I'm the Only One Who's Not at the End of the World

After watching it, I feel it's okay. The idea is very new. I think the author should work more on this novel setting and write the cool points more clearly. It's a bit dramatic to evade or deceive zombies, and it doesn't fit in with most readers' impressions of the zombie apocalypse. Of course, I don't deny that some people will like this. The previous part was too accelerated, and some places that could have highlighted the protagonist's advantages (resource utilization or enjoyment) were just passed over. It is difficult to express the excitement of the protagonist. You should not stop playing the "Hypnosis Series". There are many other things that can bring happiness. In the later part, after the plot progress slows down, the viewing experience will improve a lot. Make persistent efforts. In the protagonist's reincarnation world, don't forget to describe more about how happy the protagonist is. Don't stop talking about it just because it has been described before, and don't focus on the interactions of female NPCs. After all, no matter how happy the protagonist is about certain things, readers won't be able to understand them much because they can't go into details. Develop more fun. After all, this is not a monotonous world with only the protagonist. Compared with other books, there are too many ways to play. (Although the protagonist now looks like a person who has been at home for decades, he should also have some social relationships. Whether he is a former enemy, a benefactor, or an acquaintance, he can do some plot) The comparison between the world of reincarnation and the world of doomsday is very good now, please write more. This is the strength of this book's setting. There has been progress in environmental description, but not enough. Including the environment and geographical location of each gathering point, you need to write a little more. The development and change of the gathering place is not very obvious. Overall, this book has great potential. It is recommended to read other interesting articles to learn from it. Although this book is a pleasant book, and it is already very enjoyable, it could be even more enjoyable. As for the plot of Magic City, don't forget to compare it with the world of reincarnation, so that people can more clearly understand the harshness of the doomsday environment. It further highlights the protagonist's advantages. The personality of the protagonist as a "principled fun-loving person" is well established and is quite suitable for the protagonist's current situation. There are two main shortcomings: the environment is not constructed enough and the plot lacks ups and downs.

It's a good start, very creative. Especially the psychological description and behavioral description of the protagonist are very realistic. The disadvantage is that the writing style is slightly weak, and the expression ability is not good in some places, and it needs to be understood in context. By the way, is the protagonist an orphan? Doesn't he have anyone he cares about? Another problem is that the protagonist's character is not vivid enough. The lack of description of the process of abnormal acceptance will make the protagonist's character very flat. The advantage is that it is very new. As Long Aotian or Gou Mingliu, the protagonist is a bit open, and the subject matter is too new. If the author does not have an outline, there is a high probability that the plot will go crazy. In particular, the disaster is too desperate. With limited intervention, it is difficult to reasonably explain why people have not become extinct. This is not the depth of the plot that a new author can control. The intensity of this apocalypse is too great, the protagonist is too hung up, and the creativity is too new. It will be very difficult for the author to control the direction of the story and the evolution of the world. I hope the author has his own outline and general idea. I'm looking forward to it, it's well written, at least it's food. But there is a big risk that the plot will go crazy or the logic will collapse.

On the first day, be careful ❤ Superman, On the second day, be happy ❤ Superman, …

I won't talk about your so-called NPC. After all, it's hard to say whether it can be considered a human being But other things: You can communicate well with your subordinates and even give strong orders, but treat them badly like a villain You are obviously capable of protecting but let active combatants die in battle Using your own people as bait and thinking of so-called training him at a critical moment They A so-called guy who is useful and convenient for gathering evil people chooses to leave a guy who has no bottom line to eat people and harm others as a dog In your story, I find it difficult to see the shining points of humanity. The occasional small flashes are also accompanied by the fundamental drive of interests. Everything is interests, whether the protagonist or the supporting role You said that the protagonist will change in the later stage, how to change it? I only see that his perspective is getting higher and higher, becoming more and more like a so-called "god", losing his respect for life, ignoring death, and no longer considering morality in his judgment and evaluation of others, but following compliance. Is it useful for you A happy person in the apocalypse? Do you think life is something to be enjoyed? Do you think their survival is a matter of coke? What do you want to express with this cold-blooded story? Danger is the darkest moment for human nature, and it is also the time when human nature shines. But what I see in your story is that the dark side of human nature is constantly growing, spreading and eroding, and the light of human nature is constantly dimming . . . . Does your protagonist really change later on? Or is it really possible to change the image you have created? I'm sorry, I felt really depressed after reading part of it, I couldn't express my feelings, I didn't agree with my views, goodbye.

