park is that every character is distinct and humane. No matter men, women, old or young, they all have their own shining points. A rough guy can like ballet, and a girl's dream is to be a cavalry warrior (although it's a detour), which kind of throws away the inherent concepts and stereotypes. It can be seen from many descriptions that the author's writing style is online and he can write well. From the perspective of my amateur writing of a few words, I actually admire it very much. To be fair, the content of the final game is actually quite interesting, but it is far different from the previous tone of the entire book. Although for fans of the original characters like me, it's nice to see this, but for hardcore fans and outsiders, it may be quite confusing. The problem may be that the previous book's other world was too successful, and it seemed a bit like a blind copy, which was a bit ill-considered. There is a hole in the evil god's arm at the end, which can be interpreted as a blank space, but it is indeed not fully explained. It would have been nice if there were dozens or a hundred more chapters. The ending was a bit rushed. After reading so many book reviews, it seems that the author has received many more comments than I thought. Some of them are pure nonsense, and normal people should not take it too seriously. It seems that when the author opens a new book, it is better to promote it. Otherwise, if you click on the author's homepage one day and find that two new books have been published at some time, it will be easy to get lost. I don't know if it's because I'm in a period of confusion, but it's hard to beat the performance of a small town no matter how I write on this subject. Despite this, the new books in the future are still worth tens of thousands. Brother, you can really write I sincerely hope that the subsequent books of Shui Niao can become a big hit again.

The sauce is here, along with salty tofu puffs, fried dough sticks, hot fried dumplings with scallion and mutton buns just out of the pan. I strongly support the great book, yeah yeah!

Jiangjiang entered this book with great force and found another beautiful elf novel.

These elves are really unpopular, and they are not even popular in game animated novels. I also admire some unpopular elves, and I hope there will be novels about them: Shield Sword Monster, Shelling Ninja, 3D Dragon Z, Big Steel Snake, Boss Cordora, Big Milk Can, Kettle, Happy Egg, Armored Warrior, Big Armor... They are obviously very handsome, but there is no novel about them, so they all swarm towards Gengar and Charizard. Occasionally, there are articles about insects, and 90% of them are about the giant stingray.

This kind of book is difficult to get out of the circle. It is estimated that the readership mainly comes from the previous book. But you haven't finished the old book yet, so the current update volume of this book is not important. Therefore, it is recommended that the author update this book once a day before the old book is finished. In addition, once again, double-editing is not advisable. Too many authors have double-edited one book as a sacrifice, sacrificing their own character.

The author, my superman, writes four old books and two new books every day. They are real leather.

When you open a new book, you open a new book. You are embarrassed to say it. You are embarrassed to promote it outside. Why are you shy in your own book circle? Even if I don't write about Pokémon anymore, it doesn't matter. I've been playing at Qidian for so many years, and I don't just read Pokémon articles.

It's still good but not popular. I don't know what to say. The first 50 chapters are too bland to retain readers. Not many people know about the interesting plot after that. Moreover, it is a single niche subject. I suggest the author go to the Pokémon forum to promote it 😒

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Ha ha ha ha! Encountered a novel that uses my crying mask to play? ! The coffins are so cute

Doesn't this person even advertise in old books when he opens a new book?

In fact, I personally prefer the rough and tumble with PM and the interaction with Hong Wedding Dress's family. It feels quite loving. In addition, I obviously feel that the author doesn't like to write the kind of pretense and slap-in-the-face routines, hahaha.

To be honest, I don't really like watching games. I barely read dozens of chapters because I want to wait for lovers to finally get married. However, I really can't help it. I'm sorry.

Look, look, the elves share the effect of the mirror and never worry about streaking. Li Shisan next door is crying🐶

The author is awesome today! Also, will this book have a female protagonist?

Let's take a look. I hope this book can learn from the experience of the previous book, rationalize the settings, and make some restrictions on the settings. In addition, double opening is not advisable. It's better to adjust the update amount

Chapter 65 has been read. Reward 1500+1 monthly ticket for encouragement. There are a lot of typos. There is a problem with the plot compared to a small town. It is a bit bland and even boring. If you don't add Pokémon elements, it would be okay to call it an urban novel. As for the golden finger setting, the so-called dream image, aside from the dream god, is almost the same as the inquiry desire in "Lucifer", except that there is an additional detective process in the verification of "self-greed". Of course, if it was about proving greed, there wouldn't be thousands of people pursuing Kamen Rider dreams. Everyone has Kamen Rider dreams. This chapter is quite touching. . I hope the books will get better and better in the future.

I read it in three days. It is a very good book, but the name and introduction are not attractive...

One person kills the mongoose with a bloody book! ! ! ! !

It's hard to get out of this kind of book, so it's better to seriously write a book like Bottom Trainer. The future will definitely be better than this one.

The subject matter is good, the daily writing is also good, and the elves are cute and warm, but the author's original setting is a bit awkward, and the protagonist obviously has big problems, but everyone turns a blind eye. Why can he use magic (summoning elves) even though he only has a two-star talent? Why is the two-star talent like this? Qiang, the magic used by the protagonist is completely different from them. There is no casting action, and other people have to draw talismans. These are all on the surface, and they are not invisible. Also, after joining the academy, the protagonist's office settings are no longer concerned. I feel that there is no need to renovate the academy. It is good to just add the office to daily life.

I actually think the game is quite interesting. The author must have put a lot of thought into these tactics and the game process.

The fans who stayed behind must have gotten used to the author's fighting style. As a result, the last volume suddenly led to a competition...

It's better to write Pokémon articles. You can only write Pokémon articles. Go write the story of Xiaozhi's son.

The author's ability to manage life is still as good as that of Elf Town. The story should end right after the Liyuan. The remaining evil things are still being exterminated here, while the game is started directly over there. The last part is a real mess. This ending directly negates all the protagonist's previous righteous characters.

I just finished this book recently, so I came here to support the author. The writing is still as good as ever. But the last volume is devoted entirely to the Pokémon LOL competition. If I finish it honestly, I feel that the look and feel is better than that of a small town. In addition, the two princesses of the Feng family ignored each other after flirting with each other. It felt a bit pity. Overall, it was less interesting than the small town.

Some of the emotional scenes are super redundant. In the middle period, when the female character switches to harem mode, the contrast is a bit big.

The main reason is that the protagonist's power system is very different from others, and the way you use it is too awkward, and it's completely forced, and a discerning person will know something is wrong at a glance, and it has a bad look and feel.

Your Pokémon Another World series is really good. I hope to write about this subject again one day.