I Have a Life-Changing Treasure

Don't force the protagonist to be kind just for the sake of a few readers with a holy mother's glass heart. In such a world, kindness and lack of scheming are the butcher's knife that kills you and your family. Unless you are so strong that everyone is afraid of you, then no one around you or the people you come into contact with will be a bad person, and they will all be good people.

The character of the protagonist should not be too soft-hearted. After all, in this world, the survival of your family is the most important thing. Don't spread unnecessary kindness everywhere, otherwise the book will have a strong sense of fragmentation and feel too alien. Also, the characters of the protagonist's family should not be written in a way that is too kind and kind. In such a world, few kind and benevolent people can survive. This is the basic logic. Don't write about the protagonist's family without any scheming. The author can think about it, if today's college students are placed in such a world, how long can they survive? Just the fact that they can't be ruthless gives them little hope of survival. After all, after so many years of ideological transformation, Chinese people have been transformed into less aggressive sheep. The author still needs to pay attention to the logic, and the worldview and the protagonist's personality should not be too separated.

I feel like a family man again😅

After reading the second chapter, I realized that there was no need to read this book. He was stabbed in the kidneys and instead of rolling around on the floor, he was still able to curse! This kind of basic common sense is lacking. You can imagine the level of this book. IMHO, it is Paramecium level!

What book? Massacre? He Xie Se will be too frustrated, I just want to watch the killing spree! Don't tell me about positive energy. I have a mortgage of more than two million yuan and am riding next door!

Shennong's comment: The writing style is a little unfluent and intermittent, which affects the reading experience. The emotions come suddenly, the plot design is a bit imperfect, and the world view in the novel is not expressed enough. When you go to a strange place, you must understand various histories and mainstream ideas. I feel that I am outstanding and not afraid of death, which is a bit brainless.

The subject matter is very novel, but the writing is not very good and the plot is very mindless.

What the hell did you write? Just call someone aunt after time travel? Do you recognize your relatives in everyone you meet? You don't even want to see the original person, and you even feel a little resentful? How about you take possession of the body and rebel?

I can't stand it, the writing is too messy and not detailed enough

Have you asked about pursuing further reading? Can you advance?

The author can write whatever he wants, and if he wants to read it, how many books can he write through crowdfunding that are no longer pornographic?