Mirror Through the Heavens Starts with Shooting the Condor

At first glance, it seems quite novel and interesting. But when I watched it, I felt it was boring. The original protagonist Su Ming took up very little space, and the role of the protagonist has been changed to Guo Jing, who has taken over the lead. It would be better to let Guo Jing be the protagonist from the beginning. I suggest the author to read Five Hundred Guo Jing. Guo Jing has a lot of space and does not compete for the leading role.

Whole Food Engineering Excellent order results Models in reading Recorders of each team Appreciating the industry Appreciating whether it is fun or not It started at five o'clock, nothing to do Don't worry about Qian Jinyong's novel Forget it if there is a big boss, Delete the non-brainful magician br>Evaluate human affairs Forbidden to express pain in the clip The mood is stable Your mode is turned on and spans billions of light years Don't add it in the later part of the month How many things do I have to be kind Okay, things on our side are different Ah Yun and Yue, who are thousands of miles away

The protagonist got the Golden Puppet Show, Xiaoyaoyou's Minghai Guiyuan Gong, and decades of practice experience. After practicing for a while, he thought he couldn't beat Mei Chaofeng one-on-one.

The imagination is still not big enough. If you want to distort the plot and destroy the world, you can completely encourage Guo Jing to marry his wife Hua Zheng, then assassinate Temujin, and then instigate various disciples to fight for the throne. Guo Jing will wait for the opportunity, and finally either devour the whales or divide Mongolia equally. After a few years of development, he will learn from Temujin to first destroy the Jin, then Xixia, and finally destroy the Song Dynasty to become a Genghis Khan of the Guo family.

Distort values ​​and use a set of modern capitalist values ​​​​of self-interest to adapt the national spirit of Guo Jing and others who are chivalrous and serve the country and the people. Do you know that these spirits are the centripetal force of a nation. They are all calculating and treating others like enemies and money. They will only be a piece of loose sand vying to surrender first. Who will obey whom? How can the old man be raised up?

Strictly speaking, Guo Jing had no favors from the Song Dynasty. If it weren't for the image of his mother and masters, he would have conquered the world with Genghis Khan... Speaking of which, everyone, do you think this possibility is high? As the Prince Consort of the Golden Sword, Guo Jing became one of the several Golden Horde Han Kingdoms and managed the territory of the Song Dynasty. Is this kind of thing feasible based on Jin Yong's worldview?

First, the protagonist only gained the cultivation experience of others, not the cultivation of others. He has no skills. In essence, he started practicing from an ordinary person who did not know martial arts. Second, regardless of the new version or the old version, Ke Zhen'e was blind before he met Guo Jing. Most of the Seven Jiangnan Monsters don't have a good temper. Otherwise, why are they called the Seven Monsters? Third, the comment has said several times that it is a golden puppet show, not a thunderbolt, not a thunderbolt, not a thunderbolt. Repeated three times, the thunderbolt is fantasy, and the golden light is a high martial arts, similar to Fengyun. The two force values ​​​​are fundamentally different.

Astrology, it's sixty chapters, Guo Jing just left the desert, it's really full of ink

Martial arts, vendetta, beauties, pig's feet, nothing. It's just a plug-in for the original pig's feet powder, and it doesn't seem to have any sense of involvement.

There is a fundamental contradiction. Guo Jing said that Potian relied on Mongolia to make his fortune. Before he became emperor, he was always suspicious of Mongolia and always thought about how to stab his father-in-law in the back. What a man, unjust! My wife is a Mongolian princess. If there is a war with Mongolia, the best outcome for my queen and two legitimate sons is that they will be deposed, the prince will be deposed, and they will be imprisoned. Don't say that the protagonist doesn't want it, or that all the children have been trained to take over smoothly, etc. It's not up to you then. This is unkind! Guo Jing, the so-called Great Zhou, tried his best to exclude the Mongolian forces, and relied on the Han capitulation faction for the foundation of his power. To start a war with Mongolia, we must rely on the reuse of these surrendered people. (Guo Jing is able to accept everyone with his own name, except his father-in-law Huang Yaoshi, Lu Guanying, and the spy chief Dahu) Guo Jing himself may be ignored. This is unwise! The author's plot setting does not consider whether it is reasonable or not, and ideology comes first. The protagonist relied on Mongolia to make his fortune, and after gaining power, he was eager to cut off the relationship. Pick up the bowl to eat, put down the bowl and scold your mother. If you dare to do something but don't take it seriously, you are not as good as Xiao Ge Lao. This is not brave! Also a son-in-law, Guo Jing is far less beautiful than Zhu Yuanzhang! When Guo Zixing was alive, Zhu Yuanzhang was very obedient. You know, as the father-in-law, Genghis Khan is much stronger than Guo Zixing. Guo Jing is still his son-in-law, while Zhu Yuanzhang is just his son-in-law! This is disrespectful!

