Roman Priest's Guide to Time Travel

I wanted to say something, but I didn't want to offend the author. I don't think I meant any harm at all, but the content is really hard to describe. . First of all, the male protagonist's name is very un-Roman, and his identity is difficult to convey. There are not many Romans with common real names, so there is no need to DIY, and the clan is also very strange. If you want to start in Spain, for example, the Sulpicius family, wouldn't it work? Of course, the Su family is still far away from the so-called Shangsanqi. A provincial priest was not a member of the Roman public service system. During this period, the Roman priesthood system roughly included the high priesthood, which was mainly responsible for divine law, the Flamen priesthood, which was mainly responsible for the gods, and then professional groups such as Vesta, Sali, Sibylline, and soothsayers. The priests in the provinces theoretically belonged to the civil institutions under the administration of Sibylline. In fact, there is no way out in the provinces these days. Otherwise, just become a soldier. It's also difficult for the heroine to be tight. She is already an old girl in Rome when she is 17-18 years old, and Roman women do not have their real names. For example, Caesar's daughter is called Julia, and his wife is Cornelia, which is equivalent to the Chinese Li family and Liu family. If there are several daughters, they can be called Claudia Prima. Claudia Prima is roughly equivalent to the Chinese Aunt Li and Li Erniang. There are also women who bring their secret family names, such as Antony's stepdaughter, Claudia Puerta, or who refer to them by their family names, such as Octavia's daughter Marchella. In short, there are no women's real names in Rome. Naming a slave girl is similar to naming your pet dog. There are many similar problems. Since I am writing about Rome, I can still pay a little attention to the details, otherwise I will just change my skin and repair the fairy tale. The contradictions in this article are also very strange. First of all, killing brothers was a very bad crime in Rome, and the financial officer quaestor was not an accountant. In fact, this word is the origin of the word quest in English. The literal translation should be interrogator. In modern English, questor represents a criminal judge and is closest to the original meaning of this Roman official. During this period, Roman quaestors were responsible for the management of the treasury, so they were usually translated as financial officers. They may indeed be responsible for collecting taxes or other tasks to assist the governor in the province, but they obviously had nothing to do with auditing accounts. And the protagonists are not officials, so what kind of accounts are they checking? Furthermore, the author does not understand the Roman provincial tax system. The Roman provinces engaged in tax farming during this period. Therefore, if you want to create conflicts, it would be more reasonable to say that the protagonist is a tax farmer, but the money is not confiscated or is corrupted, causing trouble. But tax collectors are generally not big shots. I think the character of the protagonist needs to be changed. Those born in the provinces are suitable to be looked down upon as a country bumpkin or a nouveau riche. At that time, it was relatively profitable to be a pimp, or the original aboriginal people were planned. Their ancestors had not only obtained citizenship rights, but then they were druid priests. It is recommended not to write social analysis and the like, because it is difficult to write well, and it is easy to write very naively. Rome was traditionally a small peasant country, and the so-called slave ratio cannot be explained at all.

It was a bit difficult to read the second chapter. The protagonist asked him not to hit the girl. It is understandable that everyone has compassion, but then it was very confusing when the protagonist inexplicably carried the dirty slave girl back to the bedroom, and then the slave girl washed her face to reveal her delicate appearance... The previous one was okay, and it can be said that the protagonist has some brain problems. But the latter one is not only cliché but also defies logic...

When will the Roman text be given a new background? Such a long history. Just look for a few books and they are all from the period of the Three Giants. They are all the first three giants. Let's talk about the crisis of the third century, the division of the empire, Nero, Commodus, the Five Wise Emperors. If it doesn't work, it can also be done in the era of Attila and the end of the empire.

There is another book of Romans, Jingluo is ecstatic

The author has been showing off his cleverness and jumping around repeatedly... Little does he know that he is using the perspective of God... In the case of Kara, people directly ambush you and make you disappear from the world... He does not make money and does not develop his power... If the author hadn't restricted the protagonist's death, I don't know how many times... The identity of the priest is not used well...

Again, no one fucks her. Only the protagonist realizes that the beautiful slave has tasted enough.

