The Secret Garden of the Dandelion Troupe

I haven't seen this novel title for a long, long time. It's been about 10 years. Ever since Shocking Advertisement came out, I haven't seen such a casual and refreshing name for a long time.

It was a masterpiece in the early stage, so I went straight to the subscription chapter and bought it all in one go. However, in the middle stage, there were private goods, self-admiration and poisonous points that should have been mentioned in one go. As a result, the author insisted on occupying a long space. The main plot progressed slowly, and I really couldn't stand it here. In fact, the writing and ideas are very good. If you refine it, you will be a master. The supporting characters are also there, but it is acceptable if there are not many. Overall, I can accept it. Anyway, I bought it all, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage.

My recent writings have the style of a ninth lady. She supports the women around her to find wild men. She is about to have sex. When will the abuse be arranged?

Even though this title was in the introduction, I clicked on it right away.

Halfway through the movie, I was thinking, except for the protagonist's cousin, why do these women dance in front of the protagonist and keep their hands out at every turn? He threatens you at every turn, but the protagonist still gets used to it?

There are problems with the recent chapters. Why does Tricia dare to covet the fragments? Why hasn't the wandering witch reacted to her dancing face? Why was Tricia not punished when a stranger dared to ask someone to steal something? There is no punishment for adventurers hitting adventurers. A bunch of witches are robbing things and putting combat units next to them. Why call the police? I don't come to Akaishi to spend money.

Taking so many chapters to write about something that is easy to kill is just a waste of time and it looks awkward.

I suggest the author delete the second to last paragraph of the introduction. I think more people will read it.

Advantages: The plot is coherent, the logic is smooth, the content is rich, and the ideas are clear Disadvantages: repetitive and verbose, likes to preach (I saw some book friends say it is mixed with private information), random settings, boring later Evaluation: Worth reading

Hey, I've stuffed a lot of private stuff in the last few pictures, so let's keep it up first.

Will there be a plot in the future where Icarus falls in love with another man? It has been mentioned many times between the lines. At first I didn't care about falling in love, but now I'm young and have to dump a few men. Will the Icarus who has given birth to other people's children be considered a good Icarus?

I finished reading it during the limited exemption, so I threw away my monthly pass to prevent it from being used for free. It is a purely enjoyable article, with a complete world view, a clear power system, and some errors and omissions that do not affect the whole. The male protagonist is in the harem, and the killing is decisive. A small problem is that the author likes to bring in private goods, and his thoughts are quite extreme. The article is occasionally mixed with swear words. It is a good thing for me. It is worth reading if you want to see adventures in other worlds.

When did the author send the protagonist Goldfinger away? Are you planning to have a Mr. Raymond plot?

Did the author consider understanding the plot of God or Girls Frontline 2 before writing this book?

The world view and setting are quite interesting, but the last few chapters feel very problematic, too coy and unpleasant. Although he is obviously very powerful, he says he is too lazy to deal with family affairs, but he can't even deal with his magic being stolen.

The writing is really good, but the plot arrangement is really confusing.

Is this ancient hoax really necessary? I don't see it having any impact on the plot. It's unlikely that this is the protagonist CP that the author wanted.

Why haven't you released a new book yet? Changed station?

Ever since I created life, I feel like the protagonist's personality has changed and it's not good-looking.

That's it

By the way, why haven't there been any new books yet? I read them every other month.

The world view and power system are well constructed. I must have my own ideas when writing the book, but it is a bit too much and long-winded. It should have discouraged many people. If it were streamlined, the results should be much better. I thought there would be a series, but it should be gone now.

I would like to ask about the endings of the female characters in the book.

It feels like the devil is around

Not enough. When can we resume four updates a day?

Come on