I Can Only Achieve Nothing and Become the Pirate King

There is a very important feature of this book that I think is awesome, and that is the language of the characters' dialogues. The way of speaking is very close to the original One Piece. You won't feel embarrassed because there are too many modern Internet memes or fantasy words, and it increases the sense of immersion in the fanfic to a certain extent.

I feel like the author is trying to foreshadow something, but the update is slow and he keeps describing the battle, especially the protagonist fighting a lion cub, slow and watery. It could have been flattened after a little trial, so it didn't require too much pen and ink, but the fight is still going on, making it uncomfortable for those of us who are chasing after more. The update itself is slow, and it has to be written with so much ink. It would be unreasonable for the author not to be scolded. After all, those readers who wait for updates every day also need to vent. Who doesn't have emotions after pulling it out for so long?

I personally feel that as long as the subject of fandom can be justified and the imagination is sufficient, it will not be boring to watch. This book has a much better look and feel than the previous one where the main character was a marine, and the power system is more mature than the previous book. In the world of One Piece, will determines the upper limit of power, but there is no conspiracy, and it is more pure and comfortable to watch. The ending can only be said to have ended when it was due, and it felt good. Don't think that later in the comic, if Raff Drew is really a thing that is bound to a fateful bloodline, then the story will not be romantic enough.

After more than 200 chapters, I feel that I am still in a good position, but the fruit development is a bit awkward. It is a bit disappointing to only use doubled bombs to destroy Marinevando, because it always feels like there are no new tricks. Personally, I feel that the real development direction of Momo Fruit is not to enlarge but to reduce... But I feel that if the protagonist can really rub a neutron star with his hands, it will be more ridiculous than Kizaru kicking out the speed of light. [Expression]

Is the author considering publishing a physical book? I buy

So far, the novel is pretty good.

But it's understandable. Since Oda's Valley of Gods chapter came out, the Navy has completely disappeared as a fig leaf for justice. However, the protagonist in the author's works is full of righteousness (Crow in the first book said that he would live out his life, but if there is a real crime, he will make that person die in an ugly way). This book is probably about overthrowing the world government and becoming the leader himself, but it doesn't matter. After all, several European countries originally made their fortunes as pirates. This also applies to the protagonist, as long as his character is decent.

All those who came to support Xianyu Juntou come out, +1

Marika

Biondetta Lily

Let me ask, why can't Shui speak out and why he is chased and bitten by some fans? It's so scary.

You can really blame the blame. There is no plot behind Pirates. How did you end the last book? Sure enough, you can only write good things seriously when you are hungry.

The Fist of the North Star, which can only kill miscellaneous soldiers, and the Momo Fruit, which is useless after eating it.

New writing and originality? I can't stand it anymore, why do these light novel authors love originality so much?•ᴗ•💧

Hurry up and finish it. Oda is starting to draw blindly now. Blackbeard has become Rocks' son. Now I don't know what kind of god-man plot Oda is going to draw. The further back Oda goes, the worse it gets when Oda stabs him in the back.

Why do you like to create something original every time the protagonist becomes more powerful? There are some characters who are inexplicably able to compete with the protagonist, and you praise them by saying that there are many strong men in the sea. Isn't this disgusting? Forget about such original characters in the early stage. If they appear later, they will be too cheap. Not only can they not be installed, but they are also off-putting.

The idea of ​​Long Chang's enlightenment is pure nonsense. The protagonist's unlucky setting has made him cover up countless times. In the final analysis, he was arrested just to add to the plot. I really don't know what this thing has to do with the protagonist. The protagonist could have used this incident to develop vigorously and even gain a foothold in the new world, but he had to be caught. The Three Pieces of Pirates fandom belongs to Yes, I must go to stir up this top

I completely don't understand why a year ago I could beat Kaido by 50 times, or even kill Kaido instantly, but now I've been beating Akainu for five days and it's still the same. The natural system is about 50-50, right? So how could Kizaru be defeated by Nika and make the protagonist as domineering as a decoration?

