The Years When I Pioneered the Fairyland

If you, the author, make your readers unhappy, your subscription will also make you unhappy. Just tell me, have you really enjoyed it since it was put on the shelves? The latest two, one is a whole chapter about spell settings, and then a whole chapter about various inquiring information. I really want to support you, but you can't treat readers as fools. You talk about settings, but who told you not to talk about settings? But is the protagonist really happy? In the early stage, you and the Wei family revealed the details of your secret skills to others. What if they wanted to kill you? He ceded land to save his life and recognized his uncle. Later, he even took his young son in and taught him everything. There is also the innate Zhou Wu who wants to invite the protagonist to be a fan. If the protagonist does not agree, he will be killed by him. However, later on, the protagonist has no grudges and actually becomes a fan. . . . Readers are unhappy, it will really be obvious to subscribe

To put it bluntly, it's your fault to use magic skills when you don't have the strength. In a world like this, you still want to reform the cultivation system if you don't have the strength. The environment in this world is not in line with your line. Either you can change it after you have mastered the magic skills, or you can just live with it for now.

A good one is the golden elixir, which has a deeper magic power than the foundation building. The one who is also taught by the Supreme Heavenly Court is at least a first-grade golden elixir, holding a top-quality defensive magic weapon produced by the heavenly court. Being beaten by four great masters whose combat prowess was comparable to that of the Golden Pill, he vomited blood and almost destroyed his magic weapon. He is really the ancestor of the golden egg!

I have read the author's book and got a taste of it, the taste of petty bourgeoisie. It's like standing on the shore and directing others to rush forward. Wanting to change the world and subvert social rules, but at the same time being aloof, commanding from a remote control, and compromising with the original profit-seeking class, does it sound like a right-wing trend?

Author, the protagonist should be confused about the history of this world and why Emperor Zhenwu appears. Why is it written like a different world with different gods and gods? The appearance of familiar things in a strange world should be confusing. Even if you write later and the protagonist knows the truth, you should write it in the front instead of taking it as a default, so that the plot has the feeling of tracing the secrets of history.

I haven't ordered any of the recent chapters. The subject matter was quite good at first, but it changed after the collapse of Wen Xiang Guan. What you write about in this article is that the sect cultivates farming, so it should close its gates and seek immortality. Isn't it good to write down and deduce the exercises honestly and find out if the apprentice has to participate in worldly affairs? Why are ancient Taoist temples different from Buddhist temples? They were always built in deep mountains and old forests or high mountains, so they could practice Taoism without any interruption from people or things. Being too involved in worldly affairs not only lowered the qualifications of his only sect that cultivates immortality, but also brought him down to the level of a martial arts sect. And if you have too many miscellaneous things to do, how can you improve your strength? Is it really written as a martial arts novel about a battle breakthrough or something? Taoism always emphasizes enlightenment. If you don't have time to understand how to improve yourself, you have no strength, and your reputation and territory are empty.

The first three chapters In my previous life, I was an ordinary worker. I worked tirelessly and only liked playing games. After traveling through time, he has no martial arts skills, his master is dead, he has no background, he is devoured, and the protagonist is still confident even though the golden finger has not yet appeared: This is a very stressful start, I like it. What do you like? Like to be under great pressure and get off to a bad start, and like to be beaten to death? You like to overcome difficulties so much. What did you do in your previous life? As for being a tired worker who only likes to play games? Where is the logic? At the end of the fourth chapter, you rest and sleep to communicate with cheats, but it is estimated that many people were persuaded to quit by the protagonist Pu Xin who did not even have cheats in the first three chapters. After reading the book review, it seems there are some poisonous points. . .

After reading Chapter 26, I would like to summarize the poisonous points The protagonist Goldfinger is too complicated There is too much nonsense, and the enemies are annoying. The pretentious writing is too deliberate. It is the same as the plot of the novel ten years ago. People don't like this kind of plot these days. It may be that the author is a novice and does not have the experience of those old authors. I don't know what the poisonous points are at the end. Judging from the author's level, he can't write more than 500 chapters.

Why is the part where the Overlord comes to visit so ridiculous? Just because he could have killed you but didn't do it, you owe him a favor? He didn't actually kill the protagonist, but he did add fuel to the flames by borrowing a knife to kill someone. What a few pounds of stuff. It's good enough if you don't kill him. What kind of thinking? The biggest drawback of this book is that the author's thinking is different from ordinary people's.

You don't call this a sect cultivation stream, but a nanny dedication stream, right? Accepting a disciple is done in exchange for benefits, regardless of character or talent. He also personally helped him kill his enemies and even brought his whole family into his family. Will his seven aunts and eight aunts be accepted as disciples when the time comes?

Chapter 14 is one of the rare stupid chapters I have ever seen written. Since you have mastered the secret technique of controlling ghosts, why would you seek refuge in another martial arts school? Even donated 500 acres of farmland? The old temple master can control ghosts and suppress those who are interested. You can also control ghosts. Don't you have this strength? Even if you can use Ghost less often than the veteran viewer, others don't know it. Who dares to push a nuclear-armed country to death? As a result, he seeks refuge in the forces. This is not to tell others that he is not good enough and come and attack me. I killed someone before and it was all in vain in an instant. I have never seen such a stupid person.

Not to mention the cliche plot, the protagonist is very arrogant and arrogant. As a result, he has no abilities and has to rely on cheats. When there are no cheats, he is extremely brainless, as if he has become a human being after time travel. This character is really disgusting. Then there is very little logic. Baisha City is in the front, and Baisha County is in the back. You are only a few chapters away. The names change back and forth, and then similar system tasks appear. The pace of the story in the back is slow, and the plot is no different from ordinary martial arts novels. It's really full of "persuading people to quit"

I saw Chapter 140 and made a few comments. I can't understand the intelligence of pig's feet at all. Obviously he is not strong yet, and the people around him are still weak. Just "broadcast" your own secrets. - It's like, you're rich. But when others come to steal or rob, you give back the red envelope? Just like in the modern "charity" and giving out red envelopes, you won't specifically "take care" of those who even steal it, right? This is not generous, this is stupid!

