Death's Son at Hogwarts

Seeing Chapter 7, a generation of Dark Lord wants to make amends to those who have been hurt by him. . . . . . Poison, death. . . . . .

How could the son of Death go to Hufflepuff... Whatever he thinks and how he violates the rules

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Can anyone comment? I can't see anything wrong with the writing...

Is this book a romantic drama as the main plot? Otherwise, I don't see the need for such a high proportion of love portrayals. The characters and plot are closer to those of female fans.

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The introduction is deceiving, it is slightly sweet, it is completely sugar-free No sugar can be added

It's just that there are a lot of love scenes, which makes it a bit of a drama.

I sincerely give you a suggestion. When writing about children's feelings, don't let old relatives come and go. Writing about fighting, playing small pranks on each other (not bullying like "tying a girl's hair to a chair"), and sneaking around (such as "the teacher occasionally pokes her in class") are better than kissing each other. And it has to be mutual, or the man takes the initiative and then the heroine ruthlessly suppresses the beating (I prefer this, because little Hermione doesn't have the character to play pranks). Children are too tired of kissing each other.

Damn, more than half of the first chapter is spent kissing. Am I watching Harry Potter or Liu Huangshu?

The smell of milk from a divine horse, a puppy, a kitten, how could it be any more disgusting to walk around and kiss each other?

I feel like you are more suitable for writing campus love stories, so your novels may be better.

Come on, I hope this contract can be successfully signed and will be updated continuously

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You write well! I often look twisted in bed.

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Can your update be more stable, or can it be completed?

Wait until it's finished before reading it, I'm most afraid of a story that has no ending