Hong Kong Film Martial Arts Escape

1. The most sinister point is that the protagonist tells Bai Yunfei the identity of the time traveler 2. He speaks freely and always writes the kind of plot where the protagonist's talk is about to get him into trouble.

It feels like I am reading an ancient online novel, and all the classic poisonous points have been collected. For example: 1. The protagonist behaves in a hurry, revealing his background to others at every turn, and does not know how to keep some secrets. The plot of chasing a girl is also very awkward. If you like her, you will confess her love. However, the ambiguity is the most interesting thing. 2. The protagonist's vocabulary is poor. It seems that he doesn't know how to speak without some modern mantras, and then he has to say these words to the ancients and then explain these words. In fact, there are many ways to express the same meaning. 3. Take people to travel through time, and take the girl from the previous dungeon to the next dungeon. However, after leaving the original plot, the girl became a tool person and a paper person, and no longer had the vivid feeling in the original plot.

Why don't you practice after getting the secret book? Why don't you eat? Why how funny

It's okay but not much (ー_ー)!! I can only use sand dollars to describe the protagonist 눈_눈

Chapter 5: Even though I was mentally prepared, I still couldn't resist and slipped away.

The protagonist self-destructs the time traveler 🤫

The East Comes to the West, Tang Bohu Lights the Autumn Fragrance, Tianshan Boy Lao in the Eight Parts of the Dragon, Chu Liuxiang, the Laughing Hero, Fire Cloud Legend, Sword Laughter, Six-fingered Piano Demon, Swordsman...

Post a picture of Lan Xiaodie that I drew before

Dear readers! Please read it! As a new writer, if I don't understand something, I just come to the starting point and start writing a book. I'm borrowing pictures from other masters, and I beg all the masters who have collected them to read them as soon as possible. It's not easy for newcomers to create new books, thank you all!

To be honest, there are not many worlds after the beginning of the Crane Needle that are better than him, and there are not many that are better than him.

The unattractive protagonist: naive, talkative and talkative. . .

Good guy, the infinitely terrifying sense of déjà vu 😁! Come on, old man, I am a Douyin friend!