Siheyuan: Starting from Escape

This author has written two books in a row. What else is there to read? The writing style is as good as kindergarten. The timeline is not clear and the plot line is not good. I don't know how the editor approved his outline.

Do you know why there is a genre called Siheyuan? It's because it's real and the era is too recent. Writing that is not in line with the era will only cause trouble.

The sentence doesn't make sense at all. Go to the factory and tighten the screws!

I don't understand anything, so I just write random things. At any rate, at least have a general understanding of the social background, humanities, and life of the 1960s before writing about it.

It's outrageous. Each chapter was more poisonous than the last. After reading the first three chapters, I chose to lose my mind. But after reading Chapter 20 like this, I still can't stand it. It's so outrageous, so ridiculous.

In this era, you need a ticket to buy things, right? Damn, did you buy so many used tickets?

I quit until Chapter 13. The most important thing about a period novel is the description of some aspects of life. There can be loopholes, but not too many. The bill system has been implemented in the 1960s. Basically, you need to pay for everything. The protagonist in the book has various problems with buying things without mentioning the bills. It is simply poisonous. There is still food to buy a bunch of fine grains, which is even more poisonous. It's a year of food shortage! ! ! Not to mention that the protagonist came here to escape famine, so he probably didn't even get the food supply! ! ! Too many questions, flashed!

Stop writing it, it really doesn't look good. Mo pulled his butt and gave it to a big fish, thinking that he is a thief. Then you write Qin Huairu earlier, how disgusting it is, come in and screw it.

When I heard Chapter 22, it was okay. It was well written. It wasn't very good at catching mice at the beginning, but it became fun once I entered the courtyard. Although catching fish and changing furniture, I didn't sleep all night, and I was hungry until 3pm the next day, freezing to death in the winter. However, I have a high resistance, and noble listeners will automatically ignore the unreasonable parts. Generally speaking, it's quite fun to listen to these people's grievances, hatreds, partings, intrigues, petulances, anus on top of anus.

People who don't count bills when buying things are writing in the 1960s. Don't forget the bill era.

There is no timeline, and I don't know what year it was, but Xiao Jia died, probably after 1961, and Lao Li was written out of character. Let's see what I write in the future, but for now, it's a bad review.

I didn't understand the root of the contradiction in the courtyard at all, so I just wrote it indiscriminately, which is simply sick. Siheyuan has been analyzed very clearly by many netizens. The core is the issue of elderly care. Silly Zhu is a sperm that has been tricked into the brain. Lou Xiao'e is a woman who has been cheated her whole life. Even though she came back from Hong Kong, she is still so stupid, which makes people think it is illogical. Why do you, a runaway, give classes to this group of workers, projectionists, and chefs in the courtyard? Just because you have a big face or because you have a big life? So I gave up immediately after reading the introduction.

If you read this book based on your IQ, you will definitely lose.

There is a saying that people are humble when they leave their hometown. You, a person who fled to the capital, still want to teach people in the courtyard? Unless you give tangible benefits, no matter how reasonable your words are, no one will criticize you. In the eyes of others, you are just a beggar.

In the previous chapter, it was written that the furniture was fully furnished, but in the next chapter, it was written that there was no furniture. What the hell?

Just look at the introduction and you will know that another dog licker

The author's level can be seen from this introduction. Do you say this for yourself when you are worried?

Author, I am also writing a book at Qidian. It is about Zhutianliu. Because the protagonist is awesome, he ran away to other worlds after the dimensionality reduction attack in Siheyuan. There are some cool things that I haven't had time to write yet. Even if your protagonist only has one golden finger~~1,000 square meters of space. It can also be used in different ways. How can you just pretend to be that field mouse for a few times and then disappear? ? ? ? For example, a thousand square meters of space is projected to the outside world, serving as a space boundary, soundproofing, confinement, and fishing and hunting in the air. In the test space, can I control the movement of objects with my mind? If so, what is the moving speed? There is no time flow in space, so you can use your mind to control the acceleration of objects and move the stone in high-speed circles in space until the speed of the stone is ten times the speed of sound. If you open a small space and let the stone fly out at ten times the speed of sound, can you blow the head of an animal? And we still can't find out that it was you who did it! No motive! Second, there are no crime tools and no physical evidence! If it was used for assassination, no one would prove it! You haven't gotten rich yet! Kill people and steal treasures, rob homes and homes, and make a fortune! Re-develop teleportation like the Gate Fruit~~run on legs~~lurk past~~ Go to the United States to buy it for zero dollars, and then deliver it to Tiananmen! Fool!