Traveling Through the Wasteland: Starting with Repairing Power Armor

Shen Nong is Coming The content you want to read in the introduction is only available in the first eight chapters, the meaning behind is unclear. The male protagonist has always been weak and incompetent and has been led around. The female protagonist will force the male protagonist to be his boyfriend as soon as she meets him (and is suspected of being mentally ill and has schizophrenia back and forth). The author is a female channel who just switched to a male channel and wrote the book, so the female channel is very strong. The male protagonist is like a female channel and the female protagonist has changed gender. My evaluation is that the author made a big mistake. If you like to read female pornographic sadomasochism, you can read it 🥱

After reading Chapter 12, I still don't understand what the author is writing. There is no malicious intention and I just want to chat. 1. The inexplicable heroine. The village leader's character changes are too confusing, especially when getting up and fighting mechas. The character portrayal is inexplicable. (What, you also have a split personality?) 2. The time traveler and the system have no idea what the meaning is (providing tools? Real tool people?). 3. When joining the Shanzhai, were the descriptions of various characters, such as the son of the second boss, accepted? Don't you want to test your loyalty? Just take them to the city defense? (Good guy, where did you come from as a Trisolaran?) 4. There are also mechas, which are computers covered in iron shells. Being able to repair computers does not mean you can program systems, and you have never seen mechas before. And you also added fantasy elements (don't tell me it's a technological wasteland novel, you turned into a wolf because of your vindictiveness, why did you 3D project it.) 5, and about the female protagonist holding a sword on her neck, ah, normal people think that she will kill him while she sleeps. (Although she threatened me with a knife, she must love me? Otherwise, why didn't she threaten others with a knife?) Considering that the author used to write female videos, um... I gave encouragement but did not support it. Although other readers may speak harshly, I still suggest that the author go back to writing female videos, or find a class. I don't know about female videos, but male videos mainly focus on cool stories. A weak male protagonist with a big female protagonist won't work here, nor will a gentle male protagonist. Only those that mainly focus on the male protagonist having fun will be accepted.

Does it mean that besides the protagonist, there are other time travelers from the earth? If you write it like this, it's really just a piece of shit. You might as well find a factory to screw it in. It's rubbish.

There are more than 50 chapters so far, and there are a lot of pitfalls. The plot is so cloudy and foggy that it is difficult to understand. Mecha maintenance only has a few questions in the first few chapters and then it is gone. May I ask the author what kind of story you want to write? Have you read through your book yourself? How long are you going to dig the hole?

Writing online articles now, digging holes and burying dozens of big foreshadowings is just another way to seek death.

These three chapters introduce in detail the use of AK series rifles. Bao Xuebao Association. 😡 Related to ak47 akm akms ak74 ak74m ak74u ak12 ak106 ak101 ak102 ak545 rkp47 rpk16 56 punch and other ak series rifles or their imitation models. The operating methods of the above models are basically universal. (The picture comes from the Internet, the watermark is from Qidian)

How can I put it, the setting is pretty good, and I accept other time-travelers, but the crazy village leader in the back is a bit confusing, and I didn't understand it after watching it for a long time. The village owners from different timelines traveled through time just to get the protagonist, and they can also control the protagonist's mind at will. So why is the protagonist the protagonist? Isn't that just pure clowning? It's so useless, and there's no sense of immersion at all. Who doesn't want to read a novel just to enjoy it, and work hard? What are you trying to do? A protagonist who doesn't even have a golden finger? System? Every time traveler has it. As long as he is not stupid, he can achieve some achievements. What are the characteristics of the protagonist? Is the system incomplete? Or should we forcefully pick up treasures in the cracks later and pick up a golden finger? So how do you spend your new book period? Without exposure, who would see it? It all boils down to one question? Why is the protagonist the protagonist?

