
Tokyo Super: My Girlfriend Is a Time Girl
东京超能:我的女友是时间系少女
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 111k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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46Chapters
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Protagonist: That's it, your name is Hua Xiong! Lu Jia: I'm not. Protagonist: I said you are Hua Xiong, you are Hua Xiong. (In brutal killing.)
Then, there is a person next door who can forcibly change other people's names to Hua Xiong.
Protagonist: If I call you Hua Xiong, do you dare to agree? Passers-by: Why don't you dare? Protagonist: Hua Xiong! Passerby: Grandpa is here! Passers-by...
The shortcomings of basically inferior Japanese light novels include the main character. Asashi's character never admits his abilities or his ambiguous relationship with girls. He believes whatever others say and ignores important information. Finally, you can risk your life for the smile of others.
They are all concept gods, and the second one is super easy to trigger. It would be a waste to just change them casually.
Hua Tuo: Red-faced thief, do you still remember my son Hua Xiong?
I haven't watched it yet. Can the heroine force others to change their names?
Thank you for reading my book
I am very immature and a poor person, and I know that this first book I read at the starting point has shortcomings. Thank you for reading my book. If you have any comments or suggestions, I am not afraid to receive them. In addition, I received feedback from some readers who suggested that I change the title of the book. I am not very good at naming, so if you are not satisfied with the new title, I hope you can tell me. Thank you.
Anyway, thank you for reading my book
This is my first time writing a book at Qidian. I already know that I am very good. The author is just a student and not as good as other authors. Since I wrote this book, many book friends have made pertinent criticisms or directly attacked me. Of course I recognize the good writing and will slowly change it. If you attack me... I am just here to earn living expenses. I owe nothing to anyone and readers do not owe me anything. I am sorry if you don't like it, but I will delete any comments that are personal attacks. Finally, for the book friends who read this book, whether you can't finish it or not, even if you scold me and I delete it, thank you for reading my book. This is also growth for me.
Hands down gently, woo woo woo
I woke up in the middle of the night and read the comments and couldn't sleep at night... The author is very good. Readers and book friends will say woo woo. This book is a harem light novel with a bit of a middle-class love affair and daily life. If there are readers who find it unacceptable, please be careful. The author has pointed out the key points here. Some book friends found it acceptable after browsing the comment area. If it doesn't work, you can retreat in time. Wuwu, firstly, the heroine has an unpleasant personality at the beginning (similar to Yukinoshita Yukino and Suzumiya Haruhi), secondly, the male protagonist is a little indecisive towards the heroine in the early stage, and thirdly, the author is writing for the first time and is not very good at it. If there is anything you don't like, please remind me, there is no need to attack Wuwuwu, I will change it! It will really change! The author is still a student and has never been out of the society. He writes books to earn living expenses, so he cares about comments... I should be careful when I start. I will be disappointed for a long time when I see a very offensive comment...
It's quite a light novel to read, and the protagonist looks a bit like Toru Watanabe when he teases his teacher. It is recommended to put the opening quotation marks in the first paragraph of Chapter 1.
Come on! The first few chapters are good. Don't be like other novels, which are good at the beginning and then drag on your hips.
The writing is quite good, but I suggest the author wait until the editor comes to work on the 18th, and then ask him to help change the title of the book. This name is too stupid now.
Come on, author, support you (≧∇≦)/
Short comments
To be honest, I have the urge to read the last chapter, but I don't have the interest to continue following it. The book is very innovative and interesting, but the writing is not particularly good. After reading it, I felt that the response was mediocre.
I personally think that although the writing skills may be lacking and some plots may be immature, just try your best. Listening to too many suggestions may lead to confusion.
Very good. I just started reading and found that the book has been sent 🙂