Kamen Rider: Born to Be King

Shi Wang's leather case is so ugly, I don't know why so many people are writing about it

There is nothing wrong with the writing. If you start with a heterogeneous knight, you don't need to abide by the spirit of chivalry. But there is one thing that is not comfortable. That is, the heroine is not saying that the heroine is not good, but it feels like you are driving. Now you drive less because you will encounter the crab master. This is no better than before. In the past, you could knock people in the face without any problem. You can't do it now, so you might as well concentrate. To push the plot, you drive in various obscure ways. You think it's okay. What if you meet the God of Harmony? I think you should focus on the plot. When I saw you driving, I felt awkward. Why is it not better than before? It is best not to drive in this subject, because the speed cannot be increased. Once it is raised, it will be directly hit by the river crab master. Therefore, the speed is only like this, but it makes people feel awkward. In novels, especially those read on this website, what we pay attention to should be the plot. If you want to read such a book, I will go directly to Xiao Huang Wen, it is not better than this.

Emm... Overall, it's interesting, but I feel like there's something weird. For example, when I watched the armor simulation, I felt that the protagonist was very talented and had a strong combat power, but yeah, there was just a weird feeling that I can't describe.

This author must have some kind of side job, he is quite skilled in the business, and he is the kind of person who will definitely get his website blocked if he reports it.

What the hell is the protagonist, licking the original character?

Taking away the power of the devil snake, this is a being who lost his memory after becoming a god. He has the same power as a god.

It's a very good knight story. I have never seen Kamen Rider or like me, I have only seen one Kamen Rider. It's also quite interesting to watch.

Very interesting The writing is good, the content is not awkward, the mutant knight at the beginning is interesting, and the source of the system is clear (classic father-making behavior). I hope the author can continue writing. Among Kamen Rider fanfics, it is considered good.

Have the last few chapters been a bit too abstract? . .

A little personal suggestion, after chapter 69, the taste is a bit weird. The author actually doesn't need to do too much. Superfluous supplements. In fact, he only needs to briefly state the protagonist's perception of others. Otherwise, how should he say it? Improper description will cause the protagonist to be awkward and have a weird feeling. Unlike the three-point ridicule, three-point ridicule, and six-point carelessness, the actual expression on the face is very strange. It is recommended not to write too much about the mentality of the protagonist becoming a weirdo. Otherwise, if you write about the weird shape and the following, after the dial is integrated, anyone with a discerning eye can see that you are in the water, and the protagonist looks like a fool.