It's true that what I wrote is a piece of shit. I didn't come from the post forum, but to comment on the early stage is really a piece of shit. I don't understand what the author wants to express. People all over the world know that there are time travelers, and then in the third chapter at the beginning, another time traveler died inexplicably. Then there is an inexplicable woman who becomes the heroine, and then the male protagonist advances the plot with her inexplicably. It is really confusing and I can't understand what is written. Although some people scold it very harshly, this way of writing is really not as good as entering the factory. According to my understanding, the author is writing about repairing computers (mechas) in another world. I don't see the fun at all. Just repair the mechas directly, but the core of the mecha shell is a computer. Then others were playing mecha battles, and the protagonist was doing logistics, but the background and characters were so unintuitive and inexplicable that the heroine would take out a knife to kill the protagonist at every turn. If I were the protagonist, I would conquer everyone in the different world first. . . . . 😥😥😥

Sometimes I am the boss, sometimes I am the second boss, now I am a spirited girl, and now I am a sweet girl, and then Pigfoot has no idea what he is doing all day long, which makes me look confused.

Except for the two sections where the protagonist repairs the two mechas in the front, the rest is not related to maintenance. Repairs are non-stick, there is no strength improvement, and the protagonist is treated like a fool, with his system and part of his memory broken. A lunatic who only cares for herself cannot be a heroine, and she must be dealt with later.

I think the reason why most people can't catch up with the latest chapters is here

My evaluation is that except for computer repair, according to the latest chapters, everything else can be deleted. I skipped twenty chapters and it had no effect.

To be honest, what I've seen so far gives me the feeling of being fumbling in and out.

This is the first time I met an author who replies to every post.

What is this book about so far? Is there anyone who understands this that can tell me something? I'm so confused now!

The results can no longer be described as bleak. There are only 20 fake chases out of 4000 collections... Tomorrow we will see if it will be 10... But I will still finish writing this story. Estimated completion of one million words. In the future, 300,000 words will be available on the shelves. When the time comes, I will give you some useful information to improve my writing style. Think of it as an exercise. Try to write something more normal next time.

Originally, this book had many settings, various mechas, and messy knowledge on the computer, which made it tiring to read. As a result, that woman acted like a monster at every turn, which made it even more annoying to watch.

After reading these chapters, the main character is so useless. He is as useless as me. I always feel like I am looking in the mirror. It is very uncomfortable and I can't see anything. I am just like a bazaar. I jumped.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. Unfortunately, I originally wanted to support the author, but it ended up being a big deal for me. What I want to see is a man in the post-apocalyptic wasteland becoming a flesh-and-blood man. He can experience betrayal, sneak attacks, and even lose his limbs. He can stand up from the mud pit with nothing, mixed with some joy, and the ending is good. Rather than using the guise of powered armor, the core is actually an old fantasy mecha style. There are a lot of such things in Japanese anime novels and domestically. Why don't they use the name of powered armor? The writing of the heroine is even worse. I would like to ask why you chose this Pig Nose as the heroine? Just for her to kill innocent people? Putting a knife to your neck at the beginning? Or will she directly kill your compatriots? Or do you have a personality that will draw a knife if you disagree? Are there any advantages to having a female protagonist throughout? Are there any profound memories of life and death with the male protagonist? No! She can be the heroine just because she is the heroine! Imagine you have traveled to a strange world. A knife is placed across your neck as soon as you travel. Not long after, a compatriot is brutally murdered in front of your eyes. All his belongings were taken away by the village, and he was also killed in the end. Because you are "useful", you survived, and you still have sex with some nightingale. If you don't agree, I'll cut your neck. The male protagonist just stays here happily and becomes a member of this camp? What is the difference between this situation and the two devils? Don't want revenge? Don't want to escape from here? I didn't see any such psychological description in the whole process. On the contrary, I saw the male protagonist and felt that it was quite good. It was quite comfortable to stay here. Will we continue to repair mechas (firearms) for Zhaizi (Imperial Army) next? Continue to let the people in the village use the hero's repaired weapons to kill another "useless" person with peace of mind? I watched the whole process! From Chapters 1 to 25, I didn't see the real wasteland in each chapter. All I saw was Japan's brainless heroine setting, which also included female videos.

