I Seek Immortality in Uncle Jiu's World

Brother, please stop writing randomly. The five evils and three shortcomings are in Luban's book. Uncle Jiu is a disciple of Zhengzhong Maoshan. Maoshan is the direct descendant of the Shangqing Dynasty. The sage's method, where did the five evils and three shortcomings come from? . . . .

Why is the protagonist so nosy? Forget about helping to retrieve the coffin fungi, they went to find Shi Jian together and caused trouble themselves. Moreover, Lin Jiu knows that you practice evil arts, and if you don't like it, you insist on flattering him. Can't you stay away from him?

If I remember correctly, heresy has five shortcomings and three shortcomings. Although the novel is mainly based on the setting of this book, as one of the orthodox inheritance of a world, it feels strange to have such a big flaw.

Speechless? Still have three disadvantages? This is what others compiled a few years ago

I've read Chapter 16 and it's so confusing. You're practicing heresy and you're still a bitch. Author, you're such a talent.

You can watch it, but didn't the protagonist remember the plot himself? Why is it written like he's forgotten it? Write it down quickly or it will be a poisonous point.

To be honest, in this novel, they are only involved in internal affairs at home. They don't know that evil ways like expanding outward can be used to kill others. There are materials and resources everywhere abroad. If you are afraid that some foreign countries are too strong, you can start with a small country and slowly accumulate strength. If that is not possible, you can support some domestic warlords to increase their power and expand outward.

To be honest, I have read several books about the world of Uncle Jiu, but your Maoshan setting is the worst and unreasonable. I really can't stand it. If you don't know how to write, don't add settings by yourself. Do you think anyone will read this?

Brother, if you don't know how to write, please don't write randomly!

What is this? Someone of the same generation as Uncle Jiu, come here to play a small role? There is a lot of verbosity here, but I have no ability at all!

I originally read the first chapter and it was pretty good, but I turned it off after reading the comments!

There is no sense of immersion at all, so I will pounce.

How should I put it? The protagonist knew the plot and kept following it without changing anything. The author wrote it based on the movie, without writing his own main line.

No wonder it's so boring, it's long-winded and boring, and the plot is all boring and clumsy.

The writing is okay, but the plot is too stretched. Most of it is copied from the original plot, and then the protagonist comes in and shows his face and reveals his hands. The plot is still the same as it should be, and there is no change at all. So what's the point of watching it? The protagonist has his own goal, but from beginning to end he is rambling on and doing things that have little to do with the goal to force the plot of the movie.

There are a lot of typos, it's very messy and looks terrible.

Without the art of protecting the Tao, one would live forever like a ball.

I still don't understand the character of the protagonist at all, and the timeline is too confusing. One moment is the soul ferry, and the other is the world of Uncle Jiu. Secondly, the character of the protagonist makes me sick, and he doesn't look like a seeker at all.

After watching it for a long time, the protagonist made no progress at all. . Hang out outside every day? ? ? Junk novels

I have to write down all the movies, as if I'm keeping accounts

I have no desire after seeing the second picture.

Uncle Jiu's Maoshan is called Xiamao, also called Minmao, which is the Dharma teaching, and the ancestor of the master. Maoshan's Qingzong is Shangmao, the great religion, Qingxiu, and everyone can only shake the gods.