After watching The Condor Shooting, I got out of the trap. Who is the protagonist? The protagonist is just a plug-in for Guo Jing, and is of no use at all. The plot is all about Guo Jing, who traveled through time?

If you're writing about Shooting the Condor, don't write about Yitian. Your previous timeline has changed.

I was confused when I read it. I changed the protagonist to a system. It would feel better. The tool-type protagonist is best written as a system.

Guo Jing is a man with an innocent heart, a great chivalrous man who serves the country and the people. This is also where the character Guo Jing shines. The author is a social beast who has experienced the whippings of modern society, which is why the author, a social beast, wrote the book. The two characters have their own merits, however, the author tried to impose his greasiness on others, which I think is wrong. The characters should be clear-cut, hate evil as much as hatred, have a pure heart, seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and benefit themselves at the expense of others. Only in this way can the characters in the novel be vivid. Instead of promoting one's own ideas and imposing one's own ideas on others, no matter whether the villain, the good, or the bad, they all act in the same way of seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages, then this book is meaningless.

Li Shimin in The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty is also a historical figure who has been criticized like Zhu Yuanzhang in The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword.

The author takes it for granted, as if he must go to war with Mongolia. You know, Guo Jing grew up in Mongolia, and Genghis Khan was half of his father. His growth and prosperity were driven by Genghis Khan. In this case, where does such heavy Han thinking come from? It's simply impossible. Look at those people who have moved abroad, they want to peel off their own skin, let alone the Chinese who grew up in foreign countries. From a personal point of view, your elder benefactor is still alive, and you just want to stab him in the back. What kind of character is this? ? Guo Jing grew up in Mongolia. Is there only one Torre who is a good friend and brother? ? Conquer territory without using your own Mongolian henchmen? ? All the Han people who surrendered from the Han region should be reused? ? ? You don't play like this, you're such a fool () = convex

The most taboo thing in the world is to write a copy that is too long. Generally, if it is more than 100 chapters, it is highly suspected of being filled with water. This is more than 140 chapters. . . I have the impression that there is a book about the heavens. The first copy was written in the late Ming Dynasty and had 300 chapters. Then I changed the copy and not many people read it. It is best to rush the eunuch

The pig's trotter in this book is actually Guo Jing, and Su is just a plug-in for Guo Jing.

In the eyes of the Mongolians, Guo Jing is the founding father of Mongolia, a relative of the emperor (if married to Hua Zheng), and a powerful military aristocrat (with a team of 30,000 men). He has outstanding achievements, uses troops like a god, and is still married to Tuo Lei Righteous brothers, this cannot be more upright, and the most hidden point is, what is Guo Jing's surname, and whose position Zhao Kuangyin robbed. As long as Guo Jing nods, the great Confucians and the soldiers of the Han Army Flag will stand firmly under Guo Jing's flag.

It's nonsense to say that we were rescued by herdsmen. We really thought that the Mongolians were singing, dancing and hospitable. We are harvesting grass and grain every year, and we are still in a slave-owning society. I may save you, but you have to be a herdsman to repay the favor. Furthermore, in the original work, it is ridiculous for Guo Jing, mother and son, to live alone in the grassland. Even if Guo Mei is extremely talented and can survive alone on the grassland without relying on the tribe, they would have been captured and used as herder slaves long ago.

The emperor needs to have a thick face and a dark heart. Guo Jing's honest and indifferent character is destined not to become a political figure. He has to help others make money after being betrayed. He cannot survive a single round in a political struggle. Huang Rong often only plays tricks and tricks when things are about to end. She has no great wisdom at all. She has no long-term plan for doing things, no overall view, and is narrow-minded. Those who say she is Zhuge among girls are simply promoting her.

I don't know if it was because I liked Guo Jing that I accepted him as my disciple, but in the end, it turned Guo Jing into a different person. He was still the Guo Jing I once liked.

This is the best among dozens of fanfics. No rebuttal accepted

I don't know why, but I can't stand the Tang Dynasty chapter.

Why do you keep repeating paragraphs in recent chapters? Is the author driving away readers? Don't want to subscribe?

One copy has two hundred and fifty-nine chapters, which is too slow. I feel that many successful novels only have about 100 chapters in one copy.