It's a good book, but the colloquialisms are a bit too harsh. Every time I see words like okay, so, etc., It's a little weird 😅

The protagonist of the skills modified by Goldfinger can also optimize himself, and the system of Goldfinger's evaluation of the useless system can still find the good points. Why would Goldfinger be needed if the protagonist is so powerful? It would be over if he just uninstalls it. The writing is also procrastinating and useless nonsense is pushed out. It is not the kind of courage that can't be stopped by practicing junior disciple's courage to sacrifice an old servant with whom he has a close relationship.

The Wei family took advantage of the situation and robbed them. It would be considered generous not to deal with them. They also accepted them as their disciples and handed over everything. This made the readers very uncomfortable and held their breath. No wonder no one read it.

After reading the first eight chapters, it seems that the protagonist is practicing immortality and martial arts, and there are some evil spirits. It feels messy, but these are not the focus. After reading the novel for so many years, when writing novels, the authors of major websites will slowly narrate the background of the novel through dialogue, or slowly outline it as the plot progresses. Yes, but the author's first eight chapters are all about the protagonist's immersive self-narration. The sense of immersion is really poor. It feels like reading a classical Chinese novel. No matter how good the author is, he can't read it. After all, readers can't always read a novel and stare at it word by word like reading a classical Chinese novel. The author should improve it later.

The first two hundred chapters are okay, but later on it feels like the protagonist is like a floor tile, anyone can step on it, and occasionally he slips and falls, and they just slap their butts and leave without thinking of revenge or anything like that. It makes me feel aggrieved just looking at it. If you want to establish an Immortal Sect to improve your strength, what kind of strength do you have if you put the Immortal Slaughter Palace there? Keep him for the New Year?

After reading Chapter 200, I decided to abandon the book. Why did I switch from the arena to the battlefield? There's something wrong with your behavior. You don't jump and ignore you. In three or four years, you went from being robbed of your foundation to the number one sect in the county, from being coerced into joining the war as one of the main forces, to fighting as a master. In just two years, you are not even thirty years old. Ba Zong, you have already given this name. I feel that Ba Zong has no brains and does not see how he is domineering at all. If it were me, I would be polite first and then use force. If I can't absorb it, I'll kill you directly. Otherwise, why don't I wait for you to come and stir up trouble for me? A martial arts master who is less than 30 years old, I will not recruit you into my sect, nor will I beat you to death at once. I will arrange for someone to give you eye drops (Wanxiang), for fear that you will turn around and stop me. You have no objection to me, right? Change its name to Yin Zong, really.

After reading the whole book, I only have one feeling. This protagonist is really frustrated. I am threatened every day. After the plot of Evil Way is over, will there be a stronger character to threaten the protagonist?

Oh, damn, this unforgettable feeling is a bit like the "Human Emperor" back then

The author belittles martial arts in various ways, but in the end he is a fellow Immortal Martial Arts practitioner. The protagonist can't beat the grandmaster with foundation building, and the golden elixir can't beat the grand master. You are really invincible. The master is so rough that the imperial spirit can only fight according to the advanced skills of Tianmen. The protagonist is just a clown trying to gain fame🤡

It's good-looking (○｀ε´○). Come on, the author will try to write 3 million words.

Highly recommended! This book "Golden Finger" has new ideas, smooth writing, compact plot, and the IQ of the supporting characters is also online. If you keep it up, it will become popular

I don't understand. If you have magic power, you can easily kill people with exorcism? Why go to the trouble of fighting hand to hand? Moreover, the protagonist always has a sense of superiority and views everyone as out of place. It's hard to empathize

I don't know what to say, but I just feel that the author's book is pretty good. You can take the time to look at it

Unlucky, I thought it was over, but I didn't expect it was a eunuch! Originally, I reluctantly read it for the sake of my previous novel "The Years I Created the Ancient Heaven". When I saw a book recommendation chapter, I thought it was finished. I didn't expect that it was the eunuch author who recommended the book... That's all. I will stay away from your works in the future. I don't believe in your character anymore. For this eunuch work, I just want to say that the text is wrong - what I wanted to read was a farming novel, but the author gave me an upgrade. I wanted to see the protagonist becoming domineering and boundless, but the protagonist had no choice but to survive by chance... The plot of the novel is that the protagonist is suppressed by foreign enemies when he rises slightly, and then unexpectedly rises again by external enemies. The continuous accidents leave the protagonist with little time to develop. I only feel that the author keeps suppressing the protagonist's combat power... No wonder the novel's rating is so low! ! The protagonist's character is good, but it is not suitable for development. He always writes the protagonist cautiously, but it is of no use. The author always makes him careless and loses his enemies, and then continues to suppress the protagonist. The villains suppress the protagonist, and then the protagonist always puts the overall situation first or is busy and forgets as an excuse, and then forgives💚 or handles the next offense... The inheritance of the heaven is so powerful, but in the end, it always fails to defeat the natives. The developed combat power system... Merit is so important, but it turns out that the protagonist can only get rewards, instead of earning them himself... And to open up the fairyland, I only see the protagonist's helplessness in upgrading the combat power, and then constantly changing maps. ! ! ! Never seen again! Considering the character of the current author who has already written three novels, you should change your pen name. Unfortunately, those book friends who fall into the trap of reading your works are also unlucky! !

It's a pretty good seedling🌱🌱

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