I just made do with it. I noticed this book when it first came out, but the word count was too few and I didn't read it. When I read the incident about the shortage of firewood for the altar from the beginning, I felt that there were a few points that were not very well written. In the beginning, the slave girl was rescued by the male protagonist. After cleaning up, she found that she was a beauty. Does this mean that you look down on the slave traders' cooking skills? But it's still a minor flaw, acceptable. In the case of the butler's betrayal, the male protagonist cut off his tail to survive, made a desperate move, and went to Rome with Caesar, looking a little embarrassed. As for the firewood incident, I personally think it is relatively bad. The hero's actions were as fierce as a tiger's, running around and making plans. As a result, the hero's attacks were neither painful nor itchy for Crassus, and it was the rich woman who solved his urgent need. This series of events made the male protagonist seem useless, and Caesar was reduced to an NPC who led the way and played no role. I hope the author can make changes in the future. Some readers and friends in the comment area said that if you say this is not good and that is not good, then what if you write it yourself. If you dine out, why not comment on it. Although it is a free chapter, the opening rewards are a bit disappointing, so how can it attract more customers in the future. The author is encouraged to continue writing. After all, this track in ancient Rome is rare anywhere, and the future is promising.

No buddy, who is that Meera? I guess you may want to bury a long-term thread, but what you wrote is incomprehensible. I have no idea what he wanted to do or what he did. The protagonist doesn't have to know, but you still have to give us readers some information, right? I'm not going to watch it before Meera is revealed, so let's just jump there.

More than ninety chapters are so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore. An airborne commander was dismissed by the Senate. The soldiers were rebelling against him. They had no interests and no loyalty. It is not humane to be unwilling to follow him? He actually thought that it was the officers who disturbed the morale of the soldiers. He pretended to be a ghost and the soldiers turned around. It was so funny. What a childish plot to come up with.

This woman is so classic in every aspect.

The last historical fantasy book I read was the mythical version of Three Kingdoms. I clicked on Roman Sacrifice simply because there was nothing else to read. It was also a bit surprising. After reading the introduction, my expectations for it were actually very low (maybe this is why people don't want to read it?), But in fact, I read it in one go and already read part of it (enjoyed). In conclusion, as a person who has a certain understanding of Rome, I still have a lot of feelings when reading this kind of high-intelligence and refreshing novel about the rebirth system (after all, I like Caesar). There is no need to say that only China is good (some comments), just read it, the novel is not just for entertainment 😅 Anyway, come on, author, I will keep reading 😆

The writing is so un-Roman. Romance dressed in Rome

You guys are too picky. To be honest, the writing is good, especially the rare ancient Rome with a little bit of extraordinary. There are very few articles like this, but the writing is okay, and there are very few who can persist in writing. Everyone who is interested, please read and cherish it.

The second picture stopped me in my tracks. It seems that I am not destined to do so.

I hope that one day I will have enough energy and money to travel around the Mediterranean starting from Troy, spreading salt at the site of Carthage, throwing dice on the banks of the Rubicon, immersing myself in the glory of Augustus at the Pantheon, feeling the breeze that once blew Tiberius on the Island of Capri, and recording the merits of Trajan Reminisce about the invincible Roman legions beside the columns, marvel at the last glory of Rome at Hagia Sophia, take a knotted rope to swing in front of the Doge's Palace in Venice, and end the trip by eating a red apple under the Theodosian wall. Don't forget to say hello to the two priests on the church wall. If you open the mysterious event group, it may still appear: After a storm, I disappeared. When I opened my eyes, I saw Romulus, Brutus, and Caesar smiling at me. Under their leadership, I stepped onto a golden chariot pulled by four white horses. I wore a dress covered with palm leaves and painted my face red, and started my own triumphal ceremony. Of course, this time no one kept saying to me behind my back: "You are still a mortal, and you will eventually die."

The plot is getting more and more boring, involved in various incidents, the protagonist has no goals of his own, it feels like he is just drifting with the flow! ! !

That heroine really gave me a headache, just like in a romance novel

Is there any supernatural power? If not, I'm not interested.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~