Three Kingdoms: I Became Sword Gate Pass
三国：我成了剑门关
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 210k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Qin-Han & Three Kingdoms
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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My hometown is Jianmen Pass, Jiange County, Guangyuan City, Sichuan Province.
Jianmen Pass, Jiange County, Guangyuan, Sichuan
The premise is good, but the main character's personality is unlikable.
A veteran nearing retirement, yet he acts like an 18-year-old high school student in every way.
There wasn't a single negative comment. Could it be that the author deleted them all?
I suggest revising the protagonist's character design. He's a founding veteran, but his thoughts and actions are no different from a college student's. The character design and behavior are extremely inconsistent. If you can't write this kind of character, don't write it at all. Just honestly write him as a college student. Founding veterans, or most Chinese people in general, wouldn't care about prestige or status if they actually met a prime minister; they might just pour their hearts out.
Destroying the Yan Han is not like passing through Jianmen Pass.
When Deng Ai conquered Shu Han, he didn't go through Jianmen Pass, did he? Did the protagonist go there to guard a lonely place?
The author is having a run of bad luck.
Feeling a bit lost for books, I went through my reading list again. And then I saw Liu Xie's book again. Clicking on it, I realized the author is really having a run of bad luck. Of the books I wrote after that, only "Anti-Qing" was barely finished. The rest, "I Can See Reader Comments," "Rural Tourism," "My Elder Brother," "The Prison Warden," and "Jianmen Pass," were all cut.
Damn, this protagonist's character design is an insult to the founding veterans, isn't it? 🤫
There's a saying, "Monday morning quarterback," which is used to mock others. But when someone truly becomes a Monday morning quarterback, that person is incredibly brilliant. I hope the author can write about a real Monday morning quarterback...
It feels like stepping back 10 years. Did the author travel from the future? It's like a plot from 10 years ago.
I doubt anyone would actually read this.