As a reader who has ordered the general book, I am actually looking forward to this one. After keeping it for a while, I was a little disappointed when I saw less than 400 chapters. It can be said that the character creation, original plot, and story narrative are all inferior to General. Let's talk about the failure of character design first. Ka, Xiaodi, Kuro's Will Speaker, True Revolutionary Leader, Sly, Greedy Ghost, Funny Person, Koro Kyu, Ke, Blame Man, 007 Working Saint, Luo, and Ku, Rotten Salted Fish, Navy Resort Controller, Extra Clothes, Luo. Even after 2 years, I can still roughly remember the general story of their characters. These characters all have their own shining points, whether they are funny, contrasting, or confident, and they are all positive characters. If they stand upright, they are naturally lovable characters. The characters in this book are too different. The original characters are facial makeup and the characterizations are monotonous. The descriptions of the characters are almost the same every time they appear, especially Marika, who must be smiling 70% of the time, and in order to answer how often Sagar eats. Because I don't want to write too long, I won't give specific examples. In summary, the character creation of General is more complete and the character design is more likable. It is written more like a light novel. The characters in this book have no characteristics and are not very likable. I classify it as a traditional fairy tale online novel. The original plot is a big surprise for readers. I just scanned the titles of all the original island plots and saw the final results. The reason is very simple: 1) The plot is very simple, just fighting, with a few supporting characters and a few supporting abilities, and someone in the group has learned xxx, which is very boring; 2) I don't like the characters very much, and I don't care what they have learned or grown; 3) The purpose is mostly for money, resources, and territory, just like the attribute system flow, win+++. On the other hand, the general did a good job. There are roughly three kinds of original works by General: 1) Sanction Island. Many of the sanction islands that Clow went to have suspense elements in the narrative. I will write some doubts at the beginning, and then slowly unravel the dark cruelty of the island, and finally justice will be executed. It seems to be the same routine, but the fun of reading is completely different; 2) Perfect the plot of the original characters, such as Leda returning to her hometown and Cass launching an uprising. These plots can only be supported by the lovable characters; 3) Farming plots such as resort islands. It can be said that the general will complete this work from three dimensions: story diversification, story and character creation, and story purpose. The narrative coherence of this book is also very poor, and the reason is also related to the previous two points. The protagonist Sag is chaotic and evil, so how can he convince readers and make them understand when he makes some decisions? The answer given by the author is a long paragraph of "explanatory" psychological description or third-person narration. This leads to the fact that sometimes 4,000 to 500 words in a chapter are all "explanatory" paragraphs. What's even more fatal is the "explanatory" description of combat or combat power. There are long paragraphs comparing combat power, and who lost and won, lost and won. It's like reading a fairy novel from 10 years ago, which makes people don't want to read it at all. Finally, let's talk about the farming plot which is too outrageous and affects the reading experience. I like to use my brain when reading books, and I feel uncomfortable when I see some plots that are too outrageous. For example, Gareth's tax on business is based on profits, which makes my blood pressure soar. Let's not talk about the loopholes in paying taxes based on profits. Cash transactions by foreign tourists = no bank transaction records and no company financial reports. How to report it? How to regulate? How to pay? I sold it for 100 yuan and I said I only sold it for 1 yuan. What should you do? Do you want to guess why in ancient times commercial taxes were sometimes directly calculated as a percentage of goods?

The plot of Doflamingo has been secretly changing the concept because he didn't want to touch the Straw Hats, and also included some private stuff to satirize the readers. This author knows how to be a 🐶

One chapter a day is enough to be disgusting. If you can't write anything, you have to repeat the routine of population, economy, resources, and people's hearts. How many times have you said it back and forth?

I used to be fascinated by red hair. It's ridiculous that a man with the strongest domineering color would put his hopes on others before he has grown to his limit. Now that the domineering color can be saved, I suspect that the red-haired domineering color belongs to Roger.

It's better to write about the navy. When writing about pirates, I can't grasp the rhythm. I knew it when I first read it. After getting the Momo Fruit, Sag's combat power increased exponentially. I can fight against the Four Emperors undefeated at the beginning, I can kill them after a hundred chapters, and I can directly kill them after another hundred chapters. The Pirate Apex is solved so easily, and there will definitely be nothing to write about later.

Kill Luo and Kidd and abandon them immediately. These two should not die at the hands of New Era under any circumstances 🙂

Come back, Xianyu, didn't you feel the long-lost passion when you saw Rocks' story? Let's take the brothers to charge again.

Also, although the author said that he would not describe the protagonist group too much, the writing about Luffy was full of "dog-licking" flavor. Although most of the plot two years later is related to Luffy, this description, well, it is hard to describe in one sentence.

Hahaha, looking at it, I feel like the protagonist is the heir to Rocks' will.

The writing is very good, including daily group portraits, and the author is top-notch. The only thing is that he always likes to position the Pig's Knuckle timeline as being at the same time as the Straw Hats. It feels completely unnecessary. It is not necessary to say that it is from the era of Rocks or Roger, but at least it is the same time as Shanks. Otherwise, it feels very abrupt and unqualified to rise to a high position in the same period as the Straw Hats, and miss the exchanges and competitions with many masters. I hope the author's next book will be about slowly developing from the Rocks era to farming and becoming the Yonko.

Well, it's a little watery, but. It's still very good. I was a navy first, and I was a pirate this time. The world of One Piece is really not a world where people can live. Non-allied countries, they are exploiting like crazy to become a franchise country and I don't know if they can live. If you can't afford to be a pirate, you will be wanted again, so you can only steal. Being a navy, without strength, is just cannon fodder. If you have strength, you will be a dog of the dragon people. It is a direct contract, and you can't help yourself. If you don't have strength, you will die quickly, and those with strength will die even more.

I just feel empty after watching it. When will I see such a pirate? I also want to pursue the supreme desire.