The first few chapters of the book were very interesting and novel when it came to repairing the armor. Later, after the domineering heroine came out, the whole book went in the wrong direction. If you still want to write it down, you might as well revise it

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Rounding out the title of the book

The outline of the new book is nearly 300,000 words, which is longer than the main text of Power Armor. When I was writing my thesis, I could say that I had been living in the library for the past month. In the end, I found that buying books is more convenient than going to the library The situation is pretty stable, although I had a slight breakdown tonight. It still feels very regretful. I think that the setting really cannot compare with Power Armor. I also struggled with whether the results would have been better if I had submitted it to the light novel. Don't worry, when the time comes, it will definitely not contain the same weird nonsense and random use of punctuation marks as the short essay here. A 300,000-word outline can be made into 500,000 words if I change the setting. As for the story of Su Warren and Nightingale, the two of them gave birth to twenty children together and were very happy ( ) The content of the new book is about killing, killing, and killing. Male channels cannot accept the love and love in this book. When the time comes, the heroine of the new book will be a tool, and the job of killing, killing, and killing must still be done by the male protagonist. To tell you a little bit, it has a little to do with the picture. But it's just a background board Please don't tell anyone if you recognize it, and keep some privacy for others The book may be released at the end of the year, and I haven't written much in the text yet. I plan to polish it before releasing the book. Then I will challenge the daily limit of 10,000 and ensure that it will exceed 100,000. Save the manuscript on (start to brag) No regrets as I write this, I wish you all a happy day and meet someone who loves you like a nightingale and will love you to death ( Rose Flower Tea May 17, 2024

I have to say that it is really difficult to find books in Qidian. I can't find them even if I enter the wasteland, and I have to sift through more than 300,000 words. I can see the author's efforts, even the comments posted on QQ will be replied to, but when I look at the category of science fiction, I feel that it is almost inevitable that you will be disappointed. Why not divide it into light novels? Even if it's a fan-made derivative, it's better than your piece of sci-fi.        ， In the past, when "Xuanjian Immortal Clan" was still called "Family: I am the Magical Weapon that Protects the Clan", although there were a large number of readers who were attracted by the plot and world view to support it, it could not get on the monthly ticket list. After changing its name, a group of book friends pooled their money to reward the Silver Alliance and attracted a large number of readers. It is a fairy tale, and the competition is fierce. You are a science fiction, and there is basically no chance. Wasteland, mechas, and systems are all antiques. Even if you go against the grain, people will not click on these words after reading them. This is a limitation of the subject matter. I have not seen many new books that have exceeded a million words. Having written so much, I just want to advise the author, take advantage of the fact that your account has few fans and if no one subscribes to it after it is put on the shelves, switch to a better track. Do you know the author of 0.2097? It used to write American comics, but no one read it at all. I also saw it on QQ Reading. The writing is actually very good, but the track is too poor and there is no fan accumulation. But now that people are taking advantage of the popularity, they have switched to cyberpunk and American comics, and it has steadily entered the monthly vote list. If you are really determined to write a good novel instead of reading it for fun, you have only two options now. The first is to write this book. Don't think about making money. You can only accumulate fans and pave the way for the next book. The second is to buy it as soon as it is put on the shelves, learn from current experience, and think of a novel and popular book.        ，QQ，，！

I was in a good mood when I saw this 79-day break. It is completely unimaginable that I was just a student who accidentally clicked on "Become a Writer" 79 days ago. 😭

The first 100 chapters of this novel are very difficult to read. I suggest you not read this novel. It is a waste of time.

I finally found a place that seemed familiar to me, the main temple, which seemed to be just the firewall.

You received a reward of 1,000,000 starting coins from Bai Yi Fengcai

1. The narrative can be messy, but it cannot be without a main line. Write an outline before writing the article! Break the main plot into phased tasks one by one, and then guide the protagonist to complete the tasks, instead of thinking up and writing them out one at a time, which is fragmented. 2. A common problem among new authors is that they like to write the background in the narrative. You must have some confidence in your own writing skills, and you must also have confidence in the readers. No reader is willing to find the main line in a pile of words and watch the actions of the protagonist. It's just like playing in an alliance. You know the map and the resource points. These are all known in advance. The rest are similar. The scope of the protagonist's journey is to open the fog of war and supplement the branch lines when the general background has been explained instead of throwing the general background and branch lines into the fog of war. 3. If you can't see the progress brought by the protagonist's identity, you should sort out the identity, give the identity tasks, and promote the development of the plot through tasks.