Heavenly Deliverance: from Apprentice to Lord

This book is so bland that it's a bit boring. It has potential, but I don't have the desire to follow it. I'm looking forward to the next book.

Brothers, Kingdom of Heaven 2 is coming soon. Have your wallet ready. The Blademaster of Kutenberg, savior of the bathhouse girls, is returning.

In fact, the easiest way for common people in the Middle Ages to progress was to seduce rich and powerful noble widows.

Author, your economy has collapsed 1 gold = 10 silver = 100 Groschen You can get 1.5 Gold for a task, and then get rid of the 5 silver for dinner. How much do you think you have left? It is strongly recommended to add another monetary unit lower than Groschen.

Author, your writing is a bit too slow. It consumes the readers' patience very much. When will we see the rise of the protagonist? Every time I see you reading the top three, I feel anxious for you.

Basically every chapter predicts the future! I can't stand it 😭 Author, what are you doing? Revise and delete all these statements that predict the future! Not only does it not affect viewing, but it greatly improves the quality of the entire book! Clearly a well-written book. But because he frequently predicts the future, it makes people unbearable!

To be honest, I think it's okay, but no one likes little people in this era, you have to come up with some heroic epics write the handsome side of the male protagonist, the kind with explosive personality

I watched Kingdom Deliverance, but the writing was too streamlined and the story was stilted. I hope it can be written well. Maybe I can take advantage of it when the second part is released.

The writing is okay, as is the plot, which may be bland for those who often read cool novels. At the same time, there are no systematic cheats or other routines. It prefers a real mortal flow, and there are no writing routines. The audience tends to be readers who have played Kingdom Salvation and are patient enough to live in the ordinary world.

I'm more curious about how to become a lord. At that time, great emphasis was placed on bloodline and origin, and opportunities would not be left to civilians. In reality, it was very rare to be promoted to a knight through military exploits. Does the protagonist have the talent of a warrior?

It's better to delete the three words "Medieval".

Can't the chapter names be the same? They repeat from 1 to 36. There is no sense of expectation at all.

It's probably gone. It's okay to sum up the experience. The next one will be better. You just wrote it too slowly. Not attracting people

In fact, the author writes well, but I don't know if this is his first time writing a book. The plot advances too slowly, and it cannot be said to be slow. Some of the content is unnecessary, such as a chapter about cooking in Bohemia.

The writing is pretty good, I just wish the author could pace it a little faster. The writing is a little more exciting and a little more contradictory. Mainly because I have seen books that had too few people and ended up in vain 😊

So far it seems okay, I really like this kind of story about a little person

What a book, what a book. The third chapter made my eyes light up. I like novels with realistic details. Only then can I feel like I am watching a world. The reason why Big Cousin 2 is so popular is because the details in the game industry are unmatched by other games.

No heroine? Then this is really boring

What's going on? Does anyone know? What's going on?

At that time, I was quite sorry that the author had G. Kingdom Come 2 is so fun, with numerous NPCs, side quests, and a high degree of freedom in options. If we really wanted to write about the Trosky and Kutenberg regions, there would be plenty to write about.

Is this another pigeon? Quite pretty