I can only say that it is not suitable to write such a novel at the beginning. If I read this kind of detailed content on an informal platform, I will definitely read it happily. However, when I saw this kind of protagonist in Qidian, I still didn't like it. The protagonist in Qidian should still be as upright as possible. Although in the protagonist's situation, it is understandable that he becomes like this. But on such a formal website, such a protagonist is indeed not in line with the mainstream.

First of all, the author is a newcomer, so there will be many problems. Let me explain them here: 1. This book is not a salvation-type novel, so the protagonist in the early stage is a cautious and a bit bad ordinary person, and he will gradually change in the later stage. But the low-level outlook is normal. He will only be more arrogant in the world of reincarnation, not the end of the world with living people, so please don't sympathize with NPCs. 2. I am very happy to accept opinions and guidance from readers, because I am just a newbie.

. . . You are excellent, this book can really survive 666😁😁😁

There are cool articles about the world being suspended, there are cool articles about how there is only one person left in the world, there are cool articles about time loops, there are cool articles about doomsday mansions/RVs/bases/spaces, and there are cool articles about live broadcasting the end of the world. But these old settings have their own shortcomings and limitations. Only this protagonist can enjoy the entire infinite loop world to himself. He can enjoy all the benefits without being responsible, and he can also see how miserable people are in the doomsday world. . . Happiness comes from comparison. How cool can this protagonist be? I can only say that I am limited by my imagination, and I can't imagine how great it would be. . .

The interesting setting is equivalent to an apocalyptic theme where the protagonist simulates management in front of the computer. It's a pity that the rhythm is a bit off, the protagonist is like a hammer here and a hoe here, and the upgrade is not very good.

And you, my brother, you are the nanny.

The main character is just a fun person, and to be honest, I don't really like it. Can't stand it

The creativity is good, and the beginning is fine, but it's just not that exciting, neither good nor good. You say he is just a ghost. He has no qualifications at all. He just admits his identity and seeks out his brothers. You could say that he is a fun-loving person, but he is not happy or cheerful enough. There is also the doomsday background, and there is no description of the darkness of human nature in the doomsday. I feel that the supporting characters in the doomsday are laughing and joking. Let's talk about the plot. There is a plot, but it tends to be based on running accounts. The plot keeps progressing, but after the beginning, there is no sense of involvement, and it feels very confused       Finally, let's talk about the protagonist. The most important thing is that he has no personality charm, nothing outstanding, he is neither a villain nor a decent person, neither selfish nor dedicated. You can say that he is a fun person. He does not find any fun, not enough fun. The whole feeling is that he is a real, ordinary ordinary person, his personality is not distinctive enough, and he can't find a point of substitution.

First of all, he has a bottom line and is not the type to go crazy and kill randomly. He will only act recklessly when facing NPCs in the world of reincarnation, regardless of the other party's life or death. Because he is the only one left in the world of reincarnation. If he continues to play alone in this kind of game, he will inevitably become a little twisted and perverted. The others are not people who really have souls, so don't worry about it. In a post-apocalyptic world where other people in reality have survived, the protagonist is much more cautious and tolerant. He doesn't deliberately attack good people and ordinary people, that's the bottom line.

Little author, do you understand? (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

Don't you understand what everyone wants to see?

The first three pictures are not very good in shaping. The protagonist can be alone in this world. You don't want to write it in a clumsy way. The protagonist's mentality is too serious and does not suit everyone, making it look like a game. What you want to see

The subject matter is good, but the writing power is lacking. The main line and sense of achievement are not obvious. It is not easy to write brilliantly like this.

Does your narrator not know the name of the protagonist, Yayan? I thought the main character had changed his last name. Can't stand it anymore, leave.

There is a science fiction work, "The Ruins of Time" written by the writer Bao Shu. The setting in it is that most people have discovered that the world has fallen into a time loop. It is quite interesting.

The idea is good, but it doesn't make people want to read on. The protagonist just becomes a friend and works part-time. You shouldn't explore it first, meet a beautiful woman or something, this is a common plot!