Siheyuan: Relieve the Kuang and Relieve the Worry

This kind of novel can still be written! Totally smear

He actually passed the trial! Reviewing political stance is also problematic

A four-year-old child goes to the black market to sell 15 pigs. What do you think, author? I'm really curious😓

It was ordinary and nothing. The early 1950s was a relatively red and hot era. Places like Beijing were an era of vigorous construction. People were very busy. Workers worked overtime and mobilized workers from all over the country. Beijing before 1959 was actually a bit like the late 1970s. The stories at this point in time should focus on donations for the war, workers in full swing, various worker-peasant blind dates, various social activities such as tea parties, as well as petty bourgeoisie feelings, and the love and killing of each other under the friendship between China and the Soviet Union. It is recommended to refer to The Little Woman Under the Zhengyang Gate, Sun Honglei's The Great Craftsman, The Love Story of Parents, Ye Luo Chang'an, My Child, My Home.

I saw a chapter of Angong Niuhuang Wan and I couldn't stand it. It was too holy. Why didn't you write that he should be Yi Zhonghai's son?

This book is a typical outline problem. If you don't have your own outline, you won't be able to write if you deviate from the outline. You have to go back to the original outline plot of Siheyuan several times. To sum up, I can't break through the original courtyard. I'm just like a clown, just messing around for a long time.

It was okay at first, but then I turned around and Wuyu was fucked several times. I still let them go I paid 30 chapters and stopped the loss in time. . .

The opening is okay, but after returning from the countryside, it becomes the same old routine again. You are blind to this opening.

Too poisonous. After reading this, I feel stupid. Even a first grader in elementary school cannot write such a novel.

The protagonist has a wrong outlook. So many birds have bullied him many times, yet he still forgives others. Give someone a good old age. Destroy three views

I booked it all, but I regretted it It was too poisonous. In that era, the old lady was only detained for three years as an enemy agent, and she could wander around after she was released. Yi Zhonghai and Liu Haizhong were only detained for two years because of their relationship with the enemy agent. She could still be a steward, resume her position in the rolling mill, become an eighth-level worker, and participate in secret missions. The protagonist, suspected of falsely spreading rumors as an enemy agent, was the result of betrayal and divorce Silly Zhu and Silly Mao were also opposites and completely separated.

The first few dozen chapters are the most interesting, but the rest are like a drunk wandering through alleys. You don't know where you are going. The characters are changing in an inexplicable way. Others have tried to eliminate them many times, but I just passed them by talking. I was very disappointed. The character setting and plot direction at the beginning were quite good.

I'm sorry to say, I've read two books with the same kind of nerve. They obviously changed the character and atmosphere of the people in the courtyard, but suddenly they said they couldn't change it, but they still corrected it. It's inexplicable. I feel like I won't edit anymore in the future, so I'll just copy it from TV. It's easy to cheat money 😥. Well, I'll give it up before I cheat money. It's a pity, obviously it can be different.

It looks so suffocating, even the gang of idiots in the courtyard are trying to kill people like this, how can they finally talk about it? ? ? What a good temper this is? This is not an operation that normal people can do! Still not a man

The protagonist is the reincarnation of Nezha, who can speak in two months and run around in five months 🤭

He was extremely poisonous and was reported and framed. Just say a few words and the matter would be over? The eldest brother has been lying on his body sucking blood, so it's over? Can't you just ignore him?

It's really a bad review. A reformed prisoner becomes a master, while a spy is only sentenced to three years.

The first thirty chapters were okay and positive, but someone else probably wrote the rest. The style changed drastically, and it was dark, violent, and full of irrational plots. I couldn't stand it anymore.

Going to the black market when I was 4 years old, this is too exaggerated. It was originally very interesting, but now it is boring. The more I watch, the more interesting it becomes. . . . Forget it, give up

Read Chapter 42 of Living in the World. The author writes Goudao to the extreme. Really do not fight back when hit or scolded. My father was demoted, my brother dropped out of school, and the whole family had to endure it. The male protagonist will also tell his family that our family does not cause trouble, but we are not afraid of it either. The soldiers came to cover up the water and earth. Really do it to the extreme. Really author, if you are just for water, I can understand. Do you have to make money? It's not shabby. I see that the male protagonist has to go to college for 13 years of his life. As a family, we can get closer together. It can be said that they are mortal enemies with Siheyuan. It is inevitable that others will want the Yan family to die without a household registration book. I don't like this kind of depressing online writing. I didn't want the author to make the male protagonist so vicious that he kills everyone at once, but to counterattack, let the Siheyuan group often suffer injuries and be absent for a while, instead of just uniting together all the time. But the author just writes the male protagonist as a marginalized figure in the courtyard, a victim of the whole family, and can only hide. What is this called "Spiritual Victory Method" Ah Q spirit. Maybe others like this kind of male protagonist? Right. I don't like it.

Can a baby call mommy after two months? Have your vocal cords developed? What about common sense? ? Later, I saw him going to the black market to sell 15 wild boars at the age of 4? ? Adults will be followed if they go there! Have the human traffickers relented? Have all the little stewards in the black market become giant Buddhas? ? How did you pass the trial? ? Is there a backend?

After reading over a hundred chapters, I just couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist, the Virgin, is extremely poisonous. Poisonous point 1: After the three reform-through-labor prisoners Yi Zhonghai, Liu Haizhong and the deaf old lady were released, not only were no one despised, but they were able to become stewards, and many people also supported him. After the three reform-through-labor prisoners were released, they did not do anything good or good to change their reputations Poisonous point 2: The Jia family has never helped the protagonist's family, and they have not even done anything to help. Suddenly the protagonist uses three gold bars to buy jobs for the Jia family. Poison Point 3: Yi Zhonghai found trouble several times and wanted to hire a murderer to hurt the protagonist. When Yi Zhonghai's child got sick, the protagonist's family gave 80 yuan to Yi Zhonghai, and he couldn't bear the changes in Yi Zhonghai's family.

What a mess! The author's cross-writing is too serious!

I don't even know what the author is writing. It's almost fantasy. A 3-4 year old child has martial arts skills 🤫 and the plot is inconsistent.

The writing is messy, but someone actually reads it.

Without plug-ins, how can we take off, and if we still mess around, we won't treat ourselves as enemy agents and take prey, author? ? ? ?

The baby is talking at two months...

The first few dozen chapters of this book are well written, but the rest are not interesting. When it comes to the paid chapters, they are even more verbose and made up randomly.

I'm going back and forth with the main character's name. Will I be able to write a book?