Drunken Master, Every Sip Increases Damage

This novel has the feeling of seeing an aunt in the market fussing over two cents.

1: I was disgusted by the villain's minions for too long, and I didn't express the feeling of pleasure when I counterattacked. Either find a way to counterattack and make it more fun, or spend less time being disgusted. 2: The villains are too homogeneous. In other words, the homogeneity of behavior is too serious, and the cycle of sending minions, killing minions, sending them again, the protagonist investigating, and counter-killing has been repeated. This point can actually be attributed to the first point. But I hate this way of writing, so I mention it separately. 3: Write the image of the students very abstractly. 4: There is a problem with the writing method. After all, "Return to 1999" and martial arts novels are two different genres, and this book is very similar to using the former's method to write the latter. 4: There is a problem with the rhythm. Now I have played hundreds of chapters with middle and high school students, and the map is still being rolled around with ordinary people in the city. This world is too small. It seems like you still want to write about the rebel army. How fast do you think it is appropriate to open the map in the future? It is estimated that few readers will be able to follow it. I would like to add something more. If any book friends have any questions, please leave a comment below for the author's reference.

When I first saw the introduction, I thought it was Street Fighter Jamie.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I feel like I've eaten a lot.

What are you writing about? I feel suffocated from beginning to end. Please write serious literature instead of novels.

It's written like an AI, and the plot and characters are too weird.

Why does it become more and more messy the more I write? What the hell plot. It's really boring to read a hundred chapters. No wonder it's not on the shelves yet.

Unsteady, butt wiped all the time. I couldn't wipe it clean, and I was disgusted throughout the plot. I found that all the previous chapters used blackmail, wiping, and ghost logic to advance the plot.

What does the author of the second picture think? It's already 2024 and the classroom teacher looks down on it?

Where is the ai made? It is recommended to change the AI ​​to such a bad one.

I originally wrote that there was a police officer behind the high school.

Can you make the supporting characters more normal? It feels like the supporting characters you wrote here are so abstract. It feels awkward to deliberately set off the protagonist in this way.

The novel reaches chapter 50. The writing is very serious, but the disadvantage is that if it is overdone, online novels are not traditional literature, and they are about relaxing. And I would rather have a strong protagonist than overdo it. It will make people uncomfortable to read and subscribe to it, which will be very bad. Furthermore, the protagonist has been threatened too much. I don't know if the author is good at this kind of paragraphs.

If this book was just about pretending to be a slap in the face in school, I wouldn't read it.

The supporting villains are too stereotyped and have extreme emotions. They are small characters and the school is also a waste... A bunch of them.

Just ask once, did the author read the first three chapters himself? Is this something a human being can write?

Why do you say so much? Does it look good to me? The content is quite novel and not too cliche, and the writing is up to standard.

This book is weird. I've read Chapter 120. The summary is contradictory, but it's above. The plot of the book is old-school, but the setting is very new. For example, meeting an old man who has tied himself up in a cocoon becomes the protagonist's legs and background. This is an old-school plot, but the protagonist is taught his own method, which is still unfinished. Alas, it is really novel. The protagonist's handling of some black details is extremely rough, but the opponent cannot detect it. This is not a detail, but some martial arts settings, public law principles, and even the protagonist's control of the psychology of each character and the dealings of forces in the book are very detailed. So this book is very good. I listened to the book first and then read it. I found the latest chapter 119, which left me a little unfinished. It's still good to watch. Those who have read online for a longer time will have a better understanding of it, because some of the old-school plots may make newcomers think they are stupid, but unexpectedly they still have some memories for me hahahahahaha

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Thank you to the author for the wonderful writing. Don't pay attention to what those people say