Two Realms: Starting from Becoming Ancestor Spirit

It's obviously a good start, but it has to draw an emotional line in the modern world. If you talk about childhood sweethearts, forget it. The main character was forty years old but was forced to be twenty years old, and he also found a depressed girl who dropped out of high school. I really don't understand whether the author is projecting his own reality into the story. I feel that the modern world and the world of ancestral spirits are written by the same author. All kinds of data are also mainly vague, dozens, hundreds, thousands. You can only have an idea in the first dozen chapters, but after a little while, you start to lose your mind. The main idea is to use as many as you have, and I won't mention how much you have to transport things. When fighting, don't ask how many you have and use them all. If you ask, it means "just enough".

You have to make your protagonist cultivate both life and life, not only practicing internal martial arts, but also practicing alchemy, and also practicing and understanding Buddhist classics such as the Tao Te Ching and the Diamond Sutra. If you really want to write about weird and spiritual things, you have to know something yourself and do more research. Even if you are not enlightened and have no understanding, you can still make up something plausible. Otherwise, you, the protagonist, will be too good. Also, who said there are no heaven, earth, humans, gods, and ghosts in this world? It can only be said that you have not been exposed to it. Since the monsters in the other world are so strange and the internal martial arts are so powerful, they must be filled with the so-called spiritual energy in the novel. Then the accumulation of cultural heritage of the high-achieving saints and sages of the three sects in the world and the power of spreading the classics are the protagonist's greatest source of strength. The power of incense contained in the belief in gods and Buddhas can only be ranked at the bottom. If Pindao planned the trajectory of the protagonist, it would be a hundred times better than yours. Haha, I'm bored and chatting tonight.

This article is a novel about becoming a god from another world. It contains rich plots such as blind dates, driving a luxury car to the countryside, returning to the village to show off wealth and shocking the villagers, selling otherworldly clothes to shock artists, and network anchors identifying jade from otherworldly and slapping them in the face.

The character of the protagonist is really stupid His work is indistinct The author's writing skills are too poor The protagonist is deliberately made to be very brainless, the plot setting is also unclear, and the logic is basically broken.

Disadvantages: The plot is long-winded, the main line is unclear, there is a harem tendency that violates the sense of morality, meaningless plot descriptions, the realistic plot is too heavy on urban literature, the plot of the different world is too trivial and intellectual, and the ancient background of the different world is very The abrupt titles of husband and wife, and the author's ability to check, delete, and edit plots are worrisome Advantages: The two chapters describing parents in the early stage are very tearful. Overall, the writing is readable, and the characters are occasionally described in a way that is not intelligent. Finally: The author doesn't seem to be writing male videos? The writing style shown so far is suitable for female videos.

Why doesn't it develop like a god? There are so many gods in modern times. Try to find a way to get yourself a god. Even if it is a ghost, it is not something that ordinary brats can bully. I thought this book was about becoming a god through incense. I was expecting it in vain. It turns out that I am using space to make money 😅

If it weren't for the new setting to attract me, I would have withdrawn the spiritual energy. . If it's still like this, you have to think about it after charging. It's too stupid. Sometimes it's very embarrassing, especially where they sell jade pendants. I wanted to return it several times. I basically skipped to read the rest. Can you give me some useful information? I just want to see how your setting makes the protagonist develop. Can you watch it if you do it like this?

Writing about the parents of the protagonist requires a strong writer's writing skills. Most online writers recommend writing the protagonist whose parents both died. Otherwise, if you don't have that level of writing and can't write well and grasp the plot of the protagonist's parents, it will be poisonous. It's better not to write

I really don't want to watch life in the real world. I found that skipping all reality will not affect the plot. The author should just delete it, Ju Shui.

I feel it is very logical. Although the information density is not very high, it is already very good. The only thing I feel bad about is that the author spends a lot of space repeating that it is good to have a daughter, and it doesn't matter if she doesn't have her own surname, it is also good. Actually, I don't really care about these things, but repeating them over and over not only proves that the author cares about this matter, but it also makes people look bored. Originally it only needed to be said a few times, but once the last word was taken care of, no one would say anything. But I kept reminding readers that this matter was important, which made me feel a little disgusted. And this disgust is combined with the protagonist's blind date. That sentence says that women should not go to the kitchen, but men. I instantly understood that in the author's mind, men have a much lower status than women. Going to the kitchen is very casual. Whether it's a man or a woman, I don't think it matters. But if a woman really thinks so psychologically, and a man agrees, it will be taken for granted. Then this man is either willing to humble himself, or he has true love. I don't know who the author is?

Some people will disappear as soon as they are raised.

What I wrote before is okay, a little bit toxic but the creativity is still good, but why just put a big one, I can't stand it 😅 Yield of one thousand dan (stone) per mu, does the author know what this means? According to ancient standards, one stone is 120 kilograms, and yours is 120,000 kilograms. When did China really have a grain yield of 120,000 kilograms per mu, I will be speechless😒

The failure was this Wednesday and July section. I left after seeing this. Can you believe that a strange woman who met for the first time would dare to take off a man's clothes and help him sew his clothes? Not to mention ancient times, modern times are so open that they would not take off someone's clothes for the first time when they meet. I want to write a male protagonist. But the writing is so bad that it can make you fall in love over time. Why are you so embarrassed and conflicted? The previous article was quite good, ugh.

The author is short and weak, and the updates are slow and annoying. Put it on the shelf, the quality is worth my money. The writing style still needs to be improved, but it's just okay. The plot and world view are original, not plagiarized, and it's quite interesting. Recommended to take a look.

The reality is too ridiculous. If it doesn't feel good, it can easily lead to poisoning. The progress in the other world is too slow, the trivial matters are too detailed, and there is a lack of great excitement.

At least there is something in each chapter. If the reader thinks that he can skip one chapter, it would be too watery.

It's too slow. At least there needs to be some progress.

The writing is pretty good, why is it a eunuch?

I almost don't read serialized novels anymore. There are too many about eunuchs, which is a waste of time and money.

Who are you, the author? This book is very good, do you want to finish it? How long has it been since this was updated? If you stop writing, let me know.

Author: Have you finished writing your book yet? How long has this been?