Rebirth 06

The author of another Rebirth 09 book I'm following has cut 😰, so you have to hold on. In addition, it is best to determine the love line early. If there is a single heroine, just have a sweet love relationship. If the heroine is not married, don't flirt with her, and concentrate on writing about Luo Xue. If there are multiple female protagonists, it will take some effort. Accept the male protagonist when it's time to accept it. Don't be too arrogant and stand-up at the same time. It looks disgusting to be a scumbag and be upright.

Too literate. It looks awkward, why?

The writing is so good, it reminds me of the Great Nirvana written by Orleans Smoked Fish Pot in 10 years

The writing is very superficial. He is a student but not like a student. He is like a businessman but not a businessman. It is very vague to write about how much money he makes but not how much he earns. If he only writes about making money but not how to use the money, isn't this dead money? It's just weird anyway. Superficial article

This book is actually very contradictory, contradictory in various senses. Because the descriptions in the previous chapters are very streamlined, I didn't want to read any more, but the writing style was acceptable, and I finally read the back part. It feels both fragrant and smelly. Logical accounts and good writing are logically difficult to put together, but this book does it perfectly. There is a big difference between this kind of journal-style writing and Xiaobaiwen. The difference is that the author likes to spend a lot of pen and ink writing things that have no meaning. For example, the author's last biology teacher, a character whose past and present lives have nothing to do with the protagonist, can obviously be mentioned in one stroke, but a lot of unnecessary ink is still spent. The look and feel is very poor, as if the protagonist has been stripped of reality since his rebirth, nothing has changed, and he doesn't want to change anything, but there are some meaningless descriptions to portray this. And it's the description of the main and secondary characters that I can't understand, or is the foreshadowing too long? The character who spends a lot of time describing in Chapters 1 and 2 is generally not the heroine but should also be a very important supporting role? But when I saw Chapter 50, did it only appear once or was it talked about a few times on the Internet?

I think it's very well written! And why isn't it on the shelves?

The content is okay, but these three women are a bit too much, and they have intersections in life. It is difficult to handle multiple female protagonists. As long as they know each other, female competition is inevitable and peaceful coexistence cannot be achieved unless the male protagonist goes through life and death again for them.

Like the title, the protagonist is inexplicable in every sense, the fight at the beginning is also inexplicable, the beginning is outrageous and the end is inexplicable, just... Just like that, not happy, aggrieved, submissive to the locals who bully me, beating the local gangster mad dog without thinking about the consequences, no money 🌹5 yuan to buy a stick... Just, I can still watch it without thinking.

There has been no update for ten hours. Even the donkeys working in the village dare not rest like this.

Why am I the only